NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 47-CHAPTER 52, TSR for 53 UPD

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selvi1275

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Posted: 6 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Ch.52. The Prison Fort.

'Maids and slaves who have no use in the royal harem, stay here...' was what she was told. That and the fact that the largest room in the top floor was where a couple of notable women had spent their last days on Earth. 'Ma Bhavani...'
Her failing vision was reliant on her instincts to keep her poise while she was being escorted towards the tall building on the left. But Heera needed no special powers to sense that she was the sole object of hundreds of ominous stares and murmurs.
Little wonder then that the unfamiliar grounds of the Imperial Fort felt as unwelcoming as a haunted ruin site.

>>>>>>Superb...Periyamma... 👍🏼

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 52.

Haikus:
1.
Chapter fifty two
Not for tender heart grandma
Certified M A..😲

2.
Forty accomplished
What will the Shehzaade do?
Ten lashes remain..😡

3.
Bablookutty says
After reading the chapter
Grandma had fever.. 😭

4.
Fevermeter showed
One hundred and eight degrees..
Taken to 'spital..😕

5.
B&B 'spital
Twenty four hours open
Because of update..

KK.

Bang on...Periyamma...👏👏

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selvi1275

@selvi1275

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Posted: 6 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The Daily Entertainer.

( A HBAS House newspaper for private circulation only)
Ch.Ed: Ms Karkuzhali.

News Flash..

Sporadic instances of burning the effigies of Shehzaade and his Chief Advisor have been reported at various places globally .. Our special Investigating team has been deputed to probe into the authenticity of the news, which is supposed to be the consequence of the latest developments in the historical serial HBAS..

..In Australia

..in India..

[Photos by our staff photographer..]

Good idea...Periyamma...😊

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 6 years ago

#73

Good night darling Sahibas. See you tomorrow. 🤗

Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam, Bindup, Shruthi, Manu, Selvi, Lana, Vathsy, Lavanya, Mitu, Sandy Begum, Bindu, Muskaan, Anindita, Aparna, Pallavi, Amita, Jiya,Harshu, Shagun, Jyothi, Adwi, Shivangi, Vrinda, Avika, Divi , Divya, Kanishka, Payal , Rekha, Rashmi , Namsika, Aishu, Kruthik and 6Bs. 🤗

Lashy Sahiba, have a wonderful weekend and please catch up on your sleep.🤗

You can pat yourself on the back for delivering a devastating C52 ,taking the story to new heights. A story is only as good as the reactions of the readers and you are seeing for yourself the effects of your masterstroke! 👏 ⭐️

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 6 years ago

#74

Lana, are you alright?😲😒

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Kalgi22

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+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#75

Vathsy called me just now. I'm going to meet her, tomorrow. 😳

Good night Periamma and Rose! 😳

Edited by Kalgi22 - 6 years ago

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 6 years ago

#76

Those haikus were so apt cute and perfect aunty.😆

And the burning effigies...truly the mood of the readers.

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

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Posted: 6 years ago

#77

Rosejaan, so much of swearing against the Shehzade. 😲

These are the pitfalls and shortcomings of monarchy dear. The whims and moods of the Emperor! His commands and his decisions were unquestionable. There was no opposition party to cry foul. No Arnab Goswami to scream "Bharat jaanna chahta hai...". There was no press and media to inform the public. And there was no UN to admonish them or their state. They possessed absolute and irrefutable and unasssilable powers.

It did have its benefits. No election costs. No red tapism. No unwanted and progress hindering debates. A law could be enacted and implemented in a matter of minutes. Justice served immediately. Bridges and monuments erected without being questioned or stopped midway by legal stays.

But momentary madness of the head did wreak havoc. Their anger and moodswings could destroy lives. Especially when it was their authority and power in question.

Remember Chittor? An entire fortress town inhabitants massacred because they resisted the Shahenshah too long, long enough to irk him and test his patience and raised questions on his prowess as an undisputed winner on the battlefield? That was by Akbar, the most benevolent, wise and considerate of them all. And this Shehzade was famed for his narrow mindedness and severity.

What else can one expect from him when the wicked scumbag 🤢🤬 FS hits where it would prick the Shehzade most by raising questions on his authority and powers?

Phew! It took me 6 hrs to compose myself. And i didn't want to comment till i was.😳

Edited by Sandhya.A - 6 years ago

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Shraddha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Lashy Sahiba, have a wonderful weekend and please catch up on your sleep.🤗

Will do 🤗
You can pat yourself on the back for delivering a devastating C52 ,taking the story to new heights.
Ok I will pat myself 😔
A story is only as good as the reactions of the readers and you are seeing for yourself the effects of your masterstroke! 👏 ⭐️
You write so well, Rose...👏 that too when encouraging someone...

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

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Posted: 6 years ago

#79

I am not as angry with the Shehzade as i am with the sly, thoroughly evil, unholy, vile, abominable, despicable, depraved, despicable, malicious, immoral degenerate Farooq Shaitan. 😡🤬

The Shehzade by his insanity and cruelty is only losing his most trusted aide, his shield and his thalapathy by his actions. But the old fox is attempting to gain from his slyness.

And Lashy, does he get a free pass because he is a religious head?😲

I want two roasting rods now.😈. Okay?😡

Edited by Sandhya.A - 6 years ago

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Unbeknown

@Unbeknown

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Posted: 6 years ago

#80

First of, congratulations on the new home and C52 baisas!

Second of, you shouldn't have been up so late into the early morning, Lashy. Another day of delay wouldnt cause any trouble to any of us. But really thank you for all your efforts you put in for us. No matter how many times i say, i always feel its not enough for the efforts you put in every chapter.

Third of, what have you done 😡 wasnt leather whiplash sufficient thst u had to upgrade the whip 😭 and u left him bleed to death 😭 Though we know He will not die, still its hard to read, so much pain, so much blood. And poor Heera, lamenting, and the last few lines

And this FS😡, so much for a religious head. Make sure he gets punished for his deeds 😡

Edited by Unbeknown - 6 years ago