NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 47-CHAPTER 52, TSR for 53 UPD - Page 6

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

How kind hearted you are, Chellam?! You reduced the flogging to 40 from 50. I've no words to thank you. 😭 😭 😭 Oh god bless me I want to stay sane. I'm trying to but 😭 😭 😭 Chellam, thanks your stars you're in UK.😡

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Ch.52. The Prison Fort.

'Maids and slaves who have no use in the royal harem, stay here...' was what she was told. That and the fact that the largest room in the top floor was where a couple of notable women had spent their last days on Earth. 'Ma Bhavani...'

Her failing vision was reliant on her instincts to keep her poise while she was being escorted towards the tall building on the left. But Heera needed no special powers to sense that she was the sole object of hundreds of ominous stares and murmurs.

Little wonder then that the unfamiliar grounds of the Imperial Fort felt as unwelcoming as a haunted ruin site.

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

I HAVE NO WORDS LASHY, AFTER READING THIS UPDATE, BUT THIS POEM WRITTEN BY ME, WILL TELL YOU MY STATE OF MIND

HAR BAAR TUMHARI YE KATHA MERE HRIDAY KO CHHOO KAR JAATI THHI

VISMIT HOKAR PADHTI THHI MAIN, AUR MAGAN HO KAR RAH JAATI THHI

(Every time I read your story, it touched my heart. I would read on in awe and would end up getting lost in it)

GAATHA YE VEERTA, NISHTHA KI, PREM RAS MEIN BHIGO JAATI THHI

AANSOO BHI BEHTE THHE MAGAR, EK AAS ZAROOR RAH JAATI THHI

(This tale of valor and loyalty, always managed to drench me in love. My tears would flow, but a glimmer of hope always remained)

PREM KA WO VISHAAL SWAROOP MAN KO AISE SEHLATA THHA

BHEESHAN BHOOKAMP SEHKAR BHI WO HAMARA HRIDAY BEHLATA THHA

(The beacon of love caressed my heart ever so wonderfully. He would face the fiercest of upheavals, yet please my heart)

UNKI LEELAAYEIN PREM BHARI MERE JEEVAN MEIN KHUSHIYAAN LATI THHI

UNKE HANSI KE, MILAN KE SAPNON SE, RAATEIN MERI BHAR JAATI THHI

(Their sweet acts, filled with love, brought immense joy into my life. Dreams of their laughter and togetherness filled my nights with joy)

USI HRIDAY PAR AAJ HUA HAI PRAHAAR NOKEELE CHAABUK SE

RAKT KE AANSOO NIKAL RAHE HAIN US BECHAARE PREMAL BAAHVUK SE

(It is this very heart of mine that has been whipped today with a barbed whip! My eyes bleed tears of blood and so does my loving overwhelmed heart)

PEEDA KI EK ASEEM SURANG MERE AAKHON KO DIKHTI HAI

NA KHUSHI NA HANSI NA KOI AASHA, AB BAAKI BAS EK RIKTI HAI

(My eyes are able to sense only an abyss of pain ahead. There is no joy, no smiles and no hope. All there remains is an empty space)

EK KHAALI PAN EK SANNAATA, RAH GAYA BAS YEHI BAAKI HAI

JAHAN POORE NAGAR KA KOLAAHAL THHA, AB WAHAN SIRF EKAAKI HAI

(There is a vacuum, a silence; and that's just what is now left. Where there was the din of a whole town, now there exists only loneliness)

Will come back with detailed comments later, Lashy, after I manage to read it again. Many thanks for the note that you've appended along with the chapter

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Ch.52. The Prison Fort.

'Maids and slaves who have no use in the royal harem, stay here...' was what she was told. That and the fact that the largest room in the top floor was where a couple of notable women had spent their last days on Earth. 'Ma Bhavani...'

Her failing vision was reliant on her instincts to keep her poise while she was being escorted towards the tall building on the left. But Heera needed no special powers to sense that she was the sole object of hundreds of ominous stares and murmurs.

Little wonder then that the unfamiliar grounds of the Imperial Fort felt as unwelcoming as a haunted ruin site.

Very apt pictures of the prison fort, Periyamma! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 52.

Haikus:

1.

Chapter fifty two

Not for tender heart grandma

Certified M A..😲

2.

Forty accomplished

What will the Shehzaade do?

Ten lashes remain..😡

3.

Bablookutty says

After reading the chapter

Grandma had fever.. 😭

4.

Fevermeter showed

One hundred and eight degrees..

Taken to 'spital..😕

5.

B&B 'spital

Twenty four hours open

Because of update..

KK.

Awww! Heart-tugging haikus!😭

Thank you Bablookutty and Baby'kka for sacrificing the weekend to tend the wounded hearts of the Baisas.🤗

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

what to say how to the way
Prince was trying
to fight with his own emotions.
was not so
pleasant it was very bad to see
I for minute
felt bad for him but
but that bloody Prince is fool
I can't believe it
he can be this cruel to AMK
his own men whom
he knew from so long
who was anything but stay loyal to him.
all over his life.
poor AMK I mean what the how how can that old horse can manipulate Prince again.
and he can punish him later in such. a way

😭

the tactics of AMK to get tezraz on his side
was pretty cool but that coward fellow hardly
have gut to go against that piggi I Don't
he will able to help AMK and Heera.
but i hope he could.

how on the hell on Earth
AMK gonna win against
That bloody Piggy in duel
when he got
badly injured
Because of that heartless Prince

the way those jerk gueard were
in disrespectful manner checking
Heera Bai Sai belonging and destroying
them was heart breaking the way
she react only for the gift she got by
AMK was so emotional.

I thought that's it Prince agree to it first
the way he was thinking hard I thought this
fool will not agree but thank you lashy Di
for making that jerk show some emotion.

but no you have to make me cry hard lashy
Di why in such a scary way you make AMK
suffer poor him.
damn lashy Di you are
from starting to end
making me cry allot
😭

why first Durga Bai saa
then Heera now AMK
why why just why fate
is being anything but
cruel to them. lashy
Di I can't take anymore
please show mercy on them.

you know in previous Chappy
when it AMK thought like
if I am going down then
I will take all those rascal
with me I laughed a bit
that line was like
very much funny to me
as hum toh dubenge
Sanam tumhe le ke dubenge
that bloody
khaleel piggy old horse they
should go through
if our lead are gonna
suffer more.

but now I am not sure what
gonna come.
next oh lashy I Don't
think I have patience
to wait for next damn
I shouldn't have read it.

I never thought I am this much
emotional to cry over a story
but what to say you are one of most
marvelous author.

the way you write everything
is to much to not get conncet
with character and feel for them.

I am back after long time here.
but what a turn of even happening
lot of questions already on my mind
which only you can answer by updating
next Chappy soon lashy.

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

I HAVE NO WORDS LASHY, AFTER READING THIS UPDATE, BUT THIS POEM WRITTEN BY ME, WILL TELL YOU MY STATE OF MIND

HAR BAAR TUMHARI YE KATHA MERE HRIDAY KO CHHOO KAR JAATI THHI

VISMIT HOKAR PADHTI THHI MAIN, AUR MAGAN HO KAR RAH JAATI THHI

(Every time I read your story, it touched my heart. I would read on in awe and would end up getting lost in it)

GAATHA YE VEERTA, NISHTHA KI, PREM RAS MEIN BHIGO JAATI THHI

AANSOO BHI BEHTE THHE MAGAR, EK AAS ZAROOR RAH JAATI THHI

(This tale of valor and loyalty, always managed to drench me in love. My tears would flow, but a glimmer of hope always remained)

PREM KA WO VISHAAL SWAROOP MAN KO AISE SEHLATA THHA

BHEESHAN BHOOKAMP SEHKAR BHI WO HAMARA HRIDAY BEHLATA THHA

(The beacon of love caressed my heart ever so wonderfully. He would face the fiercest of upheavals, yet please my heart)

UNKI LEELAAYEIN PREM BHARI MERE JEEVAN MEIN KHUSHIYAAN LATI THHI

UNKE HANSI KE, MILAN KE SAPNON SE, RAATEIN MERI BHAR JAATI THHI

(Their sweet acts, filled with love, brought immense joy into my life. Dreams of their laughter and togetherness filled my nights with joy)

USI HRIDAY PAR AAJ HUA HAI PRAHAAR NOKEELE CHAABUK SE

RAKT KE AANSOO NIKAL RAHE HAIN US BECHAARE PREMAL BAAHVUK SE

(It is this very heart of mine that has been whipped today with a barbed whip! My eyes bleed tears of blood and so does my loving overwhelmed heart)

PEEDA KI EK ASEEM SURANG MERE AAKHON KO DIKHTI HAI

NA KHUSHI NA HANSI NA KOI AASHA, AB BAAKI BAS EK RIKTI HAI

(My eyes are able to sense only an abyss of pain ahead. There is no joy, no smiles and no hope. All there remains is an empty space)

EK KHAALI PAN EK SANNAATA, RAH GAYA BAS YEHI BAAKI HAI

JAHAN POORE NAGAR KA KOLAAHAL THHA, AB WAHAN SIRF EKAAKI HAI

(There is a vacuum, a silence; and that's just what is now left. Where there was the din of a whole town, now there exists only loneliness)

Will come back with detailed comments later, Lashy, after I manage to read it again. Many thanks for the note that you've appended along with the chapter