NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 47-CHAPTER 52, TSR for 53 UPD - Page 5

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

😆 oh lashy Di I forget to wish
for new thread and for doing half century with two more run 😆

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Ch.52. The Prison Fort.

'Maids and slaves who have no use in the royal harem, stay here...' was what she was told. That and the fact that the largest room in the top floor was where a couple of notable women had spent their last days on Earth. 'Ma Bhavani...'

Her failing vision was reliant on her instincts to keep her poise while she was being escorted towards the tall building on the left. But Heera needed no special powers to sense that she was the sole object of hundreds of ominous stares and murmurs.

Little wonder then that the unfamiliar grounds of the Imperial Fort felt as unwelcoming as a haunted ruin site.

So beautiful.. and so haunting the painting of the prison fortress!

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

I HAVE NO WORDS LASHY, AFTER READING THIS UPDATE, BUT THIS POEM WRITTEN BY ME, WILL TELL YOU MY STATE OF MIND

Wow Lavanya... I read it first thing in the morning but wanted to get somethings out of the way before I could get to it.. 🤗

HAR BAAR TUMHARI YE KATHA MERE HRIDAY KO CHHOO KAR JAATI THHI

VISMIT HOKAR PADHTI THHI MAIN, AUR MAGAN HO KAR RAH JAATI THHI

(Every time I read your story, it touched my heart. I would read on in awe and would end up getting lost in it)

+ 😭

GAATHA YE VEERTA, NISHTHA KI, PREM RAS MEIN BHIGO JAATI THHI

AANSOO BHI BEHTE THHE MAGAR, EK AAS ZAROOR RAH JAATI THHI

(This tale of valor and loyalty, always managed to drench me in love. My tears would flow, but a glimmer of hope always remained)

Wow, Lavanya... 😭seriously come from the heart, hasn't it?👏

PREM KA WO VISHAAL SWAROOP MAN KO AISE SEHLATA THHA

BHEESHAN BHOOKAMP SEHKAR BHI WO HAMARA HRIDAY BEHLATA THHA

(The beacon of love caressed my heart ever so wonderfully. He would face the fiercest of upheavals, yet please my heart)

Here, the he refers to the tale or to AMK?

UNKI LEELAAYEIN PREM BHARI MERE JEEVAN MEIN KHUSHIYAAN LATI THHI

UNKE HANSI KE, MILAN KE SAPNON SE, RAATEIN MERI BHAR JAATI THHI

(Their sweet acts, filled with love, brought immense joy into my life. Dreams of their laughter and togetherness filled my nights with joy)

🤗

USI HRIDAY PAR AAJ HUA HAI PRAHAAR NOKEELE CHAABUK SE

RAKT KE AANSOO NIKAL RAHE HAIN US BECHAARE PREMAL BAAHVUK SE

(It is this very heart of mine that has been whipped today with a barbed whip! My eyes bleed tears of blood and so does my loving overwhelmed heart)

😭 Ufff

PEEDA KI EK ASEEM SURANG MERE AAKHON KO DIKHTI HAI

NA KHUSHI NA HANSI NA KOI AASHA, AB BAAKI BAS EK RIKTI HAI

(My eyes are able to sense only an abyss of pain ahead. There is no joy, no smiles and no hope. All there remains is an empty space)

😭

Rikti... wow never heard of that word!👏

EK KHAALI PAN EK SANNAATA, RAH GAYA BAS YEHI BAAKI HAI

JAHAN POORE NAGAR KA KOLAAHAL THHA, AB WAHAN SIRF EKAAKI HAI

(There is a vacuum, a silence; and that's just what is now left. Where there was the din of a whole town, now there exists only loneliness)

Take a bow dear lady... take a bow! 👏 Describes the fortress and the story... literally and figuratively!

Will come back with detailed comments later, Lashy, after I manage to read it again. Many thanks for the note that you've appended along with the chapter

Thank you so so so much dear... thank you from the bottom of my heart for this! 🤗

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Awww Rose 🤗 don't cry my dear...be the support to Heera that you can be now!

Now Shehzaade is the Number 1 villain in the story for me, not going to listen to any more justifications for his behaviour, dear author.

Ok

He is officially deranged , a maniac, lunatic, madman, psychopath, cuckoo, nutcase of the first degree.

Have you ever sworn this much before, Rose?

He has set himself up for his downfall with his latest demonic antics. When he took leave of his senses in the torture dungeons, he lost his standing as a revered Prince -

I know it might seem far-fetched...but insecurities make people behave in the strangest ways.. the news is littered with perfectly normal men and women who shock everyone in society when they end up committing a crime of passion/jealousy/rage etc! When that is still the case for 'normalish' people... imagine a man who's already prone to violence... a man meant to rule his enemies, appear powerful 24/7 and constantly live through death threats... Farooq Sahib's words didnt just upset the apple cart... it scorched down the entire fruit hill - his exaggerated rumours being the fear of any and EVERY man in power!

what transpired there is going to go public and I am so waiting to see him fall from grace. And don't you dare let AMK go to his aid, Lashy Sahiba.

An absolute truth as stated in your poem- this chapter has shaken the undaunted. The horrors of it written in blood on the wall.😭

Awww

It shed the blood of the man who'd given lives to many

Your promise of what is to come calms us somewhat but we need more comforting from you until C53 , author Sahiba.😭

🤗

To have us all recoiling in horror at this update means only thing- that you are a writer no one wishes to mess with. 🤗

I hope so...the silence here is quite daubtubg for me!

Lashy Sahiba, how long was this chapter? Because I took an hour to read it and it makes me wonder if it was shorter than the previous chapters.😊

Approximately 500 words lesser... also, a lot of it was flowing conversation

11300 words versus the recent ones that have been 12000😊

Thank you Rose 🤗

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 52.

Haikus:

1.

Chapter fifty two

Not for tender heart grandma

Certified M A.. 😲

Oh dear 😭 sorry Periyamma

2.

Forty accomplished

What will the Shehzaade do?

Ten lashes remain..😡

Exactly 😡 paithyakaara manushan!

3.

Bablookutty says

After reading the chapter

Grandma had fever.. 😭

Grandma we'll come there to take care of you 🤗

4.

Fevermeter showed

One hundred and eight degrees..

Taken to 'spital..😕

Hayooo

5.

B&B 'spital

Twenty four hours open

Because of update..

KK.

I shouldn't laugh, but the last one did cause me to chuckle

Originally posted by: lashy