(Chapter 3 is up)AKDHA FF: SIRF HUMARI HAIN AAP

Mavaddat

@Mavi_16_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Beautiful storyline... actually i was seeking for some heartbroken stories... thanks for the pm... but please uts a req can u be a spontaneous writer?? PLEASE BE A SPONTANEOUS WRITER PLEASEEE...

All over storyline is good eager to read further... Be a regular writer please... thanks for pm

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@old_charm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

what will jalal do now ?

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: jazzxxqueen

thank you please foreward this to yourpeers on this forum I need atleast 25 likes to continue😭😆

oye hoye baby don't worry will send it to my friends but pls one update now for me... 😃

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Jasjeet Gill

@jazzxxqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

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HEY CUTIES! I didn't get alot of likes 😭😭😭so I beg everyone of you to forward this story to your friend pleaseee. But here is a update to everyone who begged for a Chapter 2😆!

CHAPTER 2 TEASER

CAUTION IS VERY SHORT I PROMISE TO UPDATE PART 2 TOMORROW & IT WILL BE LONG I PROMISE!!!!

BUDDY ME IF YOU WANT ME TO PM U UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!

Did his ears make a mistake in listening to Jodha Begum. She couldn't possibly want a divorce from him. No his heart and brain couldn't take such a big shock in one moment and the powerful Shenshah collapsed on the floor infront of his Lady Love.

" Ky- Kya kaha apne Jodha Begum." Jalal managed to stutter out.

" Aapne sahi sunna Shenshah. Humme aapse Talaq chahiye." Jodha stated turning away. No matter the differences her and the Badshah were facing at the moment she couldn't possibly see the pain, hurt and tears in his eyes.

Don't fall weak Jalal. The Badshah taught to himself. He closed his eyes and remembered what his Khan Baba had told him. If you want something Jalal you will have to fight for it, in this cruel world you won't get everything by your wish. Jalal then mustered courage and walked over to his Begum.

"Aap humari aakon mein aake daal kar baat kijye, humari aakhon mein aake dal kar kahye ki aapko humse Talaq chahiye." Jalal told Jodha while his hands were gripping her shoulders and his eyes were searching hers for any sign of weakness.

" Hum- Hume aa- aapse ta- tal- talaq." Jodha was struggling hard to stutter out the same sentence. And how could she, seeing her Shenshah's eyes full of love she just couldn't tell him the ugly truth.

" Hum jaante hai Jodha Begum. Ki aapko humse Talaq nahi chahiye." Jalal beemed.

That's when Jodha broke down.

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Interesting teaser. Will wait for 2nd chapter. Still having problem with my like button.

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Awesome tzr
Update soon

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-
Awesome tzr
Update soon

Thanks for pm

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Jasjeet Gill

@jazzxxqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

CHAPTER 2

PLEASE FORWARD TO FRIENDS IF YOU WANT AN UPDATE ASAP! LIKES TARGET IS 20!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Did his ears make a mistake in listening to Jodha Begum. She couldn't possibly want a divorce from him. No his heart and brain couldn't take such a big shock in one moment and the powerful Shenshah collapsed on the floor infront of his Lady Love.

" Ky- Kya kaha apne Jodha Begum." Jalal managed to stutter out.

" Aapne sahi sunna Shenshah. Humme aapse Talaq chahiye." Jodha stated turning away. No matter the differences her and the Badshah were facing at the moment she couldn't possibly see the pain, hurt and tears in his eyes.

Don't fall weak Jalal. The Badshah taught to himself. He closed his eyes and remembered what his Khan Baba had told him. If you want something Jalal you will have to fight for it, in this cruel world you won't get everything by your wish. Jalal then mustered courage and walked over to his Begum.

"Aap humari aakon mein aake daal kar baat kijye, humari aakhon mein aake dal kar kahye ki aapko humse Talaq chahiye." Jalal told Jodha while his hands were gripping her shoulders and his eyes were searching hers for any sign of weakness.

" Hum- Hume aa- aapse ta- tal- talaq." Jodha was struggling hard to stutter out the same sentence. And how could she, seeing her Shenshah's eyes full of love she just couldn't tell him the ugly truth.

" Hum jaante hai Jodha Begum. Ki aapko humse Talaq nahi chahiye." Jalal beemed.

That's when Jodha broke down. She couldn't tell him how she felt. He would compleatly shut down if she did.

" Humara dum ghut ta hai yahan Shenshah. I can't continue with this relationship. Aur vaise bhi, hum sabko yeh bahanne se jaa rahe hain ki Sukanya ka vivaah hai aur hum madat keh liye jaa rahe hain." Jodha told Jalal.

" Hmmm... ek meena ki shaadi. To phir hum bhi challe gein. Humari saali ka nikaah aur hum na hoye, yeh toh koi baat nahi hoye Jodha Begum." The Badshah wore his famous smirk and walked out to gather his luggage. He new his saas and dadi saas weren't mad at him, it was just his empress." And one more this Jodha Begum, kasaam humare mohabbat ki, iss ek meena mein hum aapka dil jeet kar rahenge geh, yeh humara aapse vaada hai aur aapko pata hai ki Shenshah Jalaludian Mohommad Akbar apne baat par piche khabi nahi jaate." And with that Jalal started Hatching plans.

SKIP THE HELLOS AND BYES WE IS GOING STRAIGHT TO AMER!!!

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Mavaddat

@Mavi_16_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

U promised to give lengthy update ... it is so short one...

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maheshi

@amitaprasad

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Update is short but interesting..do not fret about likes .. when u will regularly update readers will join.. there is a fear about discontinuity of the story..u too would have experienced this..I think as a writer u should concentrate on ur passion that is writing rather than likes...loyal readers should be counted a motivationn to a writer...

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