After reading this chapter i just couldn't able to concentrate on anything ...i am feeling desperate, hurt , scared and what not.
Really?😕
I like the way you started the chapter with Muslim prayer.
Shahzada was disturbed mentally . He trust his Ustaad's...he can't effort to lose him.
True...
I know he is not a good person and he has his selfish motive also in his every action but he is different from Mahendra and Khalil.
Khan Sahib is really connected with him.
Yes the underlined is definitely true! I love the way you observe these tiny characteristics between different characters of the story... and bring them out... comparing them, outlining them..👏
Farooq sahib ...trust me first i thought he is a good adviser and loyal person towards Shahzada and he respect his Shahzada decision but but but i was so wrong .
Believe me i felt really bad .
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How can i forgot there is so many cruel people live in this world with noble face...if only we could differentiate them.
I feel disgusting towards him.
Like seriously he is just came back from holy mecca despite that he didn't knew the meaning of humanity and honesty.
Yes... because they don't know how to prioritise na... religion/power of religion is more important than people's lives... ye horrible principle pe tho bahut violence chalti hai... aaj bhi
He claim ustaad betrayed Shahzada and what does he did when his Huzoor clearly told him Ustaad's matter is very confidential.
Because he doesn't see his own decision as a betrayal - he considers it 'fair', seeing how he thinks he is doing it for the greater good! Much like how Mahendar acts... all fanatics act this way...
He knows ustaad since 10 years and he also know Ustaad value Shahzada so much but ustaad one personal decision to protect someone destroyed 10 years of trusted relationship just because he married to Hindu girl and protecting Hindu people's lives ofcourse with the blessing of Shahzada .
Just like whole Hindu community dislike Heera's decision to marry Muslim businessman but they forget that's the best decision to protect her land.
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But farooq sahib is happy to join hands with Khalil...khalil who took away girls modesty like it nothing for him.That means he is right person for him to protect their religion .
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On the other hand Mahendra who claim to protect Hindu community...happily joined hand with the same man who ruthlessly ruined modesty of the girl with whom he is going to marry.
Seriously what a sick mentality .
Yes! I think I gave modern day examples of this sort of thinking in an earlier post na..so, wouldn't go into it in detail again now...
Ofcourse Mahendra wanted to gain so much because of the information but he is going to lose also...Shahzada already wanted to keep eyes on his every action now on and he broke Khalil trust and Khalil make him pay for that.
Loool I like the way you've summarised this!😆
Khalil ...what a disgusting person he is...Ustaad's teach him good lesson when he touch heera for the first time but he didn't learned anything from that incident .
God they way he imagine heera ...seriously how can farooq sahib favour him in the name of religion .
Parnagarh...
How beautifully khan sahib dreaming about canal work.
Here he is wanted to build something which going to help two different communities and unite them forever like a big family.
God...how can destiny testing him but i know ma bhavani always support him.
I can feel the compassion for him, in your words Bindup!
Finally Azeez arrived at Parnagarh with Sayyid .
What a coincidence both Ibrahim sahib and khan sahib could feel that whatever news Azeez bring is not going to be pleasant .
Of course, they know their men na... have been doing this for long...😳
I like it when Khan Sahib first asked about Sayyid .
Khan Sahib mourning for his 8 loyal men was so touching.
(I liked this part too... also made him appear vulnerable)
His lost his 8 members from his family . ...It must took him years to trained and teach them and most important they were loyal towards him and they proved that also with their life.
For women's is easy to cry and let go of their pain but for Men's is so hard to describe their pain .
Of course... you've said it so well...
Sayyid ...thank god he is alive and reached Parnagarh safely with the help of Azeez Ofcourse .
He is guilty because he didn't reached on time but khan sahib knew he did his best.
Khan sahib words assure him.
In one thing Khan Sahib is so fortunate to have men's who put their life's for him which Mahendra and Khalil never ever able to have .
👏 You need to be good to have so many good men under you! They are, after all, representations of his tutoring.. and leadership!
God i felt like crying when Khan Sahib praying that all incidents is just coincidence but his intelligence knows there is nothing happened without the reason .
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Heera never ever thought that her one message which ask justice bring so much destruction in her love ones life ...and put hundreds people in danger .
Ofcourse it's not her fault na destiny twisted everything .
Also, the time then was completely different... aaj woh waise kabhi nahi karti na...
For the first time Ustaad feels terrible because he is now suppose to justify his loyalty infront of Shahzada himself ...he have to gain his trust back...
How painful it must be...
Ustaad knew the reality thats why he didn't want to give false hopes to heera .
Your sentence got me very emotional, Bindup... kisi ko aisi situation mein nahi honaa chaahiye!
Poor Akeera ...Just now they started to live life after going through lot but now everything is change .
Worst thing is they didn't even know that they will going to meet again or not.
I can't imagine how painfull for them...
😭 I hate such farewells
They didn't even able to comfort each other properly because they don't want their love weak their strength ...my my they way heera recall their precious movements into each other arms was so painful .
🤗 here a tight hug to you darling!
The lantern which witness their first night is broken and...at last...God Heera forgot to pray on time for Khan sahib .
I hope it didn't affect them more.
Beautiful comparison again!
'Trust is like that glass, Heera - difficult to create... delicate to balance... and irreparable once broken...' into her pupils he finally glimpsed 'ten years it took me to create that delicate trust... now when I head to the capital, I'll know how many broken pieces I'll be left picking up...'
Painful True...just imagine how much khan Sahib is hurt.
👍🏼 Impossible to even imagine..
Gone was the protective roof over Parnagarh, with the departure of the Mansabdar
Leaving her lands and people vulnerable and exposed to the elements bizarre.
Sadly, the lands and people knew not of the dark dismal cloud gathering elsewhere
Gaining momentum as it rippled closer, to bring true everyone's worst nightmare!
And along with that tempest would come the dangers of a predator,
Including the lowest of the lot that'd feast on the flesh of the weak, the vulture.
What a lines Lashy di . ...describing whole chapter .
And so painful too
Thank you da... I am glad you liked the poem... because I am no poet really 🤗
I like the three edits also.
We can imagine Shahzada and Farooq sahib .
Ofcourse Last one is best.
Love you loads da.. and thank you for being here... always... as a bolster for me... I don't know what I would do without you 🤗
