NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 41-Chapter 46 - 6th Mar - Page 8

Originally posted by: lghosh

First of all congratulations for the new thread and thank you Author Sahiba for this surprise update! Even Heera is not so secretive to her AMK the way you have been!!

Fantastic update!! 👏

Lashy why do you do this? Pal mein tola pal mein masha!!! I am happy reading away slowly taking in all the surprises and boom comes on my face the menace staring at AMK!! The hidden implied innuendoes suggesting hard times are ahead and specially for my KS!! Little facts like KS telling Mohan Banna to be beside Heera if something happens, Heera's talking about his safety and he just stated "I will be cautious', those knots tied in a special way...Heera will see that in future somewhere looking for AMK and will know he was there seeing the knots he made on something!! Little clues left here and there! 🤔

It is like you are prepping me like Heera, the way AMK prepped her through a game of chausar, you are prepping me to face the extremities, to face the troubled seas and yet urging me to sail on comforting me saying safe land is on the other side of the storm. 🤔 Apna pyayer do, paaon padti hoon, AMK ko kuch mat karna, uss pad koi kaher na aane paaye!! More than Heera I will be affected, dead and gone! 😔

Bond, a special pat on the back to Sayyid, tere Sahib mast hai re! He took good decisions then and there at that moment facing the tumultuous scenario, true soldiers of AMK! 👏 Not only he is able-bodied but has an able mind as well. He decided he needs to be safe and send the news to AMK and at the end we see him fleeing from the scene! 👍🏼 Good call! I am sure he will be fine!

The scene between Mohan Banna and Heera was very nicely done Lashy, you laid the framework for the future. And the Rajputana royalty was also brought out to the forefront! Very good response from Mohan Banna about his serving her and AMK's serving his Huzoor and how both are fighting for their justified cause and reason and loyalty! 👏

Can I fall more in love with KS?? I guess so! The way he again prepared the groundwork before revealing the truth to Heera! Kahan Mahabharat ka chausar aur kahan yehan chaupar!? Mahabharat used this game to call for destruction but here Lashy, you used this means for enlightenment! Heera was given the opportunity to gain confidence to use her brains to beat KS thus readying her to face the ugly truth about the past and to come to terms with it. It all bottles down to intentions! Loved the part about her coming to terms with the truth, how she first disbelieved the dirty truth and slowly with help of KS she journeyed back to the past to realise the truth about Kaminasa! This is what I love about AMK, his calculated step in every aspect of life! He plans it out, thinks it through and then places his steps already thinking and knowing about the consequences! A true CIO!! 👏 And Heera is walking next to him matching his every step turning out to be the perfect Begum in lifestyle, temperament and intelligence! 👍🏼 And his helping her in stepping back, holding her hands to tread back carefully, guiding her to think through her brains rather than emotionally, probing her to realise the telltale facts staring at their faces...amazingly done, Lashy! 👏

And finally Sandy re, your favourite person came into limelight after a long time!! Besharam ko woh teen teer yaad bhi hai aur phir bhi kaminapan pe uttra hai!! 😡 Let me know if you need help in layering him with burnt coals putting the barbeque sauce generously and then roasting him in hellfire! But psst, Sandy there are many contenders for baddies and many are being the 'baddy lover' prodigal baisas, so you might have to share this glory with them! 🤣

Lashy there was one point shocking, which I will not tell you anything about but will disclose in future! It just makes me believe in great minds think alike more! 😃 I literally went 😲 reading the part! Abhi mat poochho! Baad mein batayoongi!

Finally AMK's trance and fixation on her errant curl...Sigh!! I too have a couple of them, some stubborn ones who refused to listen to my command! 😉 Now I understand and know...that is why...jaane do!! 😆 Let it be my CS and my secret! 🤣

Bhabijaan, did you also learn Chaupar lessons from Mirza Sahib? So in your house who wins? Did he teach you too or are you too exhausted to learn anything? 😆 I am getting impressed by Mirza Sahib day by day!! So many qualities he had it hidden underneath his polite and modest exterior! 😉👏

You know Lashy, another interesting perspective came into the forefront which I thought much earlier when Mahendra was talking to Tejpal and held his collar and snubbed him disliking his blunt open truth! I thought why is Tejpal with this vile man! Can he be of any help in future to AMK? And it seems it can be so! 2 0r more instances I saw him sarcastically jabbing at Piggy for his alliance with Khalil. Hopefully, he becomes the Bibhishan of this epic!

And last but not the least, this guy loves his Begum so much that he is happy for his loss because she won!

Jeet na chahate hai toh har koi iss jahaan par,

Apne fateh ka kaamiyabi ki jashn dil mein samaah kar,

Par jo haar ke jeetne waale mein apna musarat dhoondte hai,

Sachha aashiq ka khitaab zindagi ussi ko dilaata hai!

(Everyone dreams of winning in this world,

With the wish of celebrating their own victory,

But who after losing finds his happiness in the winner

This life bestows the title of a true lover to them.)

Finally the unnerving planning of Royal Piggy...he is deciding to go to Shehzade directly with his piece of news. 😲 But I sincerely hope Shehzade will think 100 times before doubting AMK, before believing Piggy, the messenger had died and there is actually no proof for Piggy to provide Shehzade against AMK and Heera. It can be all made upon his part as well according to Shehzade! **Hoping with fingers crossed** _/\_

Too many thorns in AMK and Heera's life!! They are both lotuses blooming and trying to survive in the murky waters. They are pure and chaste but their environment is not and it is unavoidable for them not to get splashed in taint and dirt but nevertheless, they come out more shinning and pure and ever!

On that thought, thank you for this surprising and mesmerising update with lots of food for thought on our plate! 👏 As usual, you have aced it! You can now put away the nervous shivering man in that bolt of yours behind the vault and I will take the key and throw it away. 😃 You don't need him!! 😃 Again brilliant! 👍🏼 But I am too scared for my KS now!! But have big faith in you hoping AMK will be fine and sound and will bring everyone out of misery and trouble. 😃He is the Man who will set everything right! 😃

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Congratulations for the new thread, Baisas! 😃

Wow, thanks for the lovely surprise, di..🤗 You've done a brilliant job, as always! 👏 There are so many things in this update that prove,yet again, what an outstanding writer you are! 👏👏

So much has happened in this. The thing we have been dreading too has happened..I know it's inevitable for the story to take an interesting turn and for the real battle to begin. But I was hoping against hope that the messenger would pass away before revealing his message!

Things are gonna be more intriguing here on. We'll get to see Mr & Mrs Ustaad Sahib in one team against the cunning foxes!

Felt bad for Heera when she was recollecting those gruesome moments. Firstly, she wasn't ready to believe swine had a role in her jiji's death. It's not surprising, though..swine has been quite successful in portraying himself as a true Rajput..if Heera had felt so difficult to believe this, I'm sure Parnagarhis would find it even more difficult. It's gonna be a challenging task for AMK and Heera to prove his heinous crimes.

I think it's Sayyid at the end who infiltrated the camp! It's a torture to wait for 20 days, di..this devil incarnate is surely going to be more cautious now. He wouldn't leave any stone unturned to make sure Shehzaada gets to know of Ustaad's treachery. 😡

Like Heera, I was shocked too at what Mohan Banna murdered, but it's so thoughtful of Khan Sahib to reveal his true identity to the most trustworthy soldier of Heera's clan. The conversation between Banna and baisa was wonderful. It feels natural and convincing that Mohan banna felt hatred for the Ustaad initially. Heera's fear when she listens to that and the relief later on was touching. Surely, it's not easy for her to hide such an important thing from her own people.

BTW, I loved the possessiveness for her husband's gifts!😉😆

The game of chaupar..felt like I was there watching them play..that was really fascinating! It was a wise decision of AMK to tell her the truth in this way.. Loved the entire scene so much till the game ends with Heera's victory. It's always a bliss to witness their games..be it of chaupar or words!

And lastly abt the beginning scenes.. It was indeed disturbing to imagine the situation near safe house.. They were all loyal men of AMK.Was very surprised that eight men of KS showed hell to eighty men of the Kunwar. They proved to be Ustaad's men. Feeling bad for these ppl. AMK and Heera would feel guilty na.. This is what Khan Sahib wanted to avoid, but he couldn't deny Heera's request. And even before the letter reached the safe house, situation turned worse.

Thanks for the Women's Day gift in advance ,di! 😆 Hoping for more of such gifts and surprises..😉

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

9. Best actor in the Negative role: ( Female)

Khan Sahib's Mother and Padiammi.

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Chellam there's so much I wanted to tell you.. But seriously I don't know how to tell you... 😭 I'm totally tongue-tied. Believe me it's not out of my laziness. I can't go through each and every line but I can tell you how I felt... Throughout the reading I felt the restlessness of what's going to happen next and worried about the things that gone our of their hands, felt helpless and prayed and then amazed at the way somethings went... Uffo... Really I felt all these feelings.. No doubt you're master of getting us involve in your story, forgetting the surrounding and forgetting that It's just another story... Brilliant, Chellam... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I don't know vague idea of how Chaupar playing but still I enjoyed that game as if i'm expert in that game. That's what I'm trying to tell you... You can attract us the irons like magnet and tightly hold us throughout the story. Well done, Chellam!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Though we're worrying how that messenger unknwngly ratted AKEERA's life but as I writer I think you made a very interesting and brilliant turn of events. That make us keeping in edge and thinking and worrying what's going to happen.. Uffo... You're such a shrewd!! 👏 👏 👏

Love you, Chellam!! ❤️ Thanks for everything and never ever stop writing. You're a born writer... 🤗

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Yes Periamma in posting spree today!! 👏 😆

Originally posted by: lashy

I don't know whether to call you a genius or to call myself a silly fool 😲😆... because this never even struck me! Of course... I despise these women more than I despise Mahendar!

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

C46 - An action packed Chapter !

Sayyid is in the middle of the action & what a predicament he is in. His actions display how well AMK has trained him and feel sorry along with him to witness the carnage. But his presence of mind serves him well & helps to tackle this important assignment.Even though the death of the safehouse men were a known factor for us it still felt scary to know what it's to be when you are in the spying business.

It was an anxious Heera we see testing the new concoction for Mohan Banna. She was also feeling proud about her sahib when she mentioned to him being able to flaunt the new crutches. But it was cute to see that she was not willing to share the new ivory lens with the aide. 😆 .

Mohan Banna's momentary anguish shows when he laments of what could have been avoided & then accepting AMK's reasoning. It gives Heera & us a sigh of relief. Even though the revelation of their truth takes Heera by surprise and finds herself stuck between them, she's glad Mohan Banna has accepted it. AKeera do not need any more enemies, especially within Parnagarh. Also loved it when he said both Khan Sahib & him carry the same principle of " serving their master".

In his chamber AMK studies the study lamp and ponders what his next action should be and in walks Heera and we get the cozy couples flirty interactions. Those knots on the tunic & how he uses them 👍🏼 a super sleuth he is & so is Heera for noticing the difference. With his invite for that much awaited Chaupar game you fulfilled our wish Lashy. It was an intense game & thanks for the curbside prime seats to watch it. I'd guessed Heera would win with strategy but it was more of luck at the end with AMK graciously conceding his loss with a purpose for I got the feel that he preferred that ending anyhow to convey his gruesome message. But the prize she ask's for the win brings back memories of the past .

I must mention here that AMK makes it his business to know what buttons to push when, how & where to get the results he wants even his close ones are no exception. After AMK reveals the " real enemies , Heera to her dismay astutely finds out that AMK was in his Ustaad mode all this while and once he explains his stance she reconciles with herself that this is how it will be going forward if they were to face their ruthless enemies. From their discussions it seems Kunwar Tejraj will be roped in somehow to help them out to trap the swine. Will wait & see how this will come about.

Finally we get to know what we feared all this while - that the messenger did get to the swine & now the Swine is in cloud 9 with the disclosure of Ustaad's deeds to protect Heera and it fell into his lap even without him lifting a finger. 😲 . Now all he wants is to march straight to Shehzaade. What he does realize is that to ambush 7 or 8 AMK's men he needed almost 10 times of his men to get the job done. Ustaad's shrewd calculations & speed will have to compensate for our leads to overcome this lousy swine's actions. We now know that Sayyid has given the slip & will likely be heading to Parnagarh as fast as he can go. We have to wait for the next chapter to unfurl and find out who is going to reach the capitol first or will the swine be stopped before that.

The lovely picture that you have edited gives a different feel with the change in their attire. Will keep gazing at them. The leads have teamed themselves for dual action & we await to see the duel action unfold. W&W for the next chapter !

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

No issues. Call me genius. 😆

Originally posted by: lghosh

Bond, a special pat on the back to Sayyid, tere Sahib mast hai re! He took good decisions then and there at that moment facing the tumultuous scenario, true soldiers of AMK! 👏 Not only he is able-bodied but has an able mind as well. He decided he needs to be safe and send the news to AMK and at the end we see him fleeing from the scene! 👍🏼 Good call! I am sure he will be fine!

>>Thank you,Lana Sahiba.I'll pass on your message to Sayyid!😳😆

Finally AMK's trance and fixation on her errant curl...Sigh!! I too have a couple of them, some stubborn ones who refused to listen to my command! 😉 Now I understand and know...that is why...jaane do!! 😆 Let it be my CS and my secret! 🤣

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Bhabijaan, did you also learn Chaupar lessons from Mirza Sahib? So in your house who wins? Did he teach you too or are you too exhausted to learn anything? 😆

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