New OS: A guest of the night - Page 5

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

stuti - my wonder girl...👏👏👏

>> Darlling!🤗

good amount of warning u hv given yet i could imagine only those faces...😛

>> You can imagine the faces of actor, but don't ever get confused with the characters 🤣

very sensitive topic it is & with such a title who would hv thought...this is to come !

>> Isn't the title thrilling enough? 😛

the psyche of man who has done the horrendous crime is very well portrayed here , that continuous perplexity though there was the effect of drugs on him but still the inherent fear was the main part & it could only induce the overwrought state of his .

>> Thank you so much for this analysis dear😳

i agree with medha the death befallen on them is still nowhere near to the kind they truly deserved still girls did what they could & they managed it pretty well .

>> Yes! They gave it back to them!😡

ruqs a true friend...👏👏👏

medha a real sister...👏👏👏

>> ⭐️

both remained loyal to the jodha - a departed soul , one can understand what this girl must hv meant to the above two , the anguish they must be suffering to this point & a permanent sadness .

>> Yeah! 😔😭

though u kept it short...the death part but it did give me tremors...😭

>> Death part of the girl? You know, to be honest I had thought to write a bit more... but I simply could not! It was terrifying!😭

the blood curdling thing that could happen to any girl , for which ruqs & medha mustered up enough courage for their friend & revenged . sadly when the law does not do the needful the girls hv to take up the step for the safety of their gender .

>> Really! Sometimes I feel so disgusted... Everyday in newspaper we get such news, and hardly we get to know what happened to the culprits!😡

Girls have to take up the step! But how! When!

Even the little kids are not spared nowadays!😭😭

You know I became so excited while writing, I could not concentrate in anything after this!

Originally posted by: FrankPunch

Brilliant Stuti !

Originally posted by: divyaJA

The Best OS I read till now.

Speechless seriously

Soo much emotions👏

Originally posted by: Monucute

Stuti di🤗
Well, I actually stumbled on this os and after reading this I'm glad that I did.😳
A wonderful idea with an amazing message di.
I so liked the end, where the culprit got rightfully punished. But still it's a sad reality, that many such criminals gets away from such crimes with ease due to low mentality of our society's few people.
I appreciate that you touched such a sensitive topic and did justice to it.😊

Originally posted by: Tilottamaa

Heya Vanilla ice-cream!

>> Look who is here!🤗

Read an os from you after a long while. And quite some treat it was too! I suppose this one should be a follow up to the os on an acid attack victim (it's a pity, I can't recall the name🤔)... As a carry forward for your socially relevant, reader's treat kinda tales😃

>> I miss you a lot! 😳 Yes, maybe this one is another OS on the topic of crime-against-women which I thought to pen down in my on words... However, that one had a sweet love-story along with it, that one was bright. This OS is too dark. And tougher to write as well.

Btw, the name of that one was The Beautiful Bride 😃

Spine-chilling, hair-raising narrative of revenge and heart-warming rues of the victim, a haunting nightmare and the dark and dank settings out of a macabre folklore - Jalal could've as well stood on a lonely tower of the Dracula's castle and I swear, I wouldn't have creased my brows in doubt, not once!

>> Ohh! Adwi!!🤗 That's why I missed you so much! How do you manage to write so beautifully?😃

And then, follows the creepiest qayamat of all, as the final justice This horrifying to death concept - have you read "And Then There Were None"? If not, you must. Then you'll know why this snippet had the classic Agatha Christie-an feel!

>> No I did not read... I hardly read English stories. 😔 Will read soon then. 😃

And what to say about the complement... I am too muh overwhelmed!☺️

All in all, it made such a wonderful read, you're growing as intriguingly sinister as the simian relics out of W. W. Jacob's classic, mademoiselle! 😉

>> Tell me one thing, is there any book left in this world which you never read? 🤣

I am again overwhelmed. 😃

Keep these coming,

Love

Adwitiya😉

>> Love you to the power infinity my chocolava cake😳

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti