New OS: A guest of the night

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1) This is not a love story...
2) This is not a happy story...
3) This is not going to match with the images of the names of the characters we store in our brain...
4) Don't keep any stereotypical JA fan type mentality while reading this one.

[With a trembling heart, I am going to post. Please share your feedback😃]
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The guest of the night

"Tick- tock-tick-tock-tick-tock...

The clock is ticking in its same boring pace breaking the rhythm of silence of the night. The newly married couple was in a deep sleep being mingled with the soft warmth of the comfortable bed, in the dreamy atmosphere of the peaceful, air-conditioned room. Ruqaiya's head lolling on Jalal's chest, Jalal's hand delicately protecting the bare back of Ruqaiya with gentle care and affection... as if both are mingled in each other... The peaceful, silent night being a protector of their intimate privacy, has covered the whole house with an invisible cover of aloofness...

Suddenly the peaceful silence broke. Jalal opened his eyes in a sudden shock making a strange, almost muted, groaning sound. His eyes were touched with a strange, horrible and uncertain fear, his forehead wet in sweat. He tried to fetch something in the darkness out of that reasonless fear; he felt the warm touch of Ruqaiya on his chest... Perhaps that made him remember his state, and he slowly became normal...

A dream... just a simple nightmare!

Jalal switched on the night-lamp next to the bed. Then he looked at the clock. 1 am. Ruqaiya is sleeping unconsciously. Controlling his heartbeat, Jalal passionately looked at her. His wife is so beautiful and pure... He felt a touch of peace in his heart. Slowly he planted a kiss on her sleeping lips and got up from the bed.

Jalal came out of the room and stood at the balcony after lighting a cigarette. The night seemed darker and ominous than ever. The bark of the street dogs is frequently breaking the enigmatic silence of the night. Still the night is so lonely; so frightening... While staring at the lamppost again that old fright of the nightmare started grabbing him mercilessly. The throat got dried. He felt as if someone has strangled him... as if the fire of those big eyes would burn his heart.

Those big and beautiful eyes! Who knew that those eyes could ogle such devastating fire?

He had witnessed that fire long ago... in another dark and ominous night like tonight... He has walked a long path after that night. The son of the elite and sophisticated rich family of the community Jalal, the well-established Jalal, the happy and loving husband Jalal has already moved on. The darkness of that night could not track him, could not stop his path... but don't know why, he could not forget those big fiery eyes till today... Even still now, the same scream rings in his ears... Help Help!!

HELP!!!!

Jalal came back from the world of thought instantly. The shout was real, not ringing in his ears. Really a desperate and helpless voice of a woman was crying and wailing for help, scattering the calm and content silence of the night. In a while the sound came nearer, and another sound of banging gate added with it. In curiosity, Jalal looked over the balcony, tried to see if there is someone. Yes, the sound was coming from his doorsteps only...

"OPEN THE DOOR! PLEASE!

Without any reason, Jalal's throat got dried again.

"Jalal... Jalal... Jalal looked back hearing the known voice. Ruqaiya had also got up hearing the shout. She came in the balcony while arranging her saree. "Who is shouting Jalal? Go and see...

"Leave it! Jalal yawned and touched Ruqaiya's shoulder. His throat was not dry anymore. He did not take a second to become normal. He never leaves any chance to prove himself as a perfect masculine husband in front of his newly married wife. "Leave it... God knows what the actual case is... let's go.

"Strange! Ruqaiya did not go, but stared with a sting of shock in eyes. "A girl is asking for help in your doorsteps, and you here...

"What if it is a drama of any fraud? Jalal tried to show the logic.

"Okay. Ruqaiya stated in a calm voice. "You stay. I am going...

Jalal felt extremely irritated. To his wife; and to the girl who is shouting outside. Who tells the girls to go out of the house at night? Does any girl of a good family roam around out of the house at the late of this night? Who can tell if she has any bad intension? However, a newly married man cannot afford to go much against of his wife's wish. "Okay, I am going. He yawned.

Jalal got a strong jolt just after opening the door. Those fiery eyes...

"Give me way... Ruqaiya came in front of the girl and took her hand in her palms. "What happened?

The girl suddenly jumped on Ruqaiya's chest and started crying loudly. "Save me... save me... Her hands had clasped Ruqaiya's body, she was finding a dependable shelter in Ruqaiya. The girl was wearing a salwar kamiz, which had become gray in dust, and there was no dupatta. The left sleeve of the kamiz was torn, and two buttons was broken. It was very predictable to guess what happened to her and why is she so afraid.

"Come... come inside... Ruqaiya pulled her inside. Then she looked at the speechless and confused Jalal. "What are doing here? Go and see where those people are! She almost ordered in an irritated voice.

"Strange! Throwing the vapour of irritation and unwillingness on Ruqaiya's face, Jalal opened the door and got out of the house. The road was empty, not even a sign of a living being anywhere near leaving the shouting street dogs. Jalal peeped over the main gate, looked at the corners of the lane, even walked to the main road. None was there. Though, it is very much possible for a gang of boys to escape from the lane and mingle in the crowd of main road by now. Not a big deal...

However, Jalal was getting angry on Ruqaiya. Does she have any little common sense? Which girl on earth would force her husband to get out of the house at late night for a stranger girl? Ridiculous...

Jalal came inside the house. Ruqaiya had made the girl sit on the sofa. She was drinking water. She looked a bit stable now.

"None is there. Jalal announced in a disgusted voice.

"They... they fled! The girl uttered. "Thanks... thanks a...

"Come on... Ruqaiya smiled and patted on her shoulder. "Don't worry. They would not come back. Then she looked at the clock. "You need not to go out anymore. Stay here for tonight. I am giving you my dress; you go and change. I am going to make coffee.

The girl cried again. This time out of gratitude... "Thank you! Thank you so much! I have no words to thank you...

"It is our duty. If humans won't help another human in need who else would? Ruqaiya smiled affectionately. "Sit for a while.

Ruqaiya went away. Perhaps to bring towel and dress for the girl. Jalal kept on looking in shock. Is the woman mad? She is letting a completely stranger girl to stay in their house without knowing her intension?

"Excuse me...

Jalal looked at the girl. Her eyes were not inflaming anymore... but still, he felt as if he knows her...

"Thank you so much... The girl uttered in genuine gratitude.

"Yeah... Jalal tried to smile though it did not reflect. "You wait, I am just...

Ruqaiya was coming down with a fresh towel and kurti in her hand. Jalal stood in front of her and almost exploded in anger. "What do you think?? You would do whatever you want? How can you tell a stranger just to stay here? Go and tell her to leave at once!

"You can see she is in danger. How can I just tell her to leave? Ruqaiya was calm.

"I don't know anything! Jalal controlled his voice with difficulty. "I told no. No means no!

"Just think, even I could be in there in her place... Isn't it? Anyone of your family could...

"No girl of my family keeps on roaming at night in the streets to allure the guys! Understand? A girl without any character and background, and you invited her to live here tonight! Huh!

"Baas!

Jalal stared with a surprise. He never knew Ruqaiya has such a calm, dignified and yet commanding tone of rebuking someone. And he got a shock while looking at her eyes... The same inflaming, fiery eyes... from where his soft-spoken and quiet wife got this cold and chilling glare to burn his inner soul?

Ruqaiya took a single minute only to come into her normal state. "The girl works in a call center; at night shift... Tonight a gang of loafers followed her, and even tried to molest... it was her luck that she got our house in front and fled from their clutch. Else... She sighed.

The incidents seemed too known to him... Jalal did not want to remember. "Do whatever you want! He turned his face in an angry tone.

"Don't be so angry. She is not going to live with us forever. Ruqaiya smiled touching his chin affectionately. "You go to sleep. I have to stay sometime more to the girl...

Ruqaiya left to give the dresses to the girl. Jalal kept on standing. His heart was filled with equal part of disgust and fear. Along with it, a strange suspicion was peeping from the corners of his mind. He was oscillating between strange dilemmas...

And the nightmare; the vision of those big fiery eyes... Jalal understood he won't be able to sleep anymore.

"Come here... sit...

Jalal was dozing on the sofa. He opened his eyes. Ruqaiya had come in the drawing room. The girl was behind her. She has bathed and has changed her dresses. In slow pace she came closer and sat on the sofa beside Jalal. Jalal gazed at the girl. No doubt that the girl is beautiful. Beautiful and alluring. Too much beautiful and sensual than need. She looked much young at first glance; however, she is almost of Ruqaiya's age- or might be a little younger than her. The warm yellowish stylish lights of the drawing room have made her much enigmatic. There is an uncanny intoxication in the overflowing youth of her whole body, which is enough to inebriate a man, to flame fire of desire in his heart... The man inside Jalal started boiling in a strange excitement. But at the same time, that old fear- that same nightmare strangled him!

"My name is Ruqaiya. He is my husband Jalal. I did not ask your name. Ruqaiya had also sat beside the girl. She started the conversation in a friendly tone.

"My name is Jodha. The girl answered with a soft and steady smile.

Jalal shivered a little... The name is... the name is...

"Jodha Chaurasia The girl completed. Jalal felt a bit relieved. That was certainly not Chaurasia. Names can be similar. And however, what he is thinking was impossible.

"I would be in debt of you both throughout my life! I cannot imagine what could have happened today! The girl said in a slight emotional voice.

Both of them kept on talking, while Jalal kept on gazing at Jodha. The girl has a strange intoxication inside; and also a sparkle of fire along with it, which is sparking in her each and every position... She is enough to burn a man. No wonder that gang of guys...

The name is so strangely similar... Though Jalal did not remember properly; he hardly had any touch with the whole incident later when he went abroad being pressurized by father. Still the name was... And the girl also looks so known... those eyes...

"Mr. Jalal?

Jalal looked. The girl was staring at him with a mysterious smile at the corner of the lips. Jalal trembled inside without any reason. He found that smile being highly sarcastic. As if she understood everything... Jalal did not dare to see at Ruqaiya. What if she also identifies how greedily he was ogling each and every inch of that girl!

"What do you do? He asked being a gentleman, to deviate the attention.

"I work in a nearby call center. The girl said. "As you know, in this type of jobs you won't be able to maintain time properly. But today it was too late... And I got no cab. The battery of phone was dead... And then those guys started following me; I can't explain I was so horrified! She started almost shivering while recalling the terrible experience. "They even caught me... manhandled me... She gulped and tried to be steady. "I was so scared! Those goons would...

"Don't be so scared of those insects. Ruqaiya said in a very low voice, pronouncing each word very slowly. "The more you fear, they would get on you. You know what should one do with the insects if they fall on your body? Her voice sounded quite unknown to Jalal... "You must throw those away. If they won't go, you must kill them!

Jalal trembled unmindfully.

"However, Ruqaiya smiled. "Let me make some coffee for us. You both talk. She got up from the seat and went to the kitchen.

Both of them were sitting silently. The enigmatic light of the drawing room was choking the lungs of Jalal. He suddenly discovered that the girl was staring at him. He felt uncomfortable... Should he get up and go to his room now? Will it look bad?

"May I ask you something? Jodha, the girl asked all of a sudden.

"Yeah... sure. Jalal smiled.

"You were a student of AFM university right?

Jalal held himself before getting shocked. The medals and mementos he got from his university was kept in the show-case. It is not a difficult task to identify his college. "Yes. He said. "Why?

"Do you know Adham Khan? Jodha asked.

Jalal suddenly felt someone is strangulating him... "Adham... yeah... maybe... He shuttered.

How this girl knew Adham!

Adham used to be the mentor of Jalal in his college days. Starting from the addiction of cigarette, drinks, drugs to each and every sin Jalal has done in his whole life, was taught by Adham Khan only. Adham was the only son of an eminent business personality; and was extremely spoilt. The whole college used to tremble in his name. Jalal and some other friends of him were the devoted followers of Adham. Adham was a spoilt brat, but was extremely affectionate to his fellows. There was a time when their gang used to rule into the college!

God knows where Adham is now. Whether he is alive or dead... They are not in touch. All the love and bond of friendship was vanished after that particular incident.

"I know Adham Khan. Jodha was murmuring unmindfully. "Actually I too did not know... Before that incident...

"Wh...whh...which incident? Jalal could not stop himself from stammering.

The girl smiled mysteriously and ignored the question. "Do you know how he is now?

Jalal shook his head. He was not at all liking the conversation.

"He is dead. Jodha answered instead of him.

"Oh! Jalal sighed a relief.

"A sudden heart attack. Quite unexpected, you know? Jodha said in a lost voice. "None perhaps had imagined... But I think it is better. She smiled. "At least justice prevailed that way; isn't it? Else the holes in the armour of law are so large that these Adham Khans easily pass through those. She smiled a bit sarcastically. "Not even Adham... Nihaar and Manish are also dead, it seemed the girl smirked. "In the same heart attack!

Jalal kept on gulping to look smart. But he could not. He was palpating... "Wh... why... why are you telling these to me?

"You don't know? There was a sharp touch of taunt in the girl's lip. Jalal tightened his fists to stay strong.

"Their name came in a case of gang rape... A girl, just like a working girl of a poor house like me, was coming back from the office at night... and a gang of three- no no gang of four actually...

She knows! She knows! God! Why Jalal is not yet going to his bedroom! Has he lost the minimum energy of getting up? Or the mystery of this girl is still attracting him?

Ruqaiya came as a rescuer. There was a tray of coffee in his hand. "What are you talking about? She asked with an innocent smile while handing them the cups. Jalal took the coffee mug with trembling hand and gulped the whole hot coffee at a single sip. Still he did not feel relieved. A strange inflammation was burning his inner body.

"We were talking about a similar incident. Jodha said. "Almost same thing happened with a girl like me like 8-10 years ago. She also worked in a call center nearby; and at a night she was gang-raped by a small group of some college lads...

"Really? Ruqaiya exclaimed. "These nasty incidents are increasing too much! Those bugs of hell should be eliminated immediately from the world!

"But alas, in this case the convicts were never punished. All of them were the son of rich and eminent personalities; and all passed through the loopholes of law. The girl was from a poor family- they did not have enough money... and media also forgot after some days...

"So pathetic! Ruqaiya exclaimed in pain...

"They did not only rape her; they killed her pathetically... Like some beasts... Jodha's eyes were burning again... those fiery eyes... as if she herself has gone through the incident. "Not only they forced themselves on her inhumanely, but also tortured her so badly that...

Jalal did not need to hear anything... He could clearly see the darkest night of his life in front of his eyes... Adham, Manish, Nihaar and he, four of them were taking drugs together after returning from the bar at a side of the lane. It was late of the night. The intoxication had charmed up the inner beast from their human body... Four of them were wanting to do something violent... to get a soft ball of flesh to do anything they want with it... and they got...

Adham was most violent. Nihaar was a kid who was getting frightened of police... he and Manish was similar, trying hard to touch the height of Adham ignoring their fear... They hardly had seen the girl's face; the desperate shout of the girl did not enter in their ears... But he had seen a single thing; her eyes... her hurt, humiliated, burning eyes! Perhaps the most dangerous thing he has ever seen in his life!

Those eyes had come in his nightmare tonight... even after such a long time!

"You know what the irony is? The voice of the girl floated in his ears from far. "When the body of the girl was found at a side of the road no proper investigation was done. After a lot of struggle from the end of the girl's family, police took up the case seriously, and a name came in front... Two other boys were also caught... but there was another boy, whose name never came in front...

Yes... The idiot Nihaar left his bar-coupon in the crime scene. Adham and Manish was caught red-handed after the medical test. Jalal had confessed everything in fear to his father. Jalal's father sent him abroad and closed the case from his end... Adham and the others were also released; perhaps the drunker brother of the girl gave in in front of the proposal of a lot of money...

That girl's name was Jodha... Whatever her surname might be, her name was Jodha... He heard it only once through any friend; he was not sure... but he is sure now. That girl with those big, inflaming eyes was Jodha!

"Jalal? Ruqaiya touched his shoulder. "Are you not feeling well?

Yes Jalal was not feeling well. He was feeling a strange inflammation inside. He was feeling as if his whole body will explode. His head was tearing up in pain... His chest was paining intolerably... He felt as if he will faint. He could not even feel the touch of Ruqaiya...

"Jalal? Ruqaiya asked with a concern... Jalal tried to wipe out his forehead with the rest of consciousness he had. "I... I am alright... just...

"I think Mr. Jalal is having some physical problem. Jodha said from behind. Her eyes were statically looking at his eyes. Jalal was sinking... those same eyes... the same... the same...

"I am going to get the medical box. Maybe he needs medicine. A concerned Ruqaiya ran inside. Leaving Jalal alone in front of that girl.

Jalal clutched his chest and closed his eyes. But he could not... Those eyes were coming closer... those eyes did not let him to close his eyes... He kept on staring like hypnotized.

"How it feels when someone has to listen about a story of rape committed by him that to in front of wife? The girl suddenly laughed.

"You... you... Jalal tried to utter... "Who are you?

The sound of laughter scattered the sound of the night... "You don't know me? Very reasonable, understandable... When did you think me as a human? I was only a ball of flesh... I was only a hole where you people proudly penetrate your great manhood! I am born as a hole, I have to die as the hole only. You are the owner of mine; you would force anything you want, whatever you want, however you want... You would smash me, crush me, tear me apart... you are the owner of the whole woman clan. Isn't it? Mr. Jalal?

Jalal was unable to keep his eyes opened now... The girl pulled up his chin mercilessly. "You people are so proud of yourselves, isn't it? So proud of your fake manliness; only because you have that single organ which is the base of your whole existence! She started giggling. "That five inches organ is the source of your manhood... the source of your pride... the source of your existence... what if I eliminate that from you forever?

"N...n...nno...noo... Jalal tried to shout... but he could not... He fainted.

His eyes opened when a splash of water forced him to wake up. He was feeling even sicker now. In every moment he was sinking... he was feeling his whole conscience is strangling him from inside...

"You are awake? A spooky voice whispered. And Jalal found himself lying on the floor of his own study completely naked... the red dim light of the room had made the room even more ghostly...

"Don't worry Jalal... The spooky voice of Jodha whispered through his ears... She was standing in front of him, with a slight smirk in lips... those burning eyes were whipping him now...

"So...soo...sorry...

Jodha laughed. Then she took out a saw from behind. The saw belong to him only.

"It won't hurt much Jalal... She whispered... "You would get much comfortable death than Jodha...Yes Jalal... that ball of flesh which you four friends had torn apart, also had a name... Jodha...

"L...l...le...leave... m...me... Jalal uttered with a lot of difficulty...

"None would be spared Jalal! The ghostly girl whispered. "None of your friend has survived... Not even you would...

"Ru...rruu... Jalal tried to shout but only a murmur came out.

"You remember your wife now? Jodha laughed out! "Understandable. A brand new wife... you are married since only 1 month right? She giggled, "Don't worry... She will marry again.

"Ru...RU...

"What a heck! Jodha giggled. "Now you remember her so much? My goodness! Okay... I will call her for you... She shouted. "Ruqaiya!!

Ruqaiya came inside... In a very slow pace she moved towards Jalal... Jalal could only see a point... Her whole structure was getting hazy... He tried to stretch his hand blindly...

Ruqaiya came closer. Then looked at Jodha... "Give that to me. She said in a calm tone.

"Your husband, your duty... Jodha giggled!

Jalal kept on staring at Ruqaiya... she was closer, her face was visible... But she is not the one who is known by Jalal... she is someone else... someone else...

"Advanced April fool, my dear husband! Ruqaiya whispered cupping his face... "Goodbye! She murmured...

Jalal's eyes kept on gazing her speechlessly, and eventually the words of his eyes also disappeared making them completely vacant.

Ruqaiya stood up. "Gone!

"Fourth one is also gone! The girl smiled. "Good! At least now Didi's soul will have some peace! She then looked at Ruqaiya... "Thanks Ruqaiya Di. None would have helped me like you...

"What are you telling Medha. Jodha was my best friend as well. Can't I do this much for her? Ruqaiya told while unmindfully adjusting the position of Jalal's unmoving legs with her leg. "I also had taken an oath like you after the case ended... that I would finish those 4 men... Look, today the mission is completed.

"You are an exceptional actress Ruqaiya Di! This idiot did not get a scope to doubt you!

"Are you any less? So perfectly you enacted the role of Jodha's spirit! Ruqaiya smiled. "Honestly speaking, Jalal would have automatically died out of fear. I would not have to waste so many pills of Clonidines in his coffee!

"This fear acted as a stimulator over the effect of the drugs! Medha smiled. "Just like how I wanted them to die. In the fear of my Didi!

"Right! Ruqaiya smiled sadly... Then she hurried. "You escape as soon as possible. I need to arrange the crime scene properly before going back to bed. Doctor should not suspect before giving the certificate of normal death; right?

"Best of luck... Medha said.

Both of them went out of the room.

Edited by Shinning_Stuti - 7 years ago
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🥱😭ok. Thanks for warning. If its sad then i wont even dare to imagine joja. Will imagine hukkaiya and hoshiyaar😆. Just kidding😆
Edited by divyadaya13 - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyadaya13

🥱😭ok. Thanks for warning. If its sad then i wont even dare to imagine joja. Will imagine hukkaiya and hoshiyaar😆. Just kidding😆

Better you won't imagine anyone of JA. 😆 The names would pain you then
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing os Di
Really feel bad for girl
There is no safe place for girls

Thanks for the warning before
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Amazing os Di

Really feel bad for girl
There is no safe place for girls

Thanks for the warning before


Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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superb stutu superb...Image result for whistling emoji gif
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going for second read...😉😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Why did I not listen to your warning? 😭
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reply kal Pani aj rate Parle porbo nahole kal

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