New OS: A guest of the night - Page 7

Originally posted by: lashy

I haven't read the story yet... but this is just for the title

Originally posted by: neepobithi

Hello,

Kemon acho??

Stuti you are a true master at combining the five key elements that go into a great short story :

character,setting,conflict,plot and theme.

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA

Awesome OS..

I never read that much intense story...

Ja is culprit with Adham gang...

Ruk n Medha finally finish 4 culprit...

Such a knowledgeable story...

We should learn from this...

Thank for pm dear...

Btw I message u in personal but u didn't bother to reply...very bad...I ma angry with u

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

read this post today

the title than the warning both
make me curious to read and
the time I read I had no face
no character in my mind other
than the emotion of person
whom you take and the victim
struggle I I don't have words to
say how much I appreciate your
effort to take such a issue here

in this os all of them get punish
by ruk & Medha it's nice and dear.

you take many point in very short
and single post and it's commendable
dear. power and money which comes
on way of justice and crime always
a big issue not in India only in other
country as well and it's sad to see
we are getting advance in every way
we are getting powerful and modern
still we are so so back to give
justice to victim of these sinful
crime or give secure environment
to our own people anyway nice post.
dear like it keep it up do update more.

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Awesome OS Stuti..

I like ur OS with the touch of issue in the society ..

The safety of girls is zero ...Incident after incident this is happening...No matter what the Justice given...

I wish the Same would happen in real life like ur story's Climax...😭

Ur way of writing is excellent👏

Especially the wordings of Jodha about manliness and the dominance👏

The unexpected twist is nice...

U r Amazing ...