New OS: A guest of the night - Page 4

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

It made her more curious 🤣

Originally posted by: -Felicity-

I've only read in a hurry. I just wanted to know what's so sad and haunting abt it after seeing the warning! 😛

>> I knew it 🤣 🤣 You became curious!

But the story is like your one shots - the ones that bring you back to reality. Things like these are all around us, but we ignore them inside the bubble we live. You just popped that bubble and made us think of those atrocities. I'll read this again when I can, and comment properly.

>> Waiting for that auspicious day! 😳

Btw, the incident I wrote itself is a dream (maybe not a fairytale)... In reality those beasts do not get back their due so properly 🤢

PS - I can see your love for Ruqs all over this! 😉

>> Yaar I swapped the name of Ruqaiya and Jodha at the end to bring the surprise😆

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Well written...Stuti...A very dark story, but very well written...Ruqaiya, a friend of Jodha and even taking revenge for her...Surprise and wonderful...I loved it...

Even after having a wife and a beautiful one too, Jalal ogling at another woman was shocking...Some Men never change...once an animal, always one...

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

stuti - my wonder girl...👏👏👏

good amount of warning u hv given yet i could imagine only those faces...😛

very sensitive topic it is & with such a title who would hv thought...this is to come !

the psyche of man who has done the horrendous crime is very well portrayed here , that continuous perplexity though there was the effect of drugs on him but still the inherent fear was the main part & it could only induce the overwrought state of his .

i agree with medha the death befallen on them is still nowhere near to the kind they truly deserved still girls did what they could & they managed it pretty well .

ruqs a true friend...👏👏👏

medha a real sister...👏👏👏

both remained loyal to the jodha - a departed soul , one can understand what this girl must hv meant to the above two , the anguish they must be suffering to this point & a permanent sadness .

though u kept it short...the death part but it did give me tremors...😭

the blood curdling thing that could happen to any girl , for which ruqs & medha mustered up enough courage for their friend & revenged . sadly when the law does not do the needful the girls hv to take up the step for the safety of their gender .

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

thanx selvi di...😳