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Originally posted by: karkuzhali
Karkuzhali is much worried about the absence of the Baisas Adwi and Harshu..in the HBAS thread..and of course, Lashy is also missing their takes on her updates..So, Karkuzhali, with a tender heart, wants to pacify the beloved author..Adwi's take on CH 45.Dearest Author,Congrats for having successfully posted this double treat of an update. Your language and narration as gripping as ever, be it the description of the wayside travellers' inn , the murky and dirty alleyway and the revelation of the conspiracy, or the bright, lit up Parnagarh haveli and its inmates, who brought the delightful effect of a kaleidoscope - you had me clinging to the words, until the very end.The entire segment seemed to show the two prominent facets of our superb protagonist- the rough -and -tough dealing with the assassins who follow the informer, and the gentle handling of the beloved wife as a romantic husband..On one side was the role of a spy , who restlessly wants to probe into the murder of his best informer. How tactfully he deals with the informer and finds out the conspiracy between Khalil and the much hated Mahendar.. !Now it's interesting to note how the assassins with the vainglorious titles Strangler and Raftaar , who follow this informer to the inn, underestimated the 'intelligence' of the Intelligence Officer, and got killed in the act of pursuing him ..And then, on the other side is Heera - matured, lady like as ever, radiant in ecstasy, idyllic in her concern about him..It was a sheer delight to read, as you've captured every nuance of her demeanour, every line of thought crossing her mind, like a deft photographer with a favourite subject!In one instance, she's the true people's lady, the Baisa, resurrecting life into the dull livelihoods of her folks, earnestly dealing business with the Qanat.. . The very next instance, she's the love-smitten Sahiba, counting down the days ,waiting with gifts to be showered on the husband who left her a week ago.. How she cherishes his small lovely 'Thank you' note as his most valuable present, above all the costlier ones that she was recipient of!And finally what an intimate moment between them..Both physically and psychologically!He asks her.. She replies him without any hesitation or inhibition..His assurance to her that he will pay back Kunwar Mahendar..' A streak of pride flashed in the midst of her hazel depths..Not because of what he said.. But because of how he said..'What a beautiful and romantic presentation..Thank-you for the brilliant treat, author Sahiba..Adwitiya.Harshu's comments..on Ch 45.Hola friends.. m coming here after a long time..aww .. I miss u all very much..kals..manu..lashy.. kuki...am busy wid my new job and ph.d registration.. nd am busy with shani discussion thrd..takes all my time..now and den i peep into de thread and i want to say a few words abt the latest chappy.. Its xcellent👏👏👏lashy chellam.. how do you write so beautifully? specially de private chamber scene..omg!..'He's here...' Heera grew increasingly restless, as she sensed his stormy presence arriving just outside, her parched heart waiting to be drenched in his love.
And drenched in love was her parched heart a moment later, soaking up each inch of his form. His true form - not a mere vision from one of her recent dreams.
'On reaching Bansi, I learnt of my betrothal to the Kunwarsa... I could not get myself to go through with it...' her thumb brushed his palm for a few halting strokes 'the Kunwar was believed to be a noble man, still mourning over jiji's demise... I presumed he would understand... so, I talked to him... pleaded with him... but, my pleas only ended up... ended up... challenging his... his pr... pride' Her words stalled. Recounting any of it was making her shudder with unease. As it always did.👏 👏 😳😳 👍🏼 ❤️ ❤️KK.
hello aunty srry fr replying u v late😆actually did read dis mimicry post yest itself bt thru d mobile and due to sum techncl reasons i couldnt reply frm mobile and 1s i logged in thru d lappy i frgt completely😆untille bindup buzzd me up on WA and i was lik oops i hd to reply😳bt fr a sec i tght it was me who had wrttn dis comment😲😆nd dt made me wonder wen did i visit d thread last 😆nywys aunty hatsoff fr ur creativity talent ❤️u r an ocean of creativity cuming up wid diff innovations surprising all of us😳⭐️dis was truly awsum no doubt⭐️
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