NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 40-Chapter 45(2 part) 11th Feb

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 7 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: lashy

I would have to decree the order that ittar - in any form, shape or origin - remains the sole property of Pallu Sahiba!

A Daniel come to judgment.😆

Do not cry Pallu Sahiba... and do not dare try to take the crown of DQ-giri😡

Can she or for that matter anyone else?😕

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 7 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: lashy

Kalgiakka's birthday

OMG!🤣🤣 🤣🤣

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 7 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: lashy

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Sabdabhala

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Posted: 7 years ago

#135

AUTHOR SAHIBA, WHAT A MASTERPIECE 🤗

AND I AM SO SO SO LATE IN RESPONDING THAT ALMOST EVERYTHING THAT I WANTED TO SAY HAS ALWAYS BEEN SAID 😉 BUT SINCE MY VIEWS HAVE BEEN WORDED MUCH MORE ELOQUENTLY THAN WHAT I WOULD HAVE MANAGED, I AM QUITE OK 😆

BOTH PARTS WERE FANTASTIC, NO DOUBT

MY FEW POINTS ARE AS FOLLOWS -

I LOVED YOUR DECRIPTION OF THE COLD THAT THE WASHER,MAN WAS FEELING. SUPERB CHOICE OF WORDS DESCRIBING HIS FEAR, AND HIS DISCOMFORT BECAUSE OF THE WEATHER. AND AS REGARDS THE THIRD ATTACKER, I WAS QUITE SURE THAT KHAN SAHIB OR MIRZA SAHIB WOULD HAVE DEALT WITH HIM SUITABLY, SPECIALLY WHEN KHAN SAHIB HAD SPOTTED THE TRIO THEOUGH THE GLASS JAR OF THE HUKKA

I KNOW I AM REPEATING MY VIEWS AND ALSO THOSE OF OTHERS, BUT KUDOS TO MIRZA SAHIB FOR BEING SUCH A GOOD MATE FOR KHAN SAHIB. I LOVE THE WAY IN WHICH ALL HIS MEN FEEL GENUINELY HAPPY FOR THEIR USTAAD. IT SPEAKS VOLUMES ABOUT THE REGARD THAT THEY HAVE FOR HIM

THE REVELATION THAT KUNWAR MAHENDER WAS INVOLVED WITH KHALIL FROM BEFORE DURGA'S MURDER WAS NEWS TO ME 😭 BUT NOW THAT I THINK BACK I THINK SOME REFERENCES DO COME TO MIND

THE MAHENDER IN GUJARAT REFERENCE OF CHAPTER 1/2 WAS BRILLAINT 👏 YOU SERIOUSLY ARE A MASTER STORY TELLER ⭐️

HEERA'S DEALING WITH THE MUQQANNIS TOO WAS SUPERBLY DEPICTED, THIS REINFORCED YOUR VIEW DURING TE DISCUSSIONS IN THE LAST THREAD, THAT HEERA'S NIMBLE BRAIN IS CERTAINLY QUITE EXTRAORDINARY, AND MAKES UP FOR MOST OF THE PITFALLS THATS SHE FACES DUE TO HER POOR VISION

THE SCENE WITH HEERA'S MAIDS WAS DELIGHTFUL 😳 THE LETTER IN ITSELF WAS TENDER, BEAUTIFUL AND WONDROUS, OF COURSE. BUT THE REFERENCES OF HER REPEATEDLY READING IT, BLUSHING, ETC MADE ME ABLE TO IMAGINE THE ENTIRE SCENE SO VIVIDLY 😉 LOVED HER DILEMMA BETWEEN I-WANT-TO-SHARE AND BUT-I-DONT-WANT-TO-SHARE. DHANI'S BLUNT YET ACCURATE SUMMATION OF KHAN SAHIB'S ROMANTIC PROWESS WAS ADORABLE 😆 AND HEERA HIDING HER FACE IN HER PALMS WAS THE ICING ON THE CAKE 😆

ALSO NOTEWORTHY AND SUPERBLY DEPICTED WAS HOW OFTEN KHAN SAHIB NOW REFERRED TO THE HAVELI AS HIS HOME 😳 HIS 'I AM HUNGRY'COMMENT MADE ME BLUSH FURIOUSLY 😳 AND HEERA'S PLANNING FOR THEM TO SHARE A SPECIAL MEAL WAS FLAWLESS 👍🏼 IT REALLY BROKE MY HEART TO REALIZE THAT THIS WAS KHAN SAHIB'S FIRST TRYST WITH SOMETHING AS BASIC AS A LOVING HOME COOKED MEAL.

AND THE WAY SAHIB ATE THE LADDU HAD ME IN SPLITS 😆😆 THAT WHOLE SCENE WAS BEYOND SUPERB

HEERA'S CONSTANT REFERENCE TO HIS CHANGED VOICE WAS SUITABLY WIFELY AND ENDEARING 😆 NOT ONE TO MISS ANYTHING AMISS ABOUT HER SAHIB, OUR DEAR HEERA, AND I THINK YOU HANDLED THE REVELATION OF THE ATTACK AND ITS AFTERMATH VERY GRACEFULLY. BUT HER POINT THAT SHE CANNOT FIND CLOSURE IN THE CASUAL WAY THAT HE CAN, IS VERY WELL SAID

BUT THE MASTERSTROKE OF THIS CHAPTER, ACCORDING TO ME, IS THE ITTARS THAT HEERA MADE FOR HER SAHIB 👏⭐️ HOW ON EARTH COULD YOU THINK OF IT, REALLY!!!

I MIGHT HAVE SAID THIS EARLIER, THAT I THINK YOUR INTIMATE SCENES ARE A CLASS APART - VERY SUBTLE AND VERY BEAUTIFUL

WHEN I READ SUCH SCENES THAT YOU WRITE I AM OFTEN REMINDED OF THE STATUE OF THE VEILED REBECCA AT SALARJUNG MUSEUM - BEAUTY OF THE SCENE IS INTACT DESPITE THE VEIL (AND THE FIRST TIME I HAD THIS THOUGHT WHEN I READ THE NJAPA STALKER ATTACK AFTERMATH SCENE)

SO THANKS DEAR FOR TAKING US FOR YET ANOTHER PEEP INTO THEIR LIVES.

AND WITH THAT I AM MORE AND MORE AND MORE AND MORE IN LOVE WITH KHA. SAHIB ❤️

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#136

Hai hai... I'll come back to it in detail.. but Cookie ☺️

I'll write (no matter how stupid)because of its effects ...its like some sort of spell..uff..❤️

Really?

baba re

you and your baba re-s😆

But he took the revenge of my Sahib's friend's death in style😳.

I LOVED the way he went 'this is for my boy Chota Faizan'

Mirza jijasa was also there but (don't mind Rose di😆) wasn't that quick in thinking.No wonder he is the USTAAD' 😎.

Oh Ibrahim is wise too... he lets AMK take the lead both - out of respect and for the fact the man knows what he is doing. My belief is that Ibrahim would have escaped from the spot with the informer alive (if AMK hadn't come) in his own way. 😊 Or AMK wouldn't have even sent him. (Because if something happened to Ibrahim, AMK wouldn't be able to live with himself.)

Thing is, his men all have their strengths... Azeez is fast and light on his feet, great aim/throw...

Sayyid is a muscle man... dutiful... Ibrahim is wise... a planner... which is why AMK always lets him handle the admin/management... Ibrahim joined Akbar's training at a later age, right? Tougher to train one into becoming a sure-footed assassin... but he has plenty else going for him...

On that note, yes Ustaad is Ustaad!😎

What happened to the third murderer ...Did Mirza Sahib take him down?!😳

Clever Cookie... I've edited a line in the chapter to make it clearer since many had this doubt... but you understood it right!

For some reasons even I was glad Azeez wasn't there...😆😉

WHY?😲

Muqannis we know, Qanat expert..tunnels?!😕

Qanat is canal... it's there in the bilbiography😳

And the laddus guess after Heera he loves laddus😆

🤣 This was so so so so cute!!!

Last time when he came all injured with blood soaked body that didn't frighten her as much as purple mark around his neck... then, she felt sorry for him now she feels sorry for them...how times have changed for good...❤️❤️

This part needs a long reply from me!^^^

Btw,why hasn't Sayyid informed Khan Sahib yet..it has been a week since he escaped the safe house😕

Wait and watch!😈

Edited by lashy - 7 years ago

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Not even limited questions?😳

No!😆

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

With Jalal and me no pentagon rectangle triangle.😳
Only straight line from his heart to mine and vice versa.☺️

Good geometry revision going on here!🤣 Son's boards' effects?

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Who is this Daniel?😲

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First explain, then knead your forehead at buddhu Lashy!😭

It's tough Sandy... not easy, you know... there are people always vying for it!😒
Yes. How stressful!😭 Take care.😕

Thanks for understanding. I will da 😭
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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#138

Lavanya... can I give you one big jhappi?

I'm taking it Alok ji wouldn't mind!😆

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selvi1275

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Posted: 7 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: lashy

Who is this Daniel?😲

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First explain, then knead your forehead at buddhu Lashy!😭

>>>>>A Daniel come to judgement'?. Someone who makes a wise judgement about something that has previously proven difficult to resolve.

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 7 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: lashy

No!😆

Not fair 😕

Good geometry revision going on here!🤣 Son's boards' effects?

This is 1st standard geometry.😆 Incidentally i was going through his Magnetism lesson and came across the definition and derivation of magnetic dipole. it reminded me of Kalgi's interview with Dr.Akbar Khan that i had posted in wonder which thread. i think Lana was not as frequent then
Wonder what she would do if interviewed by the man in person. 😆