NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 40-Chapter 45(2 part) 11th Feb - Page 118

Good night. See you tomorrow darling Sahibas. 🤗

Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam, Bindup, Shruthi, Manu, Selvi, Lana, Vathsy,Lavanya, Mitu, Sandy Begum, Bindu,Muskaan,Anindita, Aparna, Pallavi, Amita, Jiya, Harshu, Shagun, Jyothi, Adwi, Shivangi, Vrinda, Avika, Divi , Divya , Kanishka and 6Bs. 🤗

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Goodnight Periyamma...😊

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Good night. See you tomorrow darling Sahibas. 🤗

Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam, Bindup, Shruthi, Manu, Selvi, Lana, Vathsy,Lavanya, Mitu, Sandy Begum, Bindu,Muskaan,Anindita, Aparna, Pallavi, Amita, Jiya, Harshu, Shagun, Jyothi, Adwi, Shivangi, Vrinda, Avika, Divi , Divya , Kanishka and 6Bs. 🤗

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 45.

The Story goes thus..

What a superb presentation of the events

The author gives us in detail without any pretense

The much awaited chapter deals with

His mission in chase to find out the truth

Shows his action plans as a clever intelligence officer

And a strong Ustaad, the ruthless warrior.

He tactfully assesses the presence of the killers in the inn

Who follow him, only to be killed minutes within..

He learns quickly from the informer

That the muscleman had met Kunwar Mahendar..

'Was it his intention to seek revenge on the evil man

Or was he also after the Shehenshah's Farmaan?'

With these thoughts hovering in his mind

He decides to probe further into it to find

The motive of the Prince with proper evidence

Outlining his plans to his mate with diligence..

Reading his 'Thank you' note several times a day

She is in a joyous mood among her maids so to say

It is a treat to read how the author has penned the scene

The lovely conversation with her maids who are so keen..

'They dropped to the floor like a pile of autumn leaves..!'

What lovely similes she has up in her sleeve!

She receives the message that he is returning home

She gets ready to receive her husband, the most handsome!

They share some sweet moments between them

In the privacy of their chamber , the house of their dream

He enjoys the luxury of life he never had before

Devouring the food served by his wife , the dishes galore

He makes up his mind and asks her about the kunwar

She reveals everything about him as her answer

'His look made me want to wrap my veil five times over..'

' The prince will regret the way he treated you' utters her lover..

Elsewhere the secret messenger escapes from the safe house

The Mansabdar in Parnagarh is yet to receive the news

Will he go and meet the Kunwar as per his plans?

Or will his mission be thwarted by the Ustaad's strong hands?

The answers are with our wonderful author

Who stands to comparison to no one whosoever

Like what Heera says about Akbar's apetite

Let any evil eye on her be warded off straight!

Karkuzhali.

Thanking you Patti for all the poems (the pics ☺️),Babloo kutty comments on c-45,cute and entertaining (🤣) ,Musings ,Tamil song,The Daily entertainer kiddies corner👏,Limaricks⭐️ Thank you for everything 🤗

Originally posted by: lghosh

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Aur Jiya ke khubsurat nazm ka bhi ek alag sa falsafaa hai jo dil ko chhoon jaaye aur rooh ko ek sukoon de jaaye!!

Dil ko samet kar ek halka ehsaas ki chahat,

Mohabbat mein lapetkar ek chhota sa aahat!

Jo zameen mein rahekar aasmaan ko paaye,

Baahon mein thaam kar uss Chaand ko laaye,

Uss ishq ka saahil mein doob kar kho jaaye,

Aur do rooh ek ho kar ban jaaye apne saaye,

Maikhaane ka nasha inn lamho mein paane do,

Aisi ishq ko paa kar yeh zindagi mukammal ho!!

Originally posted by: lashy

I was holding on his rough hand
as if reading the map of his journey
I was listening to the sounds of his breath

as if hearing the words of an untold story

I was looking inside his vivid eyes

that led me to a world of unknown glory

I quietly sought his warmth
and he granted my wish gently
whilst covering me like blanket
his perfume lingering until I fell asleep blissfully.

Edited*

Just perfect for them

Originally posted by: lashy

And yet Jiya, I can sense the pulse, the regard and the attachment you have for the characters and the story...

Manu doesn't go into detail expressing her emotions about the story either. Yet, I can feel the same about her... 😳

Sometimes even before posting a chapter, I can sense which of my close readers would like which part too... like I knew Periyamma would have an affinity for the 'autumn leaf' comparison and I had a smile when she mentioned specifically that in her story so far... and I knew Lana would like the 'mellow smile' description... it just happens with time... 😳

Good Morning Periyamma & the East...

Good Night West 🤗

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Ninnaiye rathi yendru ninakirenadi-Kannamma,

Thannaye sasi yendru saranam eithinen.

Ponnaye nigartha meni, minnaye nigartha chyal,

Pinnaye , nithya kanniye , Kannamma

Maran anbugal yen meethu vari vari veesa nee-kan,

Paraayo, Vandhu cheraayo, Kannamma

Yavume suka munivarkku or eesanaa menakku un thotham,

Mevume, ingu yavume kannamma.

Translation:

Oh Kannamma, for me you are the very pretty Rathi,

You are the moon and I surrender to you.

With your body like gold and looks like the lightning,

Oh Goddess Lakshmi, Oh the maiden forever , Oh Kannamma

The Cupid shoots arrows at me, one after the other,

Oh Kannamma , would n't you see me and wouldn't you come to me

Oh Kannamma , like the sage Sukha**,who sees God in everything

I see you in everything I see everywhere..

[**Sukha is the son of Ved Vyas..]

A Tamil song by Poet Mahakavi Subramanya Bharatiyar.

KK.

Originally posted by: Kuki715

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Originally posted by: Kuki715

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