Akdha ss- Mera Maasoom Patidev -Part 7 /29-MAY-18

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Beautiful part

Continue soon😊

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Sarthi Sharda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Superb updates dear

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sorathsheikh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

First of all patidev aren't masoom but you're saying so i'll believe

Awesome updates sis! Loved the way you have written. So the story started with the girl telling the baby about their first meet! Simar was teasing her a lot. Jallu bhai was telling the reason behind his sadness to her baby sister. Yup jallu bhai you're absolutely right! Girls can slap isme ladkon ki shan hai Aur jallu bhai ki train patri se utar gai re jallu bhai ki motor cycle pom pom pom. Wao he again called her di jallu bhai bhagora ho gaya hai kiya

. The conversation between Jallu bhai and jodhu was bit funny. Kuch ziada nahi jallu bhai laddo ho raha hai? Her father teased her And so her family knows jallu bhai's family. Juilee is a dob wow . Continue soon and thanks for pm

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dellaakdha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Congarts for new story... Prologue is nice..diffrent jalal...

Res for chapter..Thanks for pm...

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avishimishra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">First of all patidev aren't masoom but you're saying so i'll believe</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome updates sis! Loved the way you have written. So the story started with the girl telling the baby about their first meet! Simar was teasing her a lot. Jallu bhai was telling the reason behind his sadness to her baby sister. Yup jallu bhai you're absolutely right! Girls can slap isme ladkon ki shan hai Aur jallu bhai ki train patri se utar gai re jallu bhai ki motor cycle pom pom pom. Wao he again called her di jallu bhai bhagora ho gaya hai kiya . The conversation between Jallu bhai and jodhu was bit funny. Kuch ziada nahi jallu bhai laddo ho raha hai? Her father teased her And so her family knows jallu bhai's family. Juilee is a dob wow . Continue soon and thanks for pm<img src="http://dl2.glitter-graphics.net/pub/1941/1941772dixlxfwdkq.gif" alt="" /></font>

aaj bada hi dance mood me lag rahe ho sis

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avishimishra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

part-1 is damn cute yar.so jodha jalal have their child.jalal is so innocent.how can he call her di.her family also tease her.he is behaving like kid.obidient brother.he lick icecream using his tongue. who is julii.intrsting chapy.will reply again for 2 part.thanks for pm.

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avishimishra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

part-2 is also awsme.so juli is pet dog of jalal.jodha's gutter mind. what think she about .became mad for jalal.jalal badepapa is devil.how can their family torture jalal.poor jalal.hope jodha will make him right.he is naive.he doesn't understand anything about husband-wife realtion.precap is intresting.continue soon.Thanks for pm