Akdha ss- Mera Maasoom Patidev -Part 7 /29-MAY-18 - Page 9

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Jalal is innocent only not mentally challenged person..

Part 3

Jalal enter Mohammed mansion entrance and remembering outing with Jodha.and his face glowing and grinning like child..his happy vanish after heared roaring voice.

Jalal..stop here with heavy and dominating harsh voice from inside the mansion.

Jalal face change to pale and his body shivering hearing man voice.A 50 + old man and early 20's young man stood next that oldman.

Jalal: ji...bad...e papa..with stammering..his tounge rolling even he cannot complete single word from his own mouth.

Yeah old man none other is Jalal's badepapa and young man is Jalal s cousin ( badipapa son)

Note: guys .i clear one think ..Jalal parents already died in his childhood.( Gabir and Noor Jalal badipapa and badi maa ..savitri sister s son and daughter in law..they r not Mohammed..but Mohammed 's and every property managed by Jalal's badi papa..yeah everything under by Jalal name only..they made Jalal to puppet for them.)

Badipapa shout voice: in whole day ,where r u went.i already said don't go anywhere.without my permission , where u went with angry face

Jalal eyes bow down to ground: ji badipapa ..i went to met my friend with shivering tone

Thud thud sound..

Opps Gabir ( jalal badipapa) slapped Jalal cheek..not one time ..he slapping continuously..

Jalal corner lips cut insake of cruel slap by his badipapa..Jalal felt down to ground not tolerate his hard slap..his tears flowing in his cheeks..his whole body shivering .

.in crying voice..iam not going anywhere ...badipapa..plz don't beat me..with stammering and shivering said Jalal.

Adham: dad why hurt ur hand to slap that stupid.(Adham.give his belt to his dad)..Gabir start beating Jalal through belt. Jalal held badipapa leg begging stop beating him..

Jalal: plz..badipapa forgive me don't beat me .with sobbing voice..

Adham and Gabir smiled seeing Jalal begging to save his life..

Adham: dad , he did not obey my words .iam right Jalal bhai..with smirked face.

Jalal: Promise badi papa, I doing everything what chotu bhai said..with placed his hand to crown head

Gabir neglect Jalal innocent promise and once again tired to beat Jalal but some one held his hand behind him.

.Gabir turn look at person : Noor , leave my hand .today if I forgive him, he roaming everywhere without our knowledge with hard voice.

Noor: Gabir ji ..he is kid..dont slap like animal with motherly love voice.

Gabir: but Noor..Noor gestured stop showing her hand to Gabir

Hark throw belt to corner of room with disgusting face.

Noor shout : Ram Singh..Ram Singh

(Ram singh.is mohammed mansion old servant)

Ram Singh running from kitchen ..ji malakin .and Ram Singh seeing Jalal state and his body bleeding .

Noor: Ram Singh, help Jalal settle to his room. With heavy hearted Ram Singh helped Jalal to escort to his room..

Jalal room

Jalal room is small room and single cot and ceiling fan only there is no ac any luxuries things.

Ram Singh helped Jalal to sit in his bed and sit next to Jalal and carrying his hairs smoothly

Ram Singh: Jalal baba..if ur parents alive , u live in ur mansion like prince..but today they beat daily like ur slave for them with tears rolling in his eyes..

Jalal hand wiped Ram Singh tears and placed his head to Ram Singh lap: why kaka..my parents leave me alone. Because iam not good child ..my parents not love me .they hate me then only they went to god place with crying voice.

Ram Singh: no Jalal baba. Malkins ( Jalal parents) love u so much.in ur childhood they died in car accident.that day u want stay in mansion with maaji ( dadi) u don't want go with ur parents..otherwise u also die in that car accident..time god u escaped .

Jalal: if iam going to them..i am also die na, Ram Singh kaka..i am happily live with my parents..even god also hate me then only god separate my parents from me .

Jalal beta ...voice came from Jalal door steps

Jalal raised his head : dadi...with sad face.

Jalal tried to sit in bed and his body pain shout: ahhaa...

Dadi running to held Jalal and Jalal lips crept little smile..

Dadi helped lay down to bed and dadi sit near Jalal head and her hand carring his hairs with teary eyes.

Jalal: dadi, plz don't cry..i am alright with little smile.

Dadi: everything my mistake , if I am not gave power of attorney to Gabir ..this is not happen in ur life.u enjoyed ur life .

Jalal: dadi , u never did mistake. U r best dadi in the world.even I enjoyed my life with dadi, Ram Singh kaka, choti, chutiki, bubblu , and Jodha ji with little blushing face.

Dadi : Jodha ,u did not before mention her name with confused face.

Jalal: oh , Jodhaji my new friend..look at Ram Singh signed him bring haldi paste for Jalal. Ram Singh left

Dadi selfthought: Jodha is school kid..Jalal mingled with kids easily. His friend everyone kids only.

Jalal: dadi, what u thinking..

Dadi: nothing beta, if she have leave time bring her to our mansion.

Jalal: who dadi

Dadi: Jodha

Jalal: ok dadi .but leave time with confused face.

Dadi: she have school time. study is important na, beta.

Jalal mindvoice: haan, she look like doll but she studying school with confusing face, why she did not tell me.how dadi know she is studying school..i angry with her..why she hide big thing from me with pout face.

Ram Singh come inside with haldi paste bowl : maaji

Jalal come back from his thought: Ram Singh kaka , what in ur hand ..

Dadi: haldi paste for ur wound , beta

Jalal: no dadi, I don't want haldi paste for my wounds with puppy face.

Dadi: no Jalal beta ,ur wounds cure soon na..u need apply haldi paste.

Jalal nods his head negatively and hide his face inside blanket : no dadi , I don't want ..plz. it more burning my wound .

Dadi: ok .baba..u slept now..Jalal placed his head to dadi lap..Jalal dose off with dadi lap..his tears seeing in his face clearly

Dadi carring his head and Samira enter in Jalal room with teary eyes.

Samira:dadi, why u did not stop papa .everyday he beated Jalal bhai. see dadi, his arms bleeding with crying voice.

Dadi: our fate samira beta.i did not know when my Jalal get peaceful life..tears rolled in her eyes..God, plz save my child..

Noor and Gabir room

The room so big, luxuries, refrigretar, ac, everything in their room

Noor :Adham give this drink to Jalal..he injured more by ur papa beating with concerned voice

Adham: mom, today what happened with u ,first u saved that stupid from dad beating now u want I give haldi drink to Jalal . today u talk like my stupid sister with irriating face.

Noor: hmmm , u proved everytime, u have no brain..this is not ordinary milk..i mixed slow poison .if reguarly Jalal drink this slow poison..he become abnormal state..he behave like mad person.even he will attempt suicide soon with evily face..

Adham: why u take slow way to kill that stupid with disgusting face.

Noor: I never do anything without reason, go give this milk to Jalal..

Adham went to Jalal room with milk glass.

Jalal sleeping in his small bed cot..

Adham shaking Jalal arms forcibly and Jalal jerked up bed quickly..

Adham: Jalal bhai, drink this milk with sugar coated voice.

Jalal: oh ..chotu bhai..with fear face..

Adham love to see Jalal fear face with smirking face: if u did not drink this milk , I say to dad , u do not obey my word..

Jalal :nahi chotu bhai, I drink..he snatched milk from Adham hand, he drank one gulp..dont say anything to badipapa..he beat me.

Adham: why I complaint about u,u r my big bro .i did everything for ur good only..u r nave bhai..if u roaming outside alone , its not safe for u with fake concern voice.

Jalal nods his head innocently and his eyes image so bluring..

Adham: good night bhai..went out with evily smile.

Jalal slept.

( guys slow poison so ,it take more days to react in his body..)

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Bharmal mansion

Jodha rolling her bed one side to another side..

Jodha: it almost midnight ,till now I did not got sleep. My eyes not get sleep if i watch any movies..but it so boring. What I will do..her head blub glow ..

Jodha : night outing with friends but no one come with me in night time..hmm Jalal with showing her whole tooth .

Jodha dialed Jalal mansion number and Ram Singh attend call with yawning face.

Ram Singh: hello

Jodha: ji, can I speak to Jalal

Ram Singh:ji , who r u

Jodha : oh ..ha, he is my friend.

Ram Singh: ji, he is sleeping, he is health not good.u will call morning..beta.

Jodha: what happen to him with worried voice..tell me na

Ram Singh mindvoice: how I tell her, he beated by badi papa. Even I don't know what she related to Jalal baba..

Ram Singh: nothing beta,he have fever. With slow voice

Jodha: fever with whispering voice, kaka, plz tell his home address with concern face

Ram Singh sensed her concern voice and thought she is good friend of Jalal ..he told mansion address..

Jodha: thanks kaka and cut the call.

Jodha : Jalal have fever because of u ,Jodha.u only give icecream treat for him..what I did it ..he ate more icecream. But he so cute with dreamy face...I want know , if he alright or not..

Jodha jumped in window door without knowing anyone went out to see her Dulhan Raja.

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Jodha stand infront of Mohammed mansion..

Jodha : Jalal , ur mansion really big one. Hmm..how I get inside.look at guards sleeping in sitting position.thank u kannaji..she enter mansion sliently without wake up guards.

Jodha look at sky : Kannaji, help me..find my Jalal in big mansion..if iam searching whole room na, I cannot findout him tonight..what I will do Kannaji..

Jodha decided toss coin to choose left or right .

Jodha: if head means right side or tail means left side and then.i search him

Jodha tossed : she got head face..thanks Kannaji, I search in right side of room..

She searching every room slightly..finally her legs strucked in window side. Jodha drooling his face while moon light shine..

Jodha: why he so handsome in his sleeping state also.

Jodha seeing his face only because of moon light..his bare body covered with blanket..he sleeping with cuddling in his stomach.

Jodha : he so cute ..why Kannaji, u create him like cute , handsome , innocent..i don't know whose lucky girl got him with irritate face.

Jodha hit her forehead : oh I forgot he have fever..i want check him first...he s ok or not..she jumped inside room through window.room already dark ..Jodha legs hit flower vase..vase fell down to ground.Jalal hearing noise and sit up in bed post with closed eyes..

Jalal: hey Allah, what sound with fear voice.

Jodha hide behind curtain and hearing Jalal voice and Jodha tried move to Jalal side..her payal make sound . in silent room it make more eco.

Jalal with closed eyes: payal sound, in midnight time..hey Allah surely it is booth only..with shivering face..Allah plz save me from ghost. He saying mantra continuously ..

Jodha eyes open widely : iam ghost for u with murmuring voice.

Jodha : oyie stop ur pray..i am not going anywhere with changed heavy voice.

Jalal gulped his saliva and open his eyes : plz save ur favourite child, I will give u everything..hmm what I will give u , god with scratching his own hairs.

Jodha giggled hearing his prayer : omg Jalal , u r impossible.u r original piece . there is no substitute for u with slow voice..Jodha giggling heared by Jalal

Jalal looking there and here : ghost ji, plz don't hurt me.my dadi maa said that iam good child. Bhoothji not hurt with good child na ? with slow and scary voice

Jodha chuckled face and change her voice : are u kid,Jalal ? with murmuring voice ..u answer my question then I decide about I will hurt u or not but u only said true only not any lie

Jalal hold his throat with his three fingers : promise ghostji ..i never saying lie in my life time with proud voice

Jodha: tika , mister cutie with little smile face.

Jalal: ghostji.my name is Jalal Mohammed not mister cutie..with innocent face.

Jodha rolled her eyes: I know , mister cutie, I call u only this name..Jalal nods his head

Whom u love u most in the world.

Jalal : ghostji, dadi maa with tooth smiling face.

Jodha: then

Jalal: my shona , my baby sister.

Jodha: then

Jalal: my friends.

Jodha : friends not have names with eagerly voice.

Jalal folding one after one finger said : bubblu, chutiki, raju finished everyone name except Jodha.

Jodha: let think ,mister cutie, u forgot anyone..

Jalal: ha , my juilee

Jodha hearing juile name , even she don't know why she got irritating hearing his pet name .her face fell down .he mention everyone name except me even he mentioned his pet dog, juile..with angry face.

Jodha: then what about Jodha..she is not ur friend with little angry voice

Jalal: no, she is not my friend . she said lie to me..she is going to school but she did not told me with cute angry face.

Jodha shout : why , iam not going to school with confusing face.

Jalal: nahi, ghostji, iam not saying u..iam saying about my Jodhaji.

Jodha : what u said , my Jodhaji .with little blushing face.

Jalal: oh...she is not my friend so she is not mine with child sturborn.

Jalal: ok I said everything correctly na..u did not hurt me na ..with innocent face.

Jodha chucking face and mindvoice: I want eat ur cute cheeks , Jalal.. u r really my mister cutie. anyone fallen for ur innocent face with murmuring face.

Jodha: but u say , Jodha

Jalal: Jodha nahi Jodhaji with cute angry face

Jodha give impossible look to Jalal: ok say Jodhaji is ur friend.

Jalal: Jodhaji is ur friend with smiling face

Jodha glare to Jalal: oyie mister cutie, u r not parrot, what iam saying to repeat once again with angry tone

Jalal hits his forehead: oh sorry..with sheepish smile..

Jalal get down to bed and his legs slipped through because of water spread in floor and Jodha running tried to held but Akdha both fallen to bed .Jodha top him and Jalal under her. Akdha staring each other..

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PART 4

Jalal step down to bed and his legs slipped through because of spilt water in floor and Jodha tried to held him but Jalal legs twisted ..both fallen to bed .Jodha lay over him and Jalal under her..Akdha starring each other.

Jalal remove her hair as tucked hair in behind ear. its disturbing seeing her glowing face and his hand caring her cheeks softly. Jodha closed and sensing his cold hand touch her cheeks.suddenly his m shaped lip placed in her cherry lip .Jodha eyes open widely as even shocking for his sudden romantic act.

Jodhaji..Jodhaji..Jodha open her eyes and look at Jalal with wide eyes as he tried pushing her above from him. Jodha jerked above from him then she realised everything her dream only..its not real.she cursing herself thinking about Jalal like that.

Jalal screaming ahhahaaa..

Jodha got worried : what happen Jalal with worried voice.

Jalal: everything u did it..now asking me what happen with cute angry face.

Jodha confused face: what i did it, i did not understand.

Jalal: i came outing with u right so chotu bhai ( Adham ) said i romancing everywhere without his permission and i am not doing his work properly .because of his complaint , badipapaji beat me..he showing harmed bare body to Jodha..

Jodha eyes moist seeing bare body..he become redness , blood cotted also there and Jodha touched his body with worried face.

Jalal: ouch..its is paining..by the way Jodhaji..u eat less its good for u health.

Jodha: what with confused face

Jalal: u r more weight but u not look like fatty with confused face

Jodha mouth open in o shape: what u said , iam look like fatty for u..

Jalal: nahi Jodhaji..i never said that u look like fatty and i just said u r more weight as correcting her sentence

Jodha angry glaze to Jalal : ufff...leave it , tell me where is that felonious man room..

Jalal: who felonious with confuse face

Jodha: ur chotu bhai with angry face

Jalal giggled : his name is Adham not felon

Jodha: in my point view he is felonious man only.u say his room way or not. Or I find his room in my way with little bossy tone

Jalal pout face : come Jodhaji, i show u..

Jodha: nahi, u rest karo, i come back after meet him with smirked face.

Jalal nods his head and say way of Adham room ..Jodha left and enter to Adham room.

Jodha look at Adham room..it so luxuries, every facilities in his room..its so big room not like Jalal room.

Jodha : Jalal said, he is his bhai but why Jalal lived in small room. There is no facilities in Jalal room but he enjoying luxuries life..i need know more about Jalal..tomorrow i will talk with him.but now ur payback time Adham opps felon

After few minutes , Jodha come back to Jalal room

Jalal sat in bed and eagerly look at door and Jodha smiled seeing his cute face.

Jodha: Jalal

Jalal : Jodhaji, u came, why u went to karam bhai room with pout face.

Jodha: i thought i give him some advice for his good behaviour with u.with angry face.morning he understand , my advice with smirked face

Jalal: i am not understand anything..i forgot that..i am angry with u..dont talk with me..u hided everything from me.

Jodha: hey Kannaji, now suddenly what happen with him.

Jalal showing his back to Jodha and Jodha tried to turn look at face.but he so adamant ..he did not turn back

Jodha: Jalal , really u angry with u

Jalal turned : yes ..i am not talk with u.

Jodha: tika, why u angry with me..

Jalal: u going to school but u did not tell me..

Jodha ( mind): he thought , i am teacher then only i advice that felour..uff why i strucked with him but i feel very happy with him.

Jalal: Jodhaji, what u thinking ..iam asking about ur school.

Jodha: Jalal, iam not going any school..

Jalal: u r not studying..like i am also not studying in school in painful face.

Jodha sensed pain in his voice but this not time to ask him: ofcourse i am studying

Jalal:then why u saying , u r not going school.

Jodha: uff..plz tell me clearly don't confuse me more.

Jalal: u r buddhu, u don't understand anything ..u r school girl..right

Jodha : who said iam going to school..i am look like school girl for u with chuckling face.

Jalal: but dadi said, u r studying in school..ha , how u know about my dadi..u know dadi before me.why u not tell me..u already know about my dadi.with saying in single breathe

Jodha ( mind) : why he not close his mouth in single minute..if he start blabbering as he never stopped .my delhi express nahi my jet speedy

Jalal (mind): why she always day dreaming opps nahi , now night time so night dreaming in standing even with open eyes with weird face

Jalal: Jodhaji, what r u doing in my home

Jodha: finally u asked what iam doing here.

Jalal give sheepish smile : i forgot everything seeing ur face with little blush face. We need go out from my room , in my room one more person also there with slow voice and eyes popped face

Jodha: yes, i know that

Jalal: u know, how u found her with shocked face.

Jodha: its me only ..

Jalal chuckling face: i am not mention u, i am saying about ghost..few minutes before she talked with me with murmuring voice.

Jodha laughed: ur so cute Jalal..

Jalal: iam not cute , Jodhaji with angry face.

Jodha u r my mister cutie only.

Jalal scratching his hair and realised Jodha is ghost.

Jalal shout : dadi..save me from ghost , u r not Jodhaji..u r ghost..stay away from me..

Jodha glared and closed his mouth: shh..iam not ghost., don't shout

Jalal nods his head and Jodha remove her hand from his mouth: then show ur legs ..ghost not have legs right.

Jodha shooked her head and showing her legs to Jalal but Jalal not trust her fully.

Jalal:then how come to my home without knowing my address..i am not give home address to Jodhaji..tell me ghost ji with slow fear voice

Jodha : Jalal plz stop ur childish behaviour.i called u but Ram Singh kaka said , u have fever so i asked him ur address..he gave me .now i am here.now understand i am ur Jodhaji not ur ghostji with teasing tone.

Jalal pout face: so u play with me..its too bad..u know how much i scared.

Jodha :ok sorry mister cutie.promise i am not prank with u

Jalal: pinky promise..

Jodha: kon pinky with possessive voice.

Jalal: no one Jodhaji..we asusual asked this way to promise. Chutki only teached me ,this type of promise.with smiling face

Jodha hit her head (mind ) : now chutiki ..hey bhagwan , how many girl in his life ..and look at Jalal : u take ur medicines or not.

Jalal: oh..i ...with stammering tone.

Jodha : so u r not take any medicines right.

Jalal nods his head : yuck, tablet have bitter taste ..i hate tablet..i am perfectly alright.

Jodha : first where is ur tablet , Jalal pointed out table ..Jodha give to him ..and Jalal closed his mouth through his palm.

Jodha removed his palm but Jalal denied ..in their fight , he layed to bed as Jodha lips touched his corner of lip..both have some electric pass their feel in their body.

Jodha stand up and turn her face as controlled her feeling and give back to tablet to Jalal: Jalal just have ur medicine and then sleep.

Jalal puppy signed with Jodha :take his medicine and Jodha helped him to lay in bed and sit next with him ...and caring his hairs.

Jalal slept in bed and Jodha saw haldi paste bowl in table and Jodha applied haldi paste in Jalal harmed body ..

Jodha kissed Jalal forehead with blushing face and left out to mansion.

Morning..

Adham shout like roof broken to ground ,Adham screaming so much...

Few seconds before..

Alarm ringed in Adham room and Adham sleep disturbing hearing alarm sound..in sleepy state Adham hand touch to alarm clock opps unfortunately his hand touched to rat catcher trap ..Adham jerked up in bed while screaming loudly..

Adham looked at hand and slowly remove from hand to rat catcher trap ..he blowing air in hand..

Adham: who the hell placed rat catcher trap in table..oh its is paining.

Adham enter in restroom and wash his hand through water and squezzed hand sanitizer.liquid in harmed hand .after sec Adham shout ..its burning..

Adham opened sanitizer bottle : oh god ,someone replaced lemon juice in sanitizer liquid..

Adham come out to bathroom and look at one thing in horror face..

Adham : no ..

Precap

Adham payback continues😈

Jodha and dadi face off.🤗

Adham got slapped by Jodha

Jalal jealous😛

Jodha and juile ( Jalal dog) possessive with😉

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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

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