Akdha ss- Mera Maasoom Patidev -Part 7 /29-MAY-18 - Page 27

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Posted: 7 years ago

Ausual Akdha meeting plot..

Jalal: Jodhaji why u tensed..

Jodha: Nothing Jalal with mood off face

Jalal: iam ur friend, u can share with me

Jodha : nothing Jalal

Jalal teasing face : then why u keeingp ur face like GEM..

Jodha confused face: GEM..

Jalal giggled tone : Ginger eating Monkey..

Jodha mouth open widely & hitting Jalal shoulder playfully .& Jalal laughing heavily.

Jodha:Idiots, which angle I look like monkey for you. With fuming face

Jalal control his laugh & cupped her face & look at one side to other side : hmmm..this angle u look like ok ,(Jodha grinned teeth mind thought I just OK for him, every boys openly flirting with my beauty but he said OK ) & if u angry face ,u look like devil.. with chuckled face (Jodha mouth open widely )..

Jodha fuming face : Jalal..

Juile teasing grin in her face..Jodha glare to juile

Jalal : if u smile ,u look like ..geeet eager tone.. I am look like

Jalal: Joker .. Jodha face pale down.. before Jodha hit Jalal, he run out while Jodha run behind him with shouting..i kill u idiot..

Few minutes

Both settled down on bench with heavy breathe..

Jodha taking breathe: really when smiling time..i am looking like joker with pout face.

Jalal nod his head: Nahi buddhu..i just tease u..clear ur mood off ..

Juilee (mind):Jalal teased her I thought he really told her what he felt with pout face.

Jodha fake angry face: still I am in mood off..

Jalal : hmmm..ok I tell u important thing .then ur mood would be change..

Jodha: important.. Jalal nod his head

Jalal: u must reply my question & genuine answer with serious voice .Jodha nod her head

Jalal hold her hand : u have a pen,Jodhaji..Jodha give pen to Jalal.

Jodha look at Jalal with curious face and Jalal put ball nip in her palm, he draw some square

Jodha: Jalal..

Jalal :Jodhaji..dont interpret.. tell me ur favourite Actor

Jodha: Rajat..

Jalal write Rajat word in one box : then ask ur favourite movie

Jodha: not specific I like every movie..even I love animated movie also.

Jalal : ok ..he write animated film in next box..Jodha have tingled whenever Jalal writing in her palm..

Jalal: ur favourite food..

Jodha: Italian food ...Jalal weried look to Jodha..

Jalal: u love Italian food..yuck I tasted some food..it was blunt ..i love Indian food..more spices & more sweets with yummy face..Jodha want pinch his cheek but she controlled.

Jalal: Ok Italian then u r favourite colour

Jodha: Blue

Jalal pinch Jodha wrist and Jodha shout ouch ..: my favourite colour blue and I love white colour also.. white resemble of pure.. Jodha mindthought yeah pure like you.

Jalal: then dress..

Jodha: jeans & shirt .. Jalal yucked face

Jalal: Jodhaji, if u wear saree na..u look more beautiful

Jodha pout face : so I am not beautiful now..

Jalal: u look good but if u wear Indian dress...u more preety..sachi with placed his finger in his throat.

Jodha:sure I will try..then next

Jalal : ur favorite soap

Jodha: soap.. XYZ beauty soap..

Jalal: ok ..then ur favourite person except ur family member..with eager tone.

Jodha smirked face : harman ..

Jalal write harman name with pout face and Jodha gave lop side grin & mindthought : oh my mister cutie so lovely in this face.

Jalal: he written everything in her hand.. Jodhaji..now concentrate only in my face and hearing my word.Jodha nod her head & look at him only with full concentrate..

Jalal connect every box while saying first u wore white top & blue jeans & u thought u want go to some animated film, u called ur friend harman ( harman name with grinned teeth ) , he replied, he was busy so u called ur other friend..Jodha eye brow raised and Jalal continue saying & thinking who that person.. let imagine me ok..Jodha nod her head with teasing smile ..u called me, I said ok..we both went to ur favourite restaurant,we eat ur favourite Italian dish, Jalal gave yuck face, Jodha chuckled seeing face and then we go to near mall,we watch ur favourite animated film and then ...Jodha look at Jalal with little blushing face..then.

Jalal :then wash ur hand through xyz beauty soap.. with laughing voice.. Jodha look at her face..Jodha mouth open o shape. And her whole palm scribble through pen ink..Jodha grinned teeth...

Jodha: Jalal..

Jalal run out before catching her while running : bye Jodhaji...

Jodha sat on bench & look at her pen ink scribbled palm & imagine what Jalal said automatically her cheek turned into pink..

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Bharmal house

Sujamal : dad,I don't want Jodha marriage soon, so plz don't take this topic.

Rano: Sujamal beta, one day we search groom for Jodha right then why not now.

Sujamal: yes, maa but she was 21 years old only..let enjoy her life..

Mohi silently sitting in sofa

Rano: why u silent ji.. say something to ur son..

Mohi :ha rano..rano shake her head..

Rano: u r hearing or not..

Mohi : what u both speaking ..

Rano: good..u not hearing anything with angry face

Sujamal side hug to Rano : Mom ,plz not now..she is child na atleast 2 or 3 years. Then we think about her marriage.

Jodha crossed her parents room & heared her marriage matter ,her face dull without saying anything she went to her room.

Sujamal : mom please..

Rano : ok..but one year not more..

Sujamal : we decide that after one year ..ok

Mohi lost with some other matters..

*********

After week

Mohammed mansion

Noor enter dadi room with fake smiling face and dadi sat in her bed .

Noor : Maaji..with sugar coated voice.

Dadi doubting face: Noor , u r here..

Noor : I am coming to say happy news for u.

Dadi: happy news for me sarcastic tone

Noor : maaji..our Jalal beta marriage.. I selected girl for Jalal..within two days everyone going to hosiphur village..u surely like Jalal bride with huge happy grin face.

Dadi: but Jalal wish..

Noor : Maaji, my son was very innocent, he don't anything..i selected best partner for my son..we were leaving village with in two days..u packed ur thing as well Jalal also ..without hearing dadi reply..she left the place.

Dadi: God save my child & bring happiness in her life.i don't what their new plan..save my child I trust u only.

Part end

Precap

Dadi look at Noor: what Gabir saying to bride family..next week marriage with shocked face.

Noor : why tensed maaji..bride very good girl, bride family thought marriage will happen soon depend on their kundali so haraj ji said ok..what is big issues.

Dadi : Jalal..😲

**********

Marriage ritual start 😲

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Jalal look at juile: we were in hosiphur & Jodhaji message she went to movie with her friends...I am not talk with her & not inivit my marriage also ( so sweet right😆)

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Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome chappy Akka
Poor Jalal
Hope they get married soon
Update soon Akka
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy Akka
Poor Jalal
Hope they get married soon
Update soon Akka


thanks dear 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

yes congrats 👏

How are you dear 😃


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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved it dear
Awesome part
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome superb lovely update dear
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update!!
Continue soon..
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful chapter n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice Updates KALPI..
Jodha and Jalal part is cute..
Mind convo between Jo and Julie is enjoyable..
Jalal antics to Jodha and his game to cheer her up is nice...(Remembering school days)
Gabir is planning big to use the properties...
Ja Gonna marry...
Waiting for precap...
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update dear.. .
I love joja cute fight. ...
Poor jalal
Continue soon
Thx 4r pm dear

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