Akdha ss- Mera Maasoom Patidev -Part 7 /29-MAY-18

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Awesome updates sis

. Loved them! How cruel of jallu bhai's badepapa and badima Jallu bhai ki motor cycle pom pom pom! Jallu bhai isn't a puppet its just that he's bit innocent 😆. Kiun badepapa uncle ji agar jallu bhai ko susu ayegi tab bhi wo apse puchega? Mein to kisi se nahi puchti 😊. He slapped him 😲 Mere jallu bhai ki motor cycle phirse pom pom ho gayi

. Noor is such a bitch! How can she add slow poison! Jallu bhai seriously 😆 you thought she's a ghost 😆 Of course she doesn't look fatty. Good jo sis search for his chotu bhai. He screamed no but the question is what he saw? Continue soon and thanks for pm

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Angel.Pooja

😆 yeahhh ! Kbhar ekdm pkkki h 😉
Hope .. Mostly written But epiloguess left 😃

woh bhi ho jayega 😉😆

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Duha Saad

@duhasaad

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

yuppieee an updates!!!

again congrats vrinda!!!!!

because of you we got an update 😆

the update was just

emotional but awesome, fabulous and amazing update

loved it

now to the review

for the start, Jalal happiness had just changed to scaring, he was so scared poor boy, 😭😭 they are just so sick 😡😡 they feel happy beating him 😡😡poor boy 😭😭 then that noor I thought she is good buit she turned to be devil 😡😡 she gave him poison 😭😭 poor boy 😭😭 Jodha is worried on him 😳😳 she went to him 😳😳 Oh my God the gost scene 😆😆 the way she started asking him questions 😆😆 but he is so stubborn 😆😆 he didn't say she is his friend 😆😆 she got so irritated 😆😆 then the bed scene 😆😆 Jodha day dreaming 😆😆 but it turned to be Jalal kicking her away from him 😆😆 he is os inncont to a way he call her fatty 😆😆 Jodha payback started 😉😉 Jodha is so sad seeing Jalal state 😭😭 I think she will be his savor!! 😃😃

continue soon kalpii

waiting!!! 😃😃

love you 🤗

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

epilouges this week ..😲😲😲..oh know what i will do..i did not write anything..meri mood bhi tik nayi tha.. ..
tomorrow i am out of city..night time only i come back..

no worries Di take rest

I can understand the load of update 😆

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

vrindu, we need ur help. actually.not for me but fantasy need for ur Akdha marriage Gifs..plz send GIF through pm dear..

I will search and send you by tom 😉

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-
Res for 3 akka

Unres akka

Awesome chappy Akka

Poor jalal

Hope they rot in hell soon

She wanna kill him

Cute moments of akdha

I'm going to read the next one now akka

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Unres akka
Awesome chappy Akka
Poor jalal
Hope they rot in hell soon
She wanna kill him
Cute moments of akdha
I'm going to read the next one now akka

Thanks for pm akka

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Thanks for pm akka

Sorry for the late reply Akka

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-
Res for 4 akka

Unres akka

Amazing chappy Akka

Jo did nice thing

She's falling in love with jalal

N also so possessive

Cute jalal

Almost kiss

Precap is interesting Akka

Update soon Akka

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Unres akka
Amazing chappy Akka
Jo did nice thing
She's falling in love with jalal
N also so possessive
Cute jalal
Almost kiss
Precap is interesting Akka
Update soon Akka

Hope nothing happens to jalal

Thanks for pm akka