Akdha ss- Mera Maasoom Patidev -Part 7 /29-MAY-18 - Page 15

Nice updates... Trio is torturing jalal very much...Hate them... innocent ja suffering very much ...Dadi and his sister only supporting him..Oh jodha came to jalal 's home in midnight and Their ghosty convo is funny and cute.. At last jodha got some clue regarding jalal and his bade papa..Ha ha..Jodha gave good punishment to Adham..he deserves it..ha ha..Jodha s too posses with the girls around jalal...Thanks for pm..Waiting for the precap Kalpa..

PART 5

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Morning..

Adham shout like roof broken to ground ,Adham screaming so much...

Few seconds before..

Alarm ringed in Adham room and Adham sleep disturbing hearing alarm sound..in sleepy state Adham hand touch to alarm clock opps unfortunately his hand touched to rat catcher trap ..Adham jerked up in bed while screaming loudly..

Adham looked at hand and slowly remove from hand to rat catcher trap ..he blowing air in hand.through his mouth

Adham: who the hell placed rat catcher trap in my table..oh its paining.

Adham enter in restroom and wash his hand through water and squezzed hand santizer.liquid in harmed hand .after sec Adham shout ..its burning..

Adham opened santizier bottle : oh god ,someone replaced lemon juice in santizer liquid..

Adham come out to bathroom and look at one thing in horror face..

Adham : no no...he run to table side , tried to control fire in document..

Adham poured jug of water in fire but already whole document fully burned as ash only remain in table..

Adham: oh my project assignment burned in fire..now devil princi not leave me alive..day after tomorrow I need submit my assignment otherwise they not allow me to write exam if I am not pass exam..dad cut my packet money and snatched my credit cards with horror face..this day worst day of my life with shouting like mad..now how to I reprepare document in single day while whole 3 months project .with pulling his hair .hmm..why I worried about so much..i have my own slave , he do my work as everytime he did it with evily smirked face.

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Bharmal mansion, Jodha room

Jodha pray to her favourite kannaji: sorry kannaji, I know I did it wrong, what I would do .after heared Jalal complaint and seeing his wound, I got hell angry with that devil Adham so I gave him punishment..if u think I did it wrong .i am sorry. I know u not angry with me..rat catcher trap , liquid sanitizer its ok but placed burning cigratee in project assignment .i see cigratee box in his table.chi chi..he have bad habits also .i just burning cigratee in project assignment .yeah its too much..but he deserve it babaji..how cruel he is and Jalal family..poor Jalal got more beated without his mistakes..plz kannaji plz save my Jalal from vampire family..plz do something..plz..and forgive me..

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MOHAMMED MANSION ,Morning ..

Dadi come to visit Jalal room and look at Jalal sleeping like kid as cuddling his leg to his stomach and placed his both palm to chin..in his sleeping state also his smile with him..dadi carring his hairs and kissed his forehead ..she noticed haldi paste applied in his wound ..

Dadi: who apply haldi paste for Jalal wound.. after Jalal slept ,may be nakul did it...with confused face.

Jalal wake up in sleep : good morning dadi..

Dadi: good morning beta..who apply haldi paste in ur wound..

Jalal sit in bed : oh dadi, night time...Adham enter in Jalal room..

Adham: how r u bhai with sugar coated voice.

Jalal nod his head: fine.dadi angry glared to Adham and went out ..

Adham: bhai, I need ur help..plz help me..otherwise princi not allow me for exam..with crocodile tears

Jalal: my help, chota bhai..with confused face.

Adham: yes bhai.plz once again prepare my project assignment..

Jalal: but I already prepared give to ur assignment na..

Adham (mind):how to say, my assignment burned by fire .if I said about my assignment burned through fire..i want explain everything..how fire catch my document.night I forgot ash my cigarette ..insake of document burned . Then idiot know about my cigratee habit..then he blabbering to samira and samira say to mom..she give me big lecture..

Jalal: chota bhai..where is ur assignment.

Adham: oh my friend , asked my assignment..i gave to him..but he missed my assignment in some where..i don't know..what I will do..u already did it for me..plz do once again for ur little bhai..if u do it for me..tomorrow , u go anywhere..i am not saying anything to dad ..promise..

Jalal: really with excited voice.

Jalal(mind): tomorrow I am going to meet , Jodhaji...with happy face.

Adham : bhai..plz finish tonight itself..tomorrow I need submit my assignment..

Jalal face fell down: today .

Adham: yes..bhai.u can do it..u already did my every assignment..its not tough task for u..

Jalal: but

Adham: no but..Adham give laptop and project detail to Jalal...

Adham (mind):in my childhood itself, u only do my homework, assignment and everything Jalal..i don't know why god give u intelligent brain ..god did wrong thing with u..u r so nave and scary cat..in ur fear and intelligent insake I using ur brain to my favour ,anyway ur intelligent brain going to waste only atleast I using for my enjoyable life...with smirked face and went out.

(note -Guys I never said Jalal is stupid ok ...he don't know anything outer world , people cruel mind, husband and wife relationship..he so innocent ..Gabir and Noor not allow Jalal to school but Jalal have knowledge about studies thanks to Adham..Jalal only doing his home work in childhood itself..so Jalal have knowledge and aware about construction fields..but he have therotical knowledge not any practical knowledge..)

Juile licking Jalal foot and Jalal smiled: don't disturb juilee..today if iam not complete this work na..chotu bhai not allow to meet Jodhaji.after I finish this work..i play with u with smiling face.

Juile (dog) face fell down (mind): who Jodhaji for my Jalal..with angry face..

Bharmal mansion

Jodha : bye mom, I am going to meet my friend..

Rano: take care beta and come soon..

Jodha : yes mom.

Jodha come to meet old friend in their college..

(don't forgot few days ago only Jodha come back to delhi from abroad ..so she come to meet her school days friends in their college)

Jodha hugged her friend one by one: I miss u guys..

Friend: me too Jodha..hmm, u got any boy friend in abroad with teasing tone.

Jodha mind stricked Jalal face and little blush: no one ..i have boys in friend not boyfriend catergory.

Friend: what ur next plan , Jodha..

Jodha: not decide yet..now enjoying with family and roaming with our friends..let decide later.

Friend: then think about marriage

Jodha: marriage , no ways..first I settle down my career then only I marry.may be after 4 yrs ..i think about my marriage

( every wishes not fulfil Jodha, we propose but god disposes. May be ur marriage suddenly happen Jodhaji )

Jodha hearing man laughing sound and girl sobbing voice ..Jodha look at surrounding ..here and there.

Friend: Jodha, what r u looking everywhere..

Jodha : I heared girl sobbing sound..

Friend: its common for us..devil senior ragging to any junior...no one against his wish and stopped him..because his dad has big shot in delhi..if anyone against him..he make their life to hell with disgusting face.

Jodha : where he is..with angry face.

Friend: plz Jodha, don't interfere in this matter..its not good for u..with worried tone..

Jodha:After whatever happen in my future ..i will be face with bold face..she have no fear in her eyes..friend showing senior place to Jodha..Jodha stopped them ..dont come with her.

Friend: but Jodha, u going alone..its not good .

Jodha: I will manage..dont worry about me..worried about him ..with smirked face.

Jodha reached senior place and one girl standing in front of senior with sobbing face.

Girl: plz leave me..with scared face.

Senior: why saying continuously leave me..ok I leave u but u hug me tightly and kissed my lips.then go..i never stopped u..with smirking face.

Girl: no ,I cannot do it..with horror face..

Senior get up from wall : hmm..i will do..senior legs move forward to girl side..girl leg move to backwards.girl back touched to wall..and senior placed his both hand between her ..girl pleading him..dont do it..

Jodha touched senior arm and senior got irriate some one touched his arms..senior turned back and look at Jodha..he stunned seeing her beauty..

(imagine jo in this dress)

Jodha wore red sleeves gown above her knees and open curly hair and left wrist tied to red colour watch..her sparkling brown eyes and bare milky legs

Senior eyes scanning Jodha head to toe with lusty ways and Jodha smirked seeing his freeze mode.

Jodha : hi senior with seducing voice

Senior : hello, beauty with lusty voice..

Jodha eyes guestered to girl..and go away as girl nodded her head and legs move out..senior held her wrist.

Jodha remove his hand from her wrist : iam here..why u need her with slow seducing voice.

Senior smirked face: yes, angel infront of me..why my eyes turned to other girl side..girl left the place.

Jodha hugged senior and senior thought he in heaven.uff his heaven shattered..aah..ouch...he shouting ..

Yeah Jodha handa hit his private part through her left leg joint..and Jodha remove from hug.

Senior placed his hand in hit place :ouch...u with pain and angry face..

Jodha : yeah, its me..once again u misbehave with girls..u must remember my gift..with angry face

Senior : u know whom u play , great business man, Gabir ka only son Adham ...with angry face.

(Senior no one other our Jalal ka badipapa son..devil Adham & in night Jodha not see Adham face in bedroom ..its dark place right)

Jodha : whom ever, I don't mind..once again I see u misbehave with any girl na..that day ur last day.with warning tone..

Senior tried to catch Jodha insake of pain..he cannot ..Jodha left the place.

Jodha come to friend place and said bye to everyone..went out ..

Adham angry face: I don't know who r u..but u voluntary come to my bed..i will enjoy ur whole body..otherwise my name not Adham

Adham : oh..its paining more..

Dargah..

Jodha come to dargah and pray for Jalal ..Jodha tied thread in holy window..someone faint behind her..Jodha turn look at old lady faint in floor..Jodha bring water and sprayed water in face while tapping her cheeks lightly..

Jodha : Aunty..open ur eyes..

Old lady open her eyes slowly and look at Jodha face..Jodha lip crept in light smile.Jodha helped her to sit in near pillar.

Jodha : aunty, u r alright...

Old lady placed hand in her curly hairs: yes, beta..i am fine..thank u..

Jodha : why u strain ur health in ur old age with worried even little bossy tone.

Old lady: I come pray for my grandson good future..i hope god fulfil my wish ..with little sad face.

Jodha :Aunty ji..i saying na..u r every wish will be fulfil soon..u r grandson get bright future very soon

Oldlady smiled: thanks beta..what is ur name beta..

Jodha: Jodha

Oldlady: lovely name dear..i am hamida ..u call me to dadi.

Jodha: ok dadi..u prayed finish.come I drop u..

Hamida: no beta.i come with driver only..i go myself..

Jodha: ok dadi, take care ur health...left the place.

hamida: lovely girl..i hope Jalal get girl like Jodha ..god plz fulfil my wish soon , plz send angel for my Jalal life.

A day passed ..

Jodha waiting for Jalal their daily meet place..

Jodha (mind): yesterday I went to met my friends but today till now he did not come to meet me..i am worried about him..that devil do any dirty prank with my Jalal..or he angry with me..yesterday I did not come met him..oh god..i become mad soon.

Someone placed hand in Jodha shoulder and Jodha smiled and thinking Jalal arrive and turned back opps her smiled vanished ..

Man: Jodha ki bachi..u r not happy see me..after long two months back..i meet u..but why u showing ur frown face with chuckling face.

Jodha pout face: Harmanji stop teasing me..with teasing tone.

Man : yuck..dont call me Harman ji..yes I elder to u its not mean , u addressed with ji.

Jodha : I am just teasing Harman. How r u my dear friend...when return back to abroad..u r not inform me and how u leave ur darling elisa alone with teasing tone.

Harman: uff don't remember elisa aunty..i escaped from her drooling session..every time she roaming behind me..with horror face

Jodha chuckling face: she love u so much , Harman.. what next plan...

Harman: now

Jodha: I tell u..u going marry elisa aunty right..with laughing voice.

Harman pout face: chup karo..tomorrow I am join to city hospital for junior doctor post ,madam..

Jodha: congrats , doctor sahab..

Harman: thank u ji...come I drop to mansion ..

Jodha: no.u carry on..i waiting for my friend..

Harman raised his eye brow : friend or boyfriend.

Jodha: just friend Harman.with hestitate voice.i come to meet u tomorrow..rapidly said

Harman hugged her and kissed her forehead : bye Jodha..harman left the place.

In abroad ,Harman and Jodha neighbour in their apartment..both r close friend.harman treat Jodha to his good friend as Jodha also.

Jodha don't know one innocent soul fuming seeing Harman closeness with Jodha ..yeah none other our Mister cutiepie..

Jalal stopped seeing harman talked with Jodha and Jodha also laughing , teasing with him..

Jalal (mind): arrhh..Jodhaji na..i happily come to meet her..last night fully tried finished Adham bhai assignment because he allow see to Jodhaji..but she talk and laughing with someone with cute angry face even he kissed her forehead with yuck face.

Jodha noticed Jalal standing in tree and Jodha almost run to his side..Jalal turn his face and showing his back to her

Jodha (mind): I think, he angry with me.yesterday I am not come to meet him..

Jodha turned Jalal and Jalal not look at here.he seeing there and here..Jodha rolled her eyes..and turn his cheeks while look at his face

Jodha: Jalal, listen yesterday..

Jalal mind stricked : sorry, yesterday I am not come to meet u..with innocent and sad face.

Jodha ( mind): he also not come ..with naughty mind

Jodha: why u not come to meet me with fake angry face.yesterday I waited for ur long time.

Jalal: sorry..

Jodha: u not come yesterday but today u showing angry with me

Jalal: oh..who that man...few minutes before u talk with him Jodhaji with eager voice but sad face

Jodha smiled: whom u talk about..with smirked face

Jalal: that man kissed ur forehead na with angry face.

Jodha: oh he is my best friend..with proud tone

Jalal: I am not ur best friend with angry face.

Jodha: u r more important than him with flowly said without twice thinking anything.

Jalal:then ok..with nod his head.

I thought he angry with that girl but she angry with my Jalal..uff I hate her..with angry face..yeah guys this is Julie mindvoice..

Juilee bragging distract their conversation.Jodha eyes look at down and seeing little puppy angry signed to her..Jodha confused see juile glare

Jalal pickup juilee in his arms and juile winning face to Jodha..as Jodha mouth open widely.

Jalal: see Jodhaji , she is my juilee..my darling..with smiling face..and look at juilee side hug to Jodha ..she is my Jodhaji..my my best friend

Juile and Jodha fuming hearing my word from Jalal mouth..

Jodha (mind): my juilee , Jalal..even that creatures ur darling with angry glaze to juile (dog)

Juile (mind): my Jodhaji..even she is ur best friend but I am ur best friend..same angry glaze to Jodha..

Jodha Vs juile cold war started through their eyes..🤣

Part end..😉

Precap

Gabir and Noor shocked hearing news..may be its chance they get heart attack also.

Jodha asking Jalal about his family detail..🤓

Harman scold someone..😡

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Lovely superb update dear

Very nice chapter Di.our jodha rocked.adham got right punishment. Jalal poor soul.jalal becoming jealous to see jodha friend.jalal dadi met jodha.jullie & jodha eye fight nice.continue soon & thanks for pm

Nice chapter dear..👏
Thanks for PMS...

Yes, Adham got his deserved punishment that Jodha meted out for what he did to Jalal.

Jodha seeking Kannaji's intervention to save Jalal - not knowing that she would be the chosen one to free Jalal from his misery.😃

Jalal is intelligent ,after all, and Adham has been getting him to do all his school work since long, yet ill-treats him.

Adham got another round of Jodha's special treatment when he was ragging the junior.😆

Jodha and Juile vying for Jalal's affections - too cute!😊

Very, very enjoyable, Kalpana. Thanks a lot for the update.👏

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

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