NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 32~Chapter 37-UPD JUN 28th

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Your review, Adwi...it's matchless just like you👏⭐️⭐️ you made me love monsoon clouds more❤️

Really! Oh Thank you, thank you! 😃

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Durgeshnandini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: lashy

Almost like what I found... very close... my eyes lit up... a perfect bridge between what you wrote, so eloquently, and the events in the chapter!!!

@bold... I didn't get the meaning. 😕

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: Tilottamaa

@bold... I didn't get the meaning. 😕

It meant.. very little changes I had to make... it's almost as I found it!❤️

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#424

Lana... that was beautiful... I'm going to get to the mesmerising lines that stood out... 🤗

Oh you darlings... Adwi, Periyamma, Lana thank you for blessing me with all this.. 🤗

I have decided... yours Periyamma's OSes, poems and many other works are far too precious to lose...

I'm opening a new thread this weekend to save them...

[Just a small change Lana - her name is Dhani (means Lakshmi), not Dhaniya (Coriander) 😆 I know you like cooking, fir bhi...bichaari... ]

thank you so so much once again for this weekend treat, Lana 🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
@ Bindu
I can emphathise with you, Sahiba. That's why, although I am away from home, I try to check in whenever possible because what terrifies me nowadays is the virtual homework on this thread, every time I am unable to log in according to schedule. 😃
Terrifies? You mean a sweet terror☺️
@Lashy
Oh, I like satay, too. But, being a vegetarian, you wouldn't have tried the chicken pieces grilled on long thin sticks ( like kebabs ) which are dipped in the sauce and eaten. What did you eat the gravy with, rice or chapatti?
Oh I think they've improvised here cause you get it as dipping sauce and as gravy for vegetables
to be eaten with Rice 😳

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: lashy

And me?

What happened to you?🤔 How did you become a duckling?! 😕

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: lashy

It meant.. very little changes I had to make... it's almost as I found it!❤️

Yes of course! Silly me, not understanding this bit ... Thank you! 😛

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: Tilottamaa

What happened to you?🤔 How did you become a duckling?! 😕

'What about me? I also help you with translations' 😒

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#429

@ Lana

Lana, you deserve a kiss ( actually 2 kisses ) for your Oses, darling! ❤️

Absolutely loved how you expressed the torment of the two tortured souls after the intimate hill top incident.

Heera vowing to give him a chance by trusting him again and AMK getting his sparkle back and wanting to get home at the soonest. 😉

These Oses are the perfect balm for C37. Bravo, Sahiba! 👏 ⭐️

Thank you so very much, Lana. 🤗

Go to bed, dearie. It is almost 3 a.m. there. Have a good sleep, you deserve it after delivering such masterpieces! ❤️

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karkuzhali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#430

My dear Lana,

Thank you for liking my posts on Akbar and Heera's diary musings..I read both your posts , and I find you have dealt with them completely from a different angle. If at all any similarity is noticed, it is only because the raw material which we have secured to weave the cloth is the same..I confined myself only to the events narrated by the author.. But you have extended it by adding more lustre to it with your imaginary skills.. Mine was a plain cotton sari and yours is with motifs embroidered in it.Thus yours may be classified as fiction and mine is not.

I am really flattered by your words "pristine fluency" about my writing.. which I never feel I possess. I have a very limited writing skill..I am incapable of writing any fiction..It is a gift bestowed on only a few persons like our author..Anybody can write.. But it should be readable!

Saraswathi Aunty..

Originally posted by: lghosh
Okay girls, an honest confession! I loved Auntty's diary musings and believe me, I finished more than half of my OS before she posted that and I agree word by word to what she wrote. So I am in a dilemma to scratch it all because it will be so boring to read almost similar feelings but in a mundane language after Aunty's pristine fluency!
It is more of musings of Heera and AMK!! What should I do? I am not satisfied with the product but rest is up to you!! One is Heera's musings and the other AMK's.

Let me know!