The riddle of death... (end) - Page 84

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Awesome story...👏

It is really amazing and thrilling.

You can write this part in epilogue and by adding something like how jodha proved her mother innocent, how is their life after this etc.,

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Stuti. ..

What a twist in the story dear. ...

>>😉

We never expected this...

>>Really? 😆 Lashy di had predicted this though, I suppose. 😛

So emotional and painful chapter

Truth is so painful. ..

I don't know whom to blame ..whom to not.

>>Bharmal😡

Just because of bharmal selfish motive. ...

So many life destroyed just because of him.

Everyone love him ...his step mother and his second wife despite that he never show any respect to any relationship.

He was surrounded by so many good people's who sacrificed their happiness for their family yet he never learn anything.

I feel pity for him.

>>You are right. this type of person is only pitied🥱

Nobody regret about his painful death .

>>And none is a little bit sad... rather happy. 😛

Maan

So he knew everything from the beginning. ..

And he try his best to protect his mother.

>>HMM 😉

God his part of story is also so painful.

>>😭

How can a father treated their children so badly.

Nodoubt maan hate that man since the beginning.

Poor guy from childhood he just wanted to protect his mother.

But he couldn't do that.

He did what he think is right for his mother.

>>Yes😃

But he has xerox copy of the dairy.

Brilliant idea stuti to save that paper. ..that's why nobody find out that copies.

>>Hain na? 😉 I will hide my secrets this way from now on 😆

But thank God everyone in family just wanted to protect meenakshi.

They all wanted to bring back her in home safely.

>>yes

Dadi...

What can i say about her.

I am surprised you know. ...

But it's myself story so we can expected surprise elements.

>>I am so happy to know that you are surprised. 😆

So jalal knows everything who , when , why and how they killed bharmal.

I must say intelligent officer.

>>Aree yaar I forgot to include how Jalal solved the case. 😔

Ofcourse when dadi got to know that bharmal murder her son and not only that he threatened to his family to finished them also with so much arrogance how can she tolerate that. ...

She did what she think is right. ..i don't blame her...

>>yes😡

She loved bharmal like her own son despite that her own husband differentiate between his own sons.

How she feel when she got to know truth we couldn't even imagine.

Dadi is right. ..only her body is alive

>>😭

Seems like her soul left her.

Two women meenakshi and dadi .

Both did so much for their family despite their own husband treated them so badly.

In end they tired and most important they couldn't see their own families suffered just like them that's why they ended one person who wanted to harm them.

>>You explained it so beautifully😳

True we can't take law in our hand ...

And jalal decision to let go dadi is right.

Already she is dieing. ..

There is no point to arrest and interrogated her.

But she knows jalal knew everything. ...

>>Hmm 😔

Last part was beautiful

>>Thank you. 😳

Both jodha and jalal explained everything to each other.

Beautifully jalal console jodha.

Ofcourse if jalal is with her everything will be fine.

Jodha family suffered so much.

Bharmal was death and their suffering also stop .

>>Right!

Beautiful mystery story stuti.

So beautifully you presented the whole story.

Each chapter is worth reading.

So many beautiful ideas you put in this story.

I love this story.

It's sad to know this story is ended.

But it's ok.

Thank you so much stuti for this beautiful story.

>>Thank you so so so much dear for standing by me throughout the story and for being an eminent and interested read. If you people did not keep on motivating me with your comments. I don't know what would I have done with my stories!😆😳

Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Wow too good chappy dear.

And end of the story

Waiting for the epilogue for it eagerly 😛

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

WE WANT AN EPILOGUE...😃