The riddle of death... (end) - Page 18

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

Bhaloi start krli...n ekhn kicchu blbo na...age first chapter ta dkhi

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

the Haveli of Singh's is standing like the monarch with all the old glory and shame imprinted on its each and every brick. History can tell a little about that glory or shame as Singh's were no one other than mere land-lords of little Madhubani village, a negligible locality in the map of the vast India on the lap of Sahyadri mountain, but for the people of this little place, the dwellers of this mansion are the writers of their destiny. From the British period to even till today!

Oh my God... this is already giving me vibes of Bhool Bhulaiyya! Singhs' Haveli... Madhubani... 😲 And I am really really interested in knowing what the 'shame' is that is being referred to!

"So at last you have come, Jodha! All are waiting for you from morning!" The mistress of the house, Mrs. Meenakshi Singh came out hearing the sound from outside. "You and your idea of coming by car! Really! You would reach 4-5 hours back if you would come in train! Who drove the car? You or any driver?"

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"Maa..." Jodha touched her feet before hugging her. "You'll not understand the fun of long drive in a winter morning. Well, before you start rebuking me again, let me open the surprise package. Let me introduce you to my driver..."

Driver - surprise package??😆

his goggles and setting his silky hairs just after getting out, branded sunglasses and the wristwatch peeping out from the hand of jacket, the smart and charming personality with a slight touch of authoritative gravity in his severely bright and handsome features of face, the style of standing and walking and especially the decent but very intelligent smile on lips with delicate touch of intellect in shining eyes tells clearly that he comes from a highly educated background, and is gifted with a very measured and methodical intelligence power along with high educational qualification.

Can't help it... aadat se majboor... line maarna padega

"He is Jalal. Jalal Khan, IPS officer." Jodha was answering the question marks of her mother's eyes meanwhile. "Jalal is my friend... a very special friend..." While emphasizing much on the word special', she was keenly observing the slight change of expression

He might be the most handsome IPS officer... and she a criminal lawyer... but mommy ke saamne!😆

a combination of royal and rural India blended together along with the beauty of nature other than Madhubani...

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One could never imagine that one day daredevil Jodha will even bring her Muslim boyfriend in her orthodox country-house without any notice, but after all she is Jodha

wohi tho

"I know he fears from Jodha. He will not get the courage which he did in..."

OMG Stuti yaar couldn't you have given him a different name? Sujamal 🤣

So... even jaitji fears Jodha... baap re!

But this 'whatever' he's done... that's the mystery of this story?

Bhagwant is married. His fabricated colouring shirt, the hairstyle and the weird earring

taunting voice from a woman stung in ear. She may not be much beautiful, but hell attractive. Eyes bending in sarcastic taunt and the rigid built of chin clearly tells that she is not very ordinary woman by nature. "Khan!" She smirked with bent lips particularly emphasizing on the surname of Jalal!

Hayooo this Bhagwant Mohini combination sound like typical Kekta sidey villains

"Jodhaaa!!!" Before Mohini could answer, a woman from inside, with all kinds of precious ornament adorned and a heavy Shari wrapping her floppy figure ran to the drawing and almost threw her fat body on her.

"Friend! Friend means?" She almost shouted with shock and disgust in voice, but was calmed down readily just by a glare of Meenakshi. Jalal was about to touch her feet, and she jumped as if she is getting electric shock.

And omg this dramatic... rude Choti kaki...

"It seems your friend is not interested to meet this oldie, Jodha!"

"Though I had a concept that a police and a lawyer can never be friends; how you both made this possible?"

"I am liking my Grandson-in-law very much. You have passed with flying colours hence!"

After Mohini and Nirmala kaki and Radhika kaki... finally... a character that can be loved

How could I miss the chance of meeting so many mothers of this house?"

Poor Jalal

the crownless king of this entire village,

love the way you've worded it though!

the cold-war between the father and the daughter is still continuing like the first day. Where father treats daughter as a mere stranger or at least as a guest, daughter cares him as much as a non-identity. For this nonchalant, carefree attitude of Jodha Mr. Singh actually does fear from her, and she knows it.

😆👏

"What has happened to Sukanya?"

Exactly!!!!

a little instance of that old glorious era in this 21^st century...

Nice...😳

"And when she has already decided to use this house as a guesthouse, you can bring any guest along with you and that is final; why to disturb me?"

Oh my God... these two are figuratively at each other's throats with knifelike words!

"Meet him. He is Jalal Khan, my friend. Actually not friend, more than a friend, and we have decided to marry each-other."

🤣 It must have been a serious scene... but the way she sprung it upon him

"Yes, Surya!" Mr. Singh looked at him. "Your work is complete?"

Stuti... another character... and you made Surya like TB patient... I love you for this! 😆

The aged man ran his eyes from Jalal's head to toe for a moment just like an experienced trader dealing with his commodities.

Opposite of bahu munh dikhaai rasam!😆

this open-hearted liberty, that too with a daughter like me, can't be so simple... I am sure there is some story behind it..."

Exactly!

"Let it be there..." Jalal pulled Jodha's hand closer. "Main thing is, at last permission is granted. Welcome to my life, darling!"

"Stop your drama..." Jodha giggled. "And say, how is Madhubani, and my house?"

"To be honest, I am suffering from inferiority complex!" Jalal laughed. "I mean, you are really a princess of a castle! It's feeling like someone has made me a king for one night stand... remember Sindbad's stories?"

Stuti... you mean made me a king for a night...

One night stand is something else altogether... 😉

"I guessed so." Jalal told. "He was looking at me quite strangely when we were talking about our marriage. Peculiar!"

"Maybe!" A deep frown suddenly appeared on Jodha's brows, signaling her deep thoughts of heart!

Waiting to see what more this bhool bhulaiyya mansion with complex characters are about to spring upon us!!!

Originally posted by: avika444

Hey stuti ... how r u dear ...hope u didnt forget me ...lol ...

The thing is ... i was just going through few stories and came across this story of urs ... THE RIDDLE OF DEATH ...

Title sounds interesting ... i want to give this a try ...hopefully ... i havent read the first part yet ...but will surely read after 22nd ... can u pls send me pms for this story of urs ...if possible .

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Hello di🤗. So happy to see that ur going try this😃 waiting for your response. Of course I will send u pm

Originally posted by: lashy

Here I am, dear... as promised 🤗 to read your FF and enjoy the journey... a very different journey, I can already see!

LOVE YOU for this, DI!!🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti