The riddle of death... (end) - Page 17

u are soo fantastic,. Bombastic,.looovvveee u sooo muccchhh,.

Originally posted by: -Felicity-

Aur kya itna galat bola... ye toh teri kismat acchi hai jo Di ne tujhe maaf kar diya...🤣

Chapter bolne ki gustakhi ko maine lamba comment deke compensate kar diya re isliye maaf kar diya mujhe😆

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thank you so much for sharing your views in a detailed manner. 😃 You didn't understand why the name is riddle of death? 😲 Haven't read the teaser kya? 😆

interesting prolog , Stuti...but u missed the real intro of Surya and that another fellow... 😉

Stuti this FF is very good and promising to begin with. But I will give my honest opinion because I want you to write better, and you are capable of it too. (I still absolutely adore your Revenge FF. Perhaps that will always be my first love among your creative works) So do not take it amiss. Too many things, names and characters were crammed into the first chapter itself. I began forgetting midway through the chapter who was who and what was happening. Take things a bit slow. This is a thriller. The first and most essential thing about a thriller is you don't reveal all your cards at the word go. Things are generally unravelled petal by petal. A bit shorter, crisper and succinct chapters in future will definitely enhance your FF.

Originally posted by: wanita

u are soo fantastic,. Bombastic,.looovvveee u sooo muccchhh,.

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani

Chapter bolne ki gustakhi ko maine lamba comment deke compensate kar diya re isliye maaf kar diya mujhe😆

Originally posted by: sayantonibasu

u r right stuti... i hadn't read the teaser but now i read... give update soon..

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

interesting prolog , Stuti...but u missed the real intro of Surya and that another fellow... 😉

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Stuti this FF is very good and promising to begin with. But I will give my honest opinion because I want you to write better, and you are capable of it too. (I still absolutely adore your Revenge FF. Perhaps that will always be my first love among your creative works) So do not take it amiss. Too many things, names and characters were crammed into the first chapter itself. I began forgetting midway through the chapter who was who and what was happening. Take things a bit slow. This is a thriller. The first and most essential thing about a thriller is you don't reveal all your cards at the word go. Things are generally unravelled petal by petal. A bit shorter, crisper and succinct chapters in future will definitely enhance your FF.