#4 FF:Journey of Passionate love Note on Page 72 (15/1/2018)

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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Thanks for pm Di

Sorry for the late reply Di

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Sony.S

Awesome chappy yaar 🤗
Poor jo 😭
Wicked jallu 😡 agar jo ko pata chala naa tera kurma banadegi 😉
Please update next part soon...nd please payal is baar apna sanyas mode pe mat jaa 😉
Nd thanks for pm 🤗

Thankyou so much, sony🤗

Jo ko ye bhi Pta chal gaya to samjho jalal gaya😆

Man to h ki If se he nai.. duniya se he sanyaas le lun but don't worry, ye story ka update deti rahunge.😆

Thanks for waiting yaar!🤗

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Thankyou avishi!😃

Yes.. why is he doing this to her when he knows well that this is not right.😒

He just want her to stay with him and not to share anything about their first night n that pictures with anyone from her family. So he's trying his best to make her emotionally weak so that she change her mind as he too knows well that bharmal will not let her stay with jalal if she's not happy.

I will not end this story. I cannot end this story soon but I would discontinue it if there are not much readers.😊

Thanks so much,dear.🤗

discontinue karne ke baarein main sochna bhi mat yaar😭

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Unres Di
Awesome chappy Di
What an evil person
When he'll realize his mistake
Update soon Di

Thanks so much, Kavya!🤗

Yep. He is a devil.😎 Even I don't know when will he realize his mistakes and how many mistakes he's gonna do in future.😆

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Thanks for pm Di

You're most welcome,dear!😊

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Sorry for the late reply Di

and I am sorry for taking this much time in updating.😆

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

You have managed to pull yourself up to gift us this update after so long, hence it'd be criminal not to come up with anything in response. I will certainly try to write a proper set of comments, but for now, welcome back as an author, all over again!

Therefore, this is just to let you know, that I read, and thoroughly enjoyed what I read! 😳

So it starts, from where it all ended, right in the middle of the reception party. If the friction is of such sincere colour, one can only imagine how dynamic would be their camaraderie, when it comes. This is absolutely enjoyable tirade, with jalal restoring to all the twisted ploys he come up with, and jodha getting trapped in a very ugly middle position - for jalal has successfully trapped her between a dutiful daughter and an independent individual. Waiting to learn more!

I don't know how long ten days is for you😆, hence when part 2 would turn up, but i would request to make it happen before the memories of this segment thins away. And if you're compelled to discontinue, do pm me rest of the chapters😉... I would love to learn of this journey! 😉

Love you!

Edited by durgeshnandini - 8 years ago

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
discontinue karne ke baarein main sochna bhi mat yaar😭

I love writing but I cannot write when I am in bad mood or something is bothering me. I feel bad to make people wait for updates as I know how I wait for update of some stories here. I just don't want you guys to wait for months for just 2500 words I actually feel guilty.