Originally posted by: melovesja
the chappy was trilling I feel like going through. you take your writing a step ahead than before.👏 both scan were at different place and people but gone through same stress, worry everything both are planning ,praying ,caring for near ones. Amk 's word give a picture of war than heera's word prepared her people for war against the situation , amk's warfare and Heera's preparations to keep her head in lion's mouth was hair raising Heera's uneasiness at missing Gokul and his during finding a right track of khalil was heart racing but Heera's word " 20 days and ..." was enough to give a cut on heart and Amk's prayer" Ai khuda keep her safe" was enough to dub the heart. their people were blessing to them from god. the way you write the forest scan jungle was not really fritting at night but analogy of animal and pre to upcoming lurking danger as claw of death and those ghostly image of people were send chill down to spine . our lady is stand tall to make any pride for her. how her jiji and her shahib will feel proud for her as they both admires her for same. As like before johar brave women show their enemy whom he facing. after filling her ring with poison she play mind game with that brutes to not only imbalance him from his mind but buying time to find a way to get help to save her people and dignity. How people behaves differently when it comes to their near ones she was feared from inside but masking those feeling she was fighting and khan shahib is brave but fear clutched him of being too late. she thought of she at least can stop him for a while and other side khan shahib thought of its only matter of time. this one is really a connection between many things. Divya wrote beautifully in her take.here I am adding somthing in other context.
with marwari racer like Durga bai connect Heera to Amk unknowingly he becomes her protector and now also Heera think the same.
when she came to find her jiji in open air she find amk as her companion like jiji blessed her with and Amk want to start his journey alone but he got his companion for journey( ch 16) and at canal they both accept each other but destiny didn't leave any way to be gather and they parted in different way with loneliness but they were never leave each other . He went to got farmaan to renew it and their also like durga bai was there to help him. she went to meet her family but face the reality life and left to meet her only family. now she will face the biggest reality of her life in form of Mansabdar AMK. Destiny make them match of each other in every way. bring them gather in a way no one can apart them.
mahender wants to make marriage a deal to got land , take her everything and Amk wants to marry her as deal to protect her and give her everything back.
at parnagrahe he connect with her people and now his people's loyalty connect with her as they were determined to save them.
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