Untold Secrets!!! ~Thread 2~ Chap 20 UPTD PG 126 27th Jan!!! - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY AKKA
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fantastic update harshu di
loved it ... specially last part and di plz add more joja scene

thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome chapter dear
Plzz add joja scenes plzzz
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful update Harshu di 😊...
So guru Charan and Vimla are Ismail and Asma, right?! 😉. Charan said he had served in royal court, but why and Mahajan is his brother - in-law😲. He seems quite detached from all those royal pleasures. But this Vimla, she was worried about her paan shop 😆. And Ranima, a lady monk😲 was she there for marriage... interesting character.

Jalal is blaming himself for Amar Singh 's death.I was a little disappointed in him.Everyone around him is doing so much to see him ascend the throne and he, agree he loves Jodha and wants to be with her but not taking charge and not joining Omar Khan... didn't like it😔. Want to see a more strong Jalal. Has Omar left for Mecca already but he had promised dying Amar Singh he would never leave Jalal.

Di when you will reveal about Ganga...she is so intriguing... 😛

And finally our leads marriage 🥳. Is Jodha aware of it?
Thank you for the update. Waiting for more 🤗
Edited by Kuki715 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A very beautiful banner Avika di❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshu27

Chap 12...


Whilst the deserted town breathed through the absolute state of tranquility and peace there were two persons who seemed to have been guarding this town just at the entrance of this city.

For their solace, they could see none as far as their eyes could see, amongst one being the guru charan and the other being vimla. Vimla worked as panwali or so as to say the betel nut seller in the capital.

Harshu added two more characters

Image result for thinking emoticonLashy yaad rakhnaa... yaad rakhnaa! Guru charan Vimla Guru charan Vimla Guru charan Vimla...

Wait are these two characters in disguise?

"But why do I feel so, that Shehzaada jalal won't ascend the throne whilst taking the emperor and Maqsood Mirza as the prisoners".

"With that we have left only with the hope that our dear jodha will have to wait till the emperor's death so as to be declared as Malika, god alone knows what's written in her fate".

😲

"Yes, only almighty has the answers to all our questions which we will get to know only when the time comes".

Not almighty.. only Harshu Sahiba has😭

"But why are we bothering ourselves? Do we really have to worry about all this fuss? After all its man proposes god disposes so let us wait and watch".

Harshu proposes... her characters dispose!

Asma simply shrugged off her shoulder

Yes I was right - so it is Asma and Ismail! 😛

"So, do you really feel so that the emperor is the most unlucky man on the earth?"

"As of now I am thinking of my betel shop".

>>> 🤣

"What about marriage then?"

"Tonight itself they would go through the marriage ceremony".

"You mean seriously? As I cannot see any marriage preparations done so far".

Neither can we 😲

"What about the bride and the groom? Do they have really any inkling about their wedding?"

OMG... I'm already excited about the wedding... the romance... the *ahem* that comes after the wedding... omg

"No, they do not know anything, he would tell them once he returns back and when both the sides are willing for it then why would anyone object?"

Object?

No...

Qubool hai

Qubool hai

Qubool hai

Hayooo who is coming? What is this betel shop

and just as I was going to ask... she says...

"Oh! I am so tired and do not have much of the strength in me to explain to you everything".

😡 Really Harshu?

Vimla cried out, "Looks like Ranima is here I shall go and make the arrangements".

Where are they going? Where are they coming from, Harshu?

my brother in law Mahajan".

How is Ismail's BIL a Hindu?

The lady grinned and said, "Now, I can see that we have come a long way in defeating the emperor as he has tasted defeat in every step. Today I feel that my most important mission of my life has been fulfilled. Guru charan I look upon to you as my son are you not satisfied?"

So, it's this Ranima who wants to take revenge against the Shehenshah? How is she related to Ja or Jo? Is she Jo's mother?

Omar khan had received the information of Ahmed coming with his vast force along with Maqsood Mirza and the whole strength of the Mughal Empire.

Lashy tries not to get excited ☢️

His love for jodha made him completely blind so much so that the throne of Delhi was slipping off from his hand like the sand from the hour glass.

But this is not good na... he is putting his love for Jodha before his duty as a prince and thus the lives of his subjects? (Since his brothers are useless rulers)

Jalal had been a slave in love for jodha for her desires and all her wishes, had she not been there the picture would have appeared to be totally different as with the advent of Jai Singh into the deserted town of Surajgarh, jalal would had gone elsewhere away from the eyeballs of the enemies.

Jalal would have gone elsewhere? 🤔

However, jalal had been smitten by the charms and the innocent beauty of jodha which gradually refrained him from joining Omar khan or Amar Singh on the battle.

Inspite of his utmost efforts, jalal couldn't sever the love of jodha that made him remain glued to the ruins of Surajgarh.

All the luxuries and pleasures were at his disposal but the real happiness and peace which he had enjoyed was being in company of jodha that made him wanting for more.

There was no iota of doubt that he was leading a happy life here, as even the possession of the throne would have not brought such happiness for him and so gradually the ambition of becoming the emperor died out.



Sometimes Amar used to be piqued at jalal's attitude, regardless of the repercussions of passing by through enemy's camp, he had risked his life and had come to confront the Shehzaada in Surajgarh who seemed have taken promise from jalal of leaving this heavenly abode of Surajgarh.

I would be piqued too 😡 Poor Amar Singh... his sacrifice in vain

The best idea that seeked to him at this particular hour was to leave this place. There was no good on lamenting over the past. He felt his fault all over him for showcasing his weakness for the love of jodha, for he had felt of loosing the throne where a timely meeting with Amar Singh and Omar khan would have got him the throne of Delhi.

What is the point of wailing now? Able rulers do fall in love... but they put their duty first...


Here he lived an undisturbed life where Mir khan Asma and Ismail all were ready to sacrifice their own lives in an attempt to protect his own.

Even in this town in the simplest of the ways he lived like an emperor, a kind of splendor which an emperor lives he lived.

But at the cost of so many people risking their lives to save him, he is happy to live a peaceful life here, like an Emperor? Where is your sense of responsibility Jalal😡? Image result for wake up emoticon
Your best friend injured to fight a battle for your sake... Maharana of Palampur and all Rajputs are ready to lay their lives for you... you need to give something back... pick up the reigns and be a commander... a leader!

a total worthless man who could have no aim but to roam around and lead a life like a refuge in some place dreaded him.

Why Harshu you made Jalal like this 😔

I'm angrier with you 😡

she gently covered his eyes simultaneously the clinking music of the bangles echoed in his ears as the velvety touch of her skin brought a mellow smile on his lips.

He gently caught hold of her hands and planted a soft kiss whilst breathing through the mild fragrance of her skin. She smelled like the rose buds that bloomed afresh in midst of the morning dews.

Awww 😳

I write my emotions as I read it ... ok? 🤗 so... please don't mind da

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Congrats for new thread harshu akka...
Superb update got to nw so many things going on in Jalal mind nd hw his life to a 180degree turn...
Wow one good new was Joja getting married...
Update soon nd thanks for pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update harshu dear
very well written
especially jalal POV
beautifully penned down
OK first I thought you added some more new characters but than it clears that vimla and guru charan is Ismail and asma
thank God
both know jalal very well and they also know that jalal don't leaving this place because of jodha
but they both loves jodha dearly
both protecting and waiting for badri and someone else also
love their lovely and dovely talk
both behaving like typical wife and husband
wait both are married na
guru charan don't want any higher position
because he very well know that power bring trouble
woah they also know that emperor is good for nothing
and another great news both jodha and jalal getting married
but I guess jodha don't know about this
its a surprise for her
Mir Khan doing all things all alone
smart person
but why vimla worried for betal shop
both are doing double role
and nobody notice this and jodha also don't even know this
mahajan is Ismail brother in law
and he is spy of Mirza
everything is well plan
but they are playing dangerous game
OK new character ranima
I think she is jodha mother because you said you going to mention about her
seems like she is powerful person
everybody respect her
jalal I really disappointed with him.
everybody trying hard and fought for him so that he ascend the throne but he is doing nothing
when his dear friend need him most he was not there for him
at last he lost his life for him
Omar Khan also trying to bring back him from surajgarh but he is blind by love
I understand he loves jodha but that does not mean he forget his responsibility
love should be his strength not weakness
I thought at least one son of emperor is smart but he is proving wrong
now I understand why everybody loves Ahmed more
this is harshu fault not jalal
but I hope in future he prove himself
ganga we yet to know about her
she is doing lot for jalal but why
another new character
maharana of palampur
he is ready to help jalal
I hope jalal grab this opportunity
and last part was best
both love bird in dreamland
waiting eagerly for their wedding

so beautiful banner dear
perfect for story
thanks for pm




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing chapter Harshu😊
Lovely banner Avika⭐️
Congrats for new thread🥳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Super Update Dear
Loved Guru Charan And Vimla Convo
So You Added One More Character Ranima A Strong Character
Jalal Loves Jodha A Lot , But Please Give Strong Jalal Who Fullfill His Responsibility , Jodha's Love Should Be His Strength Na Not Weakness
Wooow JoJA Marriage On The Way
Waiting For That !!
Thanks For Pm Dear
Update Next Part Soon

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