AkDha OS- New Beginning.... - Page 2

Harshu,Beautifully written 👏
U Took 3 scenes from ja
1)DEK scene
2)The first Night scene
3) The scene where jalal made jodha eat the food doing bahana of getting hurt.
Plus all flashbaxk..All scenes combined with the disalogues in to the short story perfectly recreated it visually infront of my eyes.
😊

Awesome os harshu 😛
thanks for pm..

amazing os harshu diii
Jo waited for the whole session
& saw a new side of Jalal
so cute
loved it

Beautifully inter connected scan with fb and Dek scan was like playing in front of eyes and bring wetness in eye .very well written and your twist was not only superb but lovely and eye opning for her. it's really a start of their changing thoughts makes title apt. 😃

fantastic os dear
flashback remind me the initial days of ja

it was just like deja vu ... Reliving Akdha, thanks a ton for the os loved it to the core, and for the pm

Thanks , Harshu for the OS. Enjoyed it very much. Not knowing Hindi, had to do a lot of guesswork but I think I got the gist of it.

Wow harshu. You brought back old memories. you are an excellent writer. Pls write more shots.

woah harshu
what a beautiful surprise dear
after reading this shot
I am recalling old episodes of show
it made me emotional
very well written
perfect dialogues you added
especially Hindi ones
the magic which Hindi create na
was something else dear
you write scenes which happen in show but you add twist in your way
which I really like it
I love deewane e aaam scene
jalal attitude and jodha condition is perfect
l like moti because she stop jodha leaving nor she miss jalal this side
after deewane e aaam their situation was so different
for the first time jalal sleep peacefully but jodha condition is different from jalal
harshu dear
thank you for writing this os
really I enjoy reading it
plz dear never dishearten with response
you know na how much we like your work
like your story, musings and os
you put so much effort in your every work
plz write in future also
thanks for pm