AkDha OS- New Beginning.... - Page 5

Originally posted by: harshu27

This was a refreshing memoir of the golden days of our favourite show... just the way we relive them thru your retro threads, so was this😛

A soft smile lit up his face but then the next moment it vanished when he recalled her refusal of accepting the farman issued for her being declared the winner that bruised his ego, instantly anger ripped through him. He decided to avenge for the humiliation in his own way and an evil smirk crept on his lips.

You've written this part beautifully... I could almost imagine the scenes unfolding ...🤗

Deewane e Aaam...

Just in a moment the announcement echoed the DEA of jalal's arrival, where he royally appeared in front of all his awam and positioned himself on his royal seat. His dynamic personality had left everyone in admiration. All hailed his name, but his face bore a serious look.

Here comes the Shahensha-e-Hindustaan... with his classic adaab!

The man was taken as prisoner whilst, his wife advanced further and cried out, "Aap aisa nahi kar sakte galat kya kaha unhone,niyam raja aur praja ki liye toh ek hi hote hai aur fir apne bhi toh ek hindu rajkumari se bhya kiya hai aapne toh unka dharma badalne ke liye unhe majhboor toh nahi kiya fir aap hume kyun majhboor kar rahe hai?" (english: You cant do like this,what wrong did he do, the laws should be same for both the emperor and the subjects and you too have married a hindu princess and never forced her to change her religion then y r u forcing us to change our religion?)

This scene was so realistically etched, you're always good with these conversations... and here you have gone an extra mile to use different colours and fonts for better impact! Wow! 👏

"Chalo, moti yaha hume aur ek kshana bhi nahi rukhna hai" (english: Come, moti ,i do not want to stay here for a moment also.) saying so she was about to leave when moti stopped her and said, "Rukho jodha, dekhte hai iss bache ka kya faisla lete hai shenshah".(english: Wait, jodha let us see what verdict the emperor passes for the young boy.)

So this was the twist, Jodha stays there till the end! 😆. Unfortunately our CVs never managed to solve misunderstandings without some arm-grabbing, teeth-clenching tashn 😉

On moti's request jodha stopped and watched how the things would turn out to be for that young boy who with hands joining asked, "Mere liye kya aadesh hai aapka?" (english: What is your command for me?)

Beautiful 👏

Jalal whilst hugging the boy he ordered his soldiers, "Iske walidain ko riha kiya jaaye, iska ghar, sab kuch lauta diya jaaye". (english: His parents should be released and his house everything should be returned back.)

He departed his hug and left but not before uttering the parting words, "Ek walidain ki eimiyat kya hoti hai woh humse pooche, unke bina puri duniya fateh kar sakte hai per woh insaan andhar se akela mehsoos karta hai". (english: What is the importance of a parent one should ask me, without them he might conquer the entire world but he feels lonely within.)

He spoke to the young boy, "Tumhare walidain se kehna ki bhale hi badshah ne unhe sazaa di ho per khuda ke bande ne unhe mauf kar diya hai" (english: You tell your parents that even if the emperor had punished them but the follower of god forgiven them).saying so he leaves behind a happy and joyful boy who seemed to have been overwhelmed by this gesture of the emperor.

All of this was so well written... kudos! 👏

At night...

She stood near the window whilst rolling a lock of hair, as she recalled the entire scenario that had taken place in DEA in the morning, the couple being punished and the young boy's innocent questions and the scene where jalal had hugged the young boy who looked vulnerable at that moment and ordered the release of his parents everything seemed to have flashed in front of her eyes.

I was wondering why you didn't add suitable pictures from the episode, you must be having a reserve full of them 😆... but ur description was good enough!

It was night time when she retired for the day as the day long journey and the wedding rituals had taken a toll on her body.

He stealthily entered her khema his face turned red in anger but just by seeing the epitome of beauty sleeping peacefully on the bed all his anger seemed to have vanished into thin air.

He admired her beauty whilst slowly approached her, which is when jodha who got a clue of his arrival prepared herself to attack him with a dagger, holding her dagger just at the right moment his eyes spat anger and passion whilst closing the distance between them he said, "Agli baar aapke hifazat ke liye koi khanjar ki zaroorat nahi kyunki humare hote hue aapko kisise khauf khaane ki zaroorat nahi, aapko har kisam ke khatre se bachane ke liye hum hai, per humse apko bachane ke liye... koi nahi". (english: Next time for ur protection no need to carry d dagger wid u coz wen m der u no need to fear from anyone coz m der to protect u from any dangers but who will save u from me... none).

Saying so with an evil smirk he leaves behind petrified jodha.

One of my favourite scenes from the show...

Morning...

Jodha initially hesitated but then her commitments as wife made her feed him. After everything was done jalal left the khema and instantly removed the bandage which had been tied on his hand supposedly for his injury, he left having an evil smirk on his lips.

Jodha who happened to come at the nick of the moment saw him throwing the bandage and was left shocked to see his cruelty.

Another favourite scene...

But today's incident in DEA had made her see two sides of jalal. For the first time she happened to see soft side of jalal and even though she retired for the day but sleep was far from her eyes as whatever she had witnessed today couldn't get off her mind, with a ray of hope that somewhere her life would get better as the time passed by.

Ameen!! To her wish... and wow for this part in green to you 👏

However, if only she knew that jalal had a very much a big heart inside him around which he had built a wall to avoid from further betrayals from the very people whom he loved the most.

That she will learn...😉

On the other hand, jalal seemed to have had a peaceful night for the first time probably, after the verdict he had passed in DEA that had brought a smile on the face of that young boy.

So many wow moments together... loved it to the core! Thank you so much for this story...

With lots of love ❤️