JA FF : Warriors in Love (Chap 6 Part 2 on Pg 33)

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May

@MaySultan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Thank you for updating and the pm. Chapter was interesting
as usual.

Manvati has announced
that prospective grooms will be found for Hira and Shivani. Such oppsite
reactions from both sisters. Ha ha - Hira hoping marriage will cure Shivani's
craziness.😆

Jalal doesn't seem
to be a heartless man in this story, as yet. He is grappling with unknown feelings
where Hira is concerned. Feelings that are sidetracking him from his goals in
coming to Amer.

A new entry -
Roshni - seems intriguing. Curious to know how she is related to Jalal. Jalal's identity as a Mughal is known to Hira now - she will be devastated but it
remains to be seen how she deals with it. Wonderful update.

Thank you once again.

Thank you so much for your comment! Haha, I think that when it comes to men, Sukanya and Hira are polar opposites. 😃

Roshni's relation to Jalal and a few more details about her will be revealed in chapter 3. 😉

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May

@MaySultan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
Excellent update

Thanks for reading, glad you think so! 😳

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May

@MaySultan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY

No problem buddy!!
Poor Rajkumari, complicated situation she is in now. But it won't get easier. 😆

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priyadogra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Nice chapter

I liked when hira was angry to see roshni with ja although she didnt know why

Update soon and thanks for the pm

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May

@MaySultan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: priyadogra
Nice chapter
I liked when hira was angry to see roshni with ja although she didnt know why
Update soon and thanks for the pm

I loved writing that too!! 😊

The feedback on this chapter is lesser than I expected.

When the feedback is higher; hopefully soon, I'll update.

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Mavaddat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

loved every bit of the update ... wow so hira is getting jeko but dont know the reason
update soon ur pace is slow yaa...
thanks for pm
n sorry for late reply
By the way could you please tell me ur good name

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May

@MaySultan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: harrystyolic
loved every bit of the update ... wow so hira is getting jeko but dont know the reason
update soon ur pace is slow yaa...
thanks for pm
n sorry for late reply
By the way could you please tell me ur good name

Happy that you enjoyed

Haha yeah she's jealoous

Sorry about the slow pace, life's busy & since this story is bilingual I have to write the same chapter twice. 😆 I'll try to update sooner this week.

My name is Meryem 😊

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Read your story in one go and really like how Jodha and jalal are getting attracted towards each other.now Jodha also know jalal's truth. Waiting to know Jodha's reaction

Update soon and do pm me

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May

@MaySultan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
Read your story in one go and really like how Jodha and jalal are getting attracted towards each other.now Jodha also know jalal's truth. Waiting to know Jodha's reaction

Update soon and do pm me

😲 New reader!! Welcome to this story, glad you enjoyed and thanks so much for reading (in one go, that is awesome. 👏)

I'll PM you for sure! The next chapter is in writing process at the moment.