JA FF : Warriors in Love (Chap 6 Part 2 on Pg 33)

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JA FF : Warriors in Love
PROLOGUE


Everybody who knew her praised Rajvanshi Rajkumari Hira Kunwari's kindness and innocence. But she wasn't only innocent, as they thought. She was also a warrior.


"Your daughter will change."
"What do you mean by that, Shagoni Bai?"


"She'll be stronger. Strong enough to rebel against the wrong ideas that the Rajvanshis have in mind. And strong enough to love someone she's supposed to hate.
Hira will marry a Mughal."




Aapke naam Hira Kunwari nahi hai. Ab se apane naam Jodha hai. (Your name isn't Hira Kunwari anymore. From now on, your name is Jodha.

Little did they know that, among the many noteworthy changes witnessed by history, their destinies would change and merge, from two to one, to tell the tale of Warriors in Love.

TBC...


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Hi everyone!
Happy to finally post an idea that's been on my mind for a while.
I know this prologue has resemblance with the show, but I can promise lots of differences from it later on. :P


Please like & share your thoughts in the comments below? Encouragement assures continuity. :) Criticism is also welcome but please don't be too harsh.
Ps - I used a translator for the sentence in Hindi so if it's incorrect, I'd be grateful to anyone who PM's me with the right sentence.







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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow thats wonderful
loved it dear
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awesome prologue dear...
please continue soon..
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Congrats for ur first story😊
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Awesome prologue dear. Please continue and congratulations for your first story.
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Interesting prologue. Especially loved the last paragraph, that's very well written. 👏


And that line in Hindi is almost correct. Only the second part should be "Ab se AAPKA naam Jodha hai."


Welcome to the Forum, btw! :)
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Very nice prologue 😛
Congratulations for ur first story
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WOW. I did not expect the JA forum to be this active. This makes me excited!!
Shukria to anyone who read, liked and/or commented. 😳

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Interesting prologue. Especially loved the last paragraph, that's very well written. 👏


And that line in Hindi is almost correct. Only the second part should be "Ab se AAPKA naam Jodha hai."


Welcome to the Forum, btw! :)


Thank you very much, both for welcoming me and for correcting the mistake. 😊 I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm starting on the first chapter & hoping you all will like it!
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congrats for ur first story
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The next chapter is in writing process, friend! I'll pm you for sure.
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