JA FF : Warriors in Love (Chap 6 Part 2 on Pg 33) - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

the 2nd chapter s nice..so the shehanshah s free frm the politics and enjyng the caring of the princess..nice..i lyk the way ja reads jo's mind regarding forgeting of name..the best part s when ja says about the fire in his heart regarding kind nature and the smile of princess..their convo s cute..i love shivani's part when she told tat her sister s lying and hiding for stranger..the words about the blood s gud..i wonder hw she ll react when she will come to knw abt jalal..the next part may involve more convo btwn jo and ja in the aspect of jo want to knw more abt warrior but really i dnt have any idea abt the next part dear..u have ur own ideas na..?waiting for update and thanks for pm..


That was Sukanya dear, but turns out you have got an idea, since Rajkumari Shivani will be appearing in the next part. 😊😆
Thank you very much for reading & commenting!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-


I know right... Even I love capturing their reactions into words... my one shots are all like that. 😆


BTW, by actions I meant their gestures, not fights and battles. 😆


Yes, checked and replied.


Ah, not fights & battles? 😃😆
Oops. Because I love love love their bickering I thought that's what you meant.
Thanks for replying friend!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Enjoyed the chapter a lot. Really surprising- Hira acting out of character for a soldier she knew not anything about. But who can fight destiny?
Jalal is already captivated by her beauty and kindness while she sees pain and strength in him and is eager to know more about the stranger. Rani Manvati is in for the shock of life while the Queen Mother is wise enough to grasp whatever is going on.
The sisters' lighthearted banter is delightful.
Awaiting another interesting update. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Meryem... Even I love their lil banters a lot dear. But that doesn't come under action right? So do include lots of fights between them. 😆 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Enjoyed the chapter a lot. Really surprising- Hira acting out of character for a soldier she knew not anything about. But who can fight destiny?

Jalal is already captivated by her beauty and kindness while she sees pain and strength in him and is eager to know more about the stranger. Rani Manvati is in for the shock of life while the Queen Mother is wise enough to grasp whatever is going on.
The sisters' lighthearted banter is delightful.
Awaiting another interesting update. Thanks for the PM.


indeed, Hira's actions are surprising but who can blame her? Kindness took over. 😳
Rani Manvati is not only going to receive a shock, she will create one...But no spoilers!
The sister banter is really fun to write, I can promise more of it.

Thanks for your comment & for reading! ⭐️

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing chappy dear
Joja part was the best speciaaly the shy one and also the teekha wala part
Update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyadogra

Amazing chappy dear

Joja part was the best speciaaly the shy one and also the teekha wala part
Update soon and thanks for the pm


That awkward moment when I don't speak Hindi & don't understand what teekha wala means? 🤢
Please let me know dear 😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
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a nice update..love the suganya convo with jodha..her teasing talk for her sister..and the jodha jalal part was so cute..esp the part where ja asks abt the fire in his heart because of her kind nature and beauty..and jo worried for his small pain..i wonder what wl be her reaction regardn his true identity..the poetic lines about blood s nice..thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dellaakdha

a nice update..love the suganya convo with jodha..her teasing talk for her sister..and the jodha jalal part was so cute..esp the part where ja asks abt the fire in his heart because of her kind nature and beauty..and jo worried for his small pain..i wonder what wl be her reaction regardn his true identity..the poetic lines about blood s nice..thanks for pm dear..


You're welcome & thanks for the comment! Her reaction is going to take some time, but it's on the way dear 😛 Patience!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Update will be posted at the end of this week. 😊

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