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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

where????😕 plz share the link.

As writer shahiba is posting it now other wise I saw which kalgi quoted.

Edited by melovesja - 8 years ago

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: lashy

You know what Rose... I have realised that this is my problem... I multitask... too much sometimes... 😕

Heartbroken Sandy ran away 🥺... even the pic of Jalal kissing her hand didn't bring her back... 😭

@ Payaliya... I'll post teaser again da.. I removed it... because some naughty girl here was making fun of my AMK.. 😡
But wait... you haven't even read the last chapter 😆😕

Yesh yesh i too was searching d tzr pic bttr post it fast😡😉😆

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: lashy

She's amazing, isn't she? She writes so well... and has such an AMAZING command of the language... not once have I noticed a mistake anywhere ... in any of her posts... uses language that sounds stylish and yet simple enough that one wouldn't have to google up to find its meaning...
👏

Btw, Sandy this is from my observation of your posts over the years not just this poem!

And I really think you should state 'poetry' in your talent-list.. it's not amateurish by any means!

As for the poem itself - it covers the three parts (nearly 4) parts of Heera's life... though one slowly overlaps another... first her happy days, then the mishap, followed by her stay at Aidabad and the unexpected brush-in with the stranger/the effect he has on her, with her dilemma about leaving now... 👏 Wonderful da...

I completely agree with you... don't know if it an inherent gift of finesse God partially gave her or she's the one taking up so much effort to achieve all that. I am awed 👏

Now Lashy di, I want to pm you something important. Something I had typed previously and deleted the post. But I will wait for your permission. Can I send you the pm??

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Ufff...

only sandy begum !

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

only sandy begum !

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: melovesja

As writer shahiba is posting it now other wise I saw which kalgi quoted.

ok😊

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
She did not even "Like" my poem.😕😒

But everything is forgiven for the Heera and AMK she has given us.😃

It's a beautiful mistake, I made, Sandy Begum ☺️

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

I'll edit it slightly post it again...

Here's a hug to you 🤗

@ Aisu - 🤗 how's you da?

@ Durgeshnandini - still waiting for secret pm! 🤓

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago