NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 12- Chapter 17 - Page 88

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Harshu di, we are discussing your beautiful mistake which delayed HBAS update 😆

Originally posted by: lashy

Sandy Begum did you read chapter 17? 😡

Heera also does beautiful mistake na...

when she'd mistakenly grabbed his sleeve instead of the kerchief, causing his heart to briefly soar then, just as it did during every instance that he tried not to think about it thereafter. It was the most beautiful mistake she'd done -

I also did beautiful mistake... by mistaking the poem...

Originally posted by: harshu27

ohh k got it...😆😎

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

only sandy begum !

Originally posted by: lashy

🤣 + + 😭 + 😡

This is my reaction now... Suttam!

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My explanation - I was so immersed in the following paragraphs of your poem... (btw this is my 4th reply to your poem.. 😡 I've obviously read it and read it I think three times already - but kept going back to my favourite paragraphs!)

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errr... just I have selective memory problem... 😆 see I was typing this reply in the meanwhile...

Listen to Shagun and eat more badam.😆

How do I make it up to you

Awww...🤗

For my people, being their linchpin

I must display fortitude

Even when I crumble from within

By the pain of solitude

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Anguish and worries that I cannot erase

And Fears of unknown danger

Have pushed me to seek breathing space

By Hiding behind a stranger

Breathing space by hiding behind a stranger Hayoo suits the edit for 18 too...

How?????😃

A stranger whose presence brings a smile

Whom I trust and respect

He makes me forget my pain for a while

With him I somehow connect

I cried out to him, my troubles galore

He surprisingly understood

I wish to stay in this haven some more

Forever if I could

I LOVED THIS THE MOST...any guesses why?😉

Yayyy...Heera is not leaving Aidabad. Or coming back soon.

But I must proceed with resolve

Overcoming my ache

For my country, my people

For my motherland's sake

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😭Though my heart yearns for peace

The calm of a mother's embrace

I know my challenges cannot cease

There are combats I must face

I was wondering why you used Mother's embrace here... or were you just imagining a teenager would want that?

Nothing soothes asmuch as a mother's embrace, and Durga was more of a mother to Heera. Given Heera's loneliness and griefs and responsibilities, surely she would yearn for the kind of peace a mother's embrace can give. The pep up that says...go ahead, proceed, you are not wrong, I'm there with you and so are my prayers. The 'Aall izzz Well' comfort the embrace can give is I thought what Heera needs most.

No struggles in life can be won

By denial or by tears

Must face and fight them one by one

Till the chaos clears.

This touched me the most 😭

ThankYou.😊

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

What mistake??

Enlighten me plz😕

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

I don't know anything... ask Harshu di 😉

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

I completely agree with you... don't know if it an inherent gift of finesse God partially gave her or she's the one taking up so much effort to achieve all that. I am awed 👏

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

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Originally posted by: cute.manasi

only sandy begum !