amazing update Di
very well written
this chapter contains lot
little romance , suspense, teasing , humor and little little new feeling you know
jodha is confuse by her own behavior
this is all new to her
never been love before so she is confuse
only his presence matter her and effect her also
but at a same time she is worried for him and his family
she cares lot for him so she decide to call him but he himself call her
what a connection between them
aww in future both match each other perfectly
so barium call him because of maham
god how much maham doing mellow drama and her crocodile tears is too much
poor jalal he is so much scare why barium call him
he is scare to think something bad happen to his family
how much he relief to see his family
but little angry also with maham drama
barium soften with maham tears so he want jalal to withdraw adham case
how sad they don't understand how adham is
he is most disgusting men he deserve all the punishment
how much he trouble nafisa and jodha
jalal is confuse what to do or not because this time adham mess with jalal dear ones
first his soul sister and another his girl whom he started liking
but he respect barium so he unable to decide
so he ask solution to jodha because she is who did all thing to put adham in behind bars
poor girl how much she suffer because of adham
but she trust jalal so much so she leave all that decision up to him
this prove how much she trust him without any doubt
OK so jalal free adham but he is planning something big for him
he is surely don't leave him easily
description of jalal is so well written
of course he is looking more than handsome so that jodha also admiring him
love the canteen scene most
is always fun to read when all friends are together
poor Abdul without any his fault he is in trouble
side effect of love
Reva want every detail of their imaginary bachelor party
but jodha don't believe them
and jalal impress with her but they dont want her to involve in their plan
of course they don't her trouble more and of course jalal care for her lot also
and scare because of her never give up attitude
but jodha pissed off and angry over her friends
but jalal enjoying her cute angry avatar
and all ready with their plan
Abdul and Reva play Mr and Mrs ayyer
poor them all are teasing love birds
everybody waiting for adham
jalal is such a caring person
and Abdul is also he care for his buddy
when jalal say Abdul to feed something to moti but he is with Reva na
or I miss something here or writing mistake
plz tell me this
god jodha she can't say away from trouble
jalal is so shock to see her
but jodha laughing at jalal and Abdul
both disguise themselves in tamilian men and sardarji
both are fighting like little kids
both are in trouble because of jodha dupatta
but this trouble is quite good for jalal
poor jalal so shock with sudden hug
jodha don't have any idea how much jalal controlling himself
adham teasing them as a random couple having fun behind pillars
but receive angry glare from jalal because his lustful eyes over his girl
god adham is so shameless
he want girl to spend night how disgusting
he don't have any guilt
he deserve harsh punishment
how innocently jodha ask jalal is he OK after beautiful encounter between them like she don't understand anything
poor jalal sweating because of desire for jodha
but this sweet incident effect jodha also
hmmm so who is the girl jalal waiting
big question but I guess she is not nafisa
may be moti or rukaiya I guess so may be I am wrong
Di everything write so beautifully
so that I imagine all scenes
that's the beauty of your writing
you are so good in suspense or you watch lot suspense type of show
he he just joking
I hope you are fine
stay happy always
love the chapter
waiting eagerly for next chapter
thanks for pm
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