Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct

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swetiii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#671

wow di
lovely update
Jo was all worried for Jalal..
she couldn't even concentrate on her novel
Hehe
I know how difficult it is to snatch someone's attention who is immersed in novel
🤣

woah
Jalal called at the nick time
he shared his problem with her
& Jo trusted in his decision

he was purposefully angering our Jo
🤣
amazing
but this stubborn lady
when had she listened to someone
she came in there ignoring Jalal's warning
brave girl
😆
she hugged him 😳 ...*blush*
tightly *blush blush*
Jalal gone in akdha land *blush blush blush*
Jo embarrassed but recovered herself
poor Jalal
was so busy in controlling himself that he totally lost himself
his reply...
"don't be"
🤣
fab
loved it

but who is the girl
this adham is a bas***d
even drooling over Jo when she is in her man's arms...
but Jalal shooed him away
🤣
loved it diii
love u diii
muaah
update asap

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swetiii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: avika444

Toh start na ...who stopped u😉

ur beautiful update
<<still in akdha land... dreaming about their passionate hug>>

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eshalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#673

Wonderful chapters dear
Loved it
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

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Avika444

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Posted: 8 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: swetiii

ur beautiful update
<<still in akdha land... dreaming about their passionate hug>>

What an amazing excuse ...

Jajo parted long time back and u r still in akdha land ...

Aaja baccha bahar aaja 😆

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harshal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#675

wonderful update avi...😛 so adham turned out to b maham's cousin 😲wat a twist till now mny ppl in der ff had shown adham as maham's son but here u chnged it to cousin😆 good work avi...😉 and jallu's plan seems intersting and deadly too...😉i was laughing imagining abdul in tamilian attire...😆and jallu as sardar 😆 and not to frgt joja spl moments behind d pillar😛😉both of dm's hearts were racing and butterflies in der stomach and all...😆😉it was cute one...😃dis adham is really disgusting...🤢total besharam 🤢anyways waiting fr ur next update...😳

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swetiii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: avika444

What an amazing excuse ...
Jajo parted long time back and u r still in akdha land ...
Aaja baccha bahar aaja😆

🤣
how can I diii
thinking about the effect it had on Jalal 😆

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Avika444

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Posted: 8 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: swetiii

🤣
how can I diii
thinking about the effect it had on Jalal 😆

Jalal pe jo asar hua ...hua

Par tumpe toh kuch zyada hi ho gaya 😆

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swetiii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: avika444

Jalal pe jo asar hua ...hua
Par tumpe toh kuch zyada hi ho gaya😆

directly proportional... me & him 😳
heart to heart connection
🤣

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Avika444

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Posted: 8 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: swetiii

directly proportional... me & him 😳
heart to heart connection
🤣

😆😆

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Avika444

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Posted: 8 years ago

#680

Originally posted by: misty22
Avi diii.. Finally u updated.. Ws awaiting since long...
Misty 🤗 aww u were waiting for the update ...so sweet yaar .
D chappy ws sooo bfulll...
Thanks a lot dearie 😊
Soo cute mesmerising nd lk a fairytale...
Baba re ...fairytale
Jo nd noor 's bonding... Its soo cute.. Nd aww my poor baby... She ws really soo scared..
Im happy that u liked Jodha and Noor's bonding
Bt our angel ws dere to sv her.. Hey dii.. Is noor scared of maham cz she s strict or cz of smthng else... Really curious to know...
For now ...Noor is only scared of Maham's strict behaviour ...will get to know about Maham in upcoming chapters dear .
Soo my lazy head is up... D way u described ja s look.. I ws sooo impressed... Cd really fantasise all before my eyes.. My ja wd be lukin so hot...
Ahem ahem...so u like Jalal's attire..haan ...ofcourse he looks handsome after all he took a little extra care to dress up today 😉
Nd aww he ws disappointed thinkin he jo wnt hm...
Hehehe...it took no time for his dissapointment turn into best day 😆
Here he saw jo... Lucky day...
See ..told u 😉
Woah so mr has a fxd menu.. (lk me)... Bt d main dish paratha...
Awiee...so u both have similarities...
Heee all were lukin at jo lk an alien.. Of course sge served him lk a wifey... Wich she ll be soon...
Hahaha...yes soon she will be his wife 😉
I ws literally on d verge of cryin seeing d emotional part.. I mean ja misses his mom soo much...
Aww no more tears in Jalal's life dearie ...Jodha is there na 😳
He ws also cryin silently...
Hmm ...poor him
Jo is really an angel...
Nd wow hamida gifted jo her chain... Soo cute na...
Hehehe...Hamida reciprocated Jodha's unknown kind deed ..thats it
Naughty ja admiring jo...
Nd d last part sooo cute...
Glad u liked tht part dear
Who ws dat watching dem...
Think think 😉
Awsmmm chappy diii.. Lvd it...
Thnku fr pm nd update asap...
👏