OS: ||A Night After Chittor Siege|| - Page 6

Originally posted by: piya58

Woow Supurb written dear
Thanku

wow super story ya..it s just needed aftr the war..the two souls they r unitd bt she cant understand her warior husband as a human..u just did justice to two human who r at right place in their way..such a thoughtful OS..perfct..u r just superb..

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

wow super story ya..it s just needed aftr the war..the two souls they r unitd bt she cant understand her warior husband as a human..u just did justice to two human who r at right place in their way..such a thoughtful OS..perfct..u r just superb..

u have beautifully portrayed war between a mugal begam and a daughter of rajputana..she has defeated in both situation...encounter with His Majesty is so intriguing...i love the way u have written the whole conversation..i am stunned reading His Majesty inner acceptance, a mere child has turned a victory into a defeat.i hope in future will get this type of oses...thanks a lot making my day and for pm.

u have beautifully portrayed war between a mugal begam and a daughter of rajputana..she has defeated in both situation...encounter with His Majesty is so intriguing...i love the way u have written the whole conversation..i am stunned reading His Majesty inner acceptance, a mere child has turned a victory into a defeat.i hope in future will get this type of oses...thanks a lot making my day and for pm.

Awesome os stuti...

Fabulous OS
beautifuly written
loved it

thnks for pm

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

u have beautifully portrayed war between a mugal begam and a daughter of rajputana..she has defeated in both situation...encounter with His Majesty is so intriguing...i love the way u have written the whole conversation..i am stunned reading His Majesty inner acceptance, a mere child has turned a victory into a defeat.i hope in future will get this type of oses...thanks a lot making my day and for pm.

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Awesome os stuti...

This is very emotional one...

War is one thing which will do unacceptable thing in life...

Jalal is a winner for d world but a loose to himself...

I like d way jodha was opened nd supportive to jalal...

Thanks for os nd pm...

Originally posted by: anu012

Fabulous OS
beautifuly written
loved it

thnks for pm