OS: ||A Night After Chittor Siege||

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: harshu27
wonderful os dear...u have written so well could imagine all d feelings which a war brings... war can never bring harmony and peace as it can only bring destruction to d mankind...😕 keep coming more...stuti...😛

Thank you so much...🤗

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: alffim
Dear Stuti!

I like everything that you write, but it's the strongest and the best!
Thank you so much!🤗 This one is the piece behind which I spent the longest time.
No one could not convey feelings Jodha. Not only a great love for her husband, faithful to her homeland, but the understanding of the value of any life against the war.
...Jalal took Jodha's head in his chest; Jodha did not protest, she only started to care the wound of his hand, which was deep enough and had not been cured yet, with her gentle touch. A drop of tear fell on his hand suddenly...

"You are angry on me. Isn't it?" Jalal said suddenly. Jodha nodded her head with the sign of negation and hugged him passionately. No! How can she be angry with the man of her heart?

"You had not come to me meet me once from morning. And not talking with me even now!" Jalal said in a sad voice. "I am feeling that the rhythm of our relationship has somehow broken! Has this war torn the thread of our relationship?"

"Nothing can create distance between you and me Shahenshah!" Jodha told confidently. "But I was thinking one thing only from morning!"...
Love is so incredible between both of them that the emperor is afraid to lose the feeling of love his wife and Jodha not afraid to say everything she thinks, knowing that Jalal is not only her husband but also the Emperor.
Yes, their love and understanding is wonderful which I have tried to show here. 😳

Feeling a Pyrrhic victory, this understanding Jalal and understanding the impossibility of any other way to save the Empire ... Perhaps he could reduce the losses, perhaps he would not allow the conversion of his men into beasts ... But the truth is, that he first became this beast...
Right you are... But the expansion of the empire and to touch the peak perhaps this bloodshed and brutality is needed!

I have little time today, but I will be re-read again. Thank you!

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your view.⭐️😃

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misty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Amazing... I literally found myself completely involved... D way u described dere perspectives... Can't imagine dis perfection... Jalal insane side nd dt darkness of his soul.. Jodha s defeat nd her fears... Dere love... Everything ws beyond my imagination... Indeed hd dis been shown in d show it wd hv been to another level... Thnku... 👏

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: misty22
Amazing... I literally found myself completely involved... D way u described dere perspectives... Can't imagine dis perfection... Jalal insane side nd dt darkness of his soul.. Jodha s defeat nd her fears... Dere love... Everything ws beyond my imagination... Indeed hd dis been shown in d show it wd hv been to another level... Thnku... 👏

Thank you so much for such a heartfelt comment dear! 😃

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
My god stuti , it was sensational...😳

Thank you so much Manu!

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: eshalli
Wow stuti..dis is such a wonderful os
I have no words to tell..
I really love it
While reading I feel like to cry.
U done a great job
Thxc u 4r pm

Thank you so much dear. 😳

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri
khuuub sundor re... ek emperor k Taj k andar kinte kante hote h...ek Mahan samrat banne k lie kahi na kahi krurta zaruri h... I was a history student... once our teacher said "that every mad or crisp person can't b an emperor or king, Bt sometimes to be a powerful king, to show your power to d world you have to be crual and mad about siege and war"man ki woh baat Teri Ye OS ne aaj 3 saal bad for yaar dila di when ever we read about akbar, we have to read his siege, many of u didn't know that in his 59age he faught his last war and capture ASIRGARH fort which is in deccan. I feel if his life was more long, he may be conquer the whole hindusthan. Bt as a history student I can't deny his violent act on Cittorgarh fort and killed 90000of people (stuti tui killed people ta vul diechis it will have to b 90000 not 30000. I know u love akbar Bt 60000 komabi Taai bole!!! ha ha) and may b I feel ashamed of his act as a kind hearted emporer Bt I am still glad that that was his first and last violent act.we all love him as a monarch. Bt being an emporer how tough b to it we 21st century people never assumed. thank you stuti, for picking up this topic. if u need any help or want to know any angle or view of akbar and his life...I will ever ready ro help u btw one more thing. I am very much jealous on your writing skills. though I got lettermarks in my high school in english still I can tell u are better writer n toper selector than me... keep it up and give us more interesting views of this diamond of our world!!!

Thank you for such an awesome comment.😳 Right you are! In an addiction of power and throne how many innocent lives get to be sacrificed!

What I feel about Akbar, he was very ambitious and strategist emperor who owned a liberal and progressive view about human and society... His greatness envelops the strains with his name in History. But this Chittor siege remained the greatest stigma in his glowing personality till today! Yes it was the first and last time he needed to be that much cruel, but after that he was not converted unlike Asoka the great... However, I don't think he was a bloodthirsty ruthless demon, only a strategist warrior who can go to any extent when needed!

Oh it's 90000? I knew wrong then. (Akbar er proti bhalobasa bosoto sonkhya nie karchupi korini. 🤣 ) Is 90000 the total number of death in the war or the death in the massacre held later winning the war?

And come on, you too write very well. No need to be jealous of my writing. 😆 I will never be able to write sensual and passionate scenes like you. 😳

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
It was fantastic. No amount of defensive words can overcome the cruelty of war

Yes you are right! 😔 thank you btw. 😊

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

So, here I am... how do you do my darling Debastuti di?

What have you done? Ki darun golpo likhechho 👏👏👏

It was a pleasure reading it to the bits...

The war, the hatred, blood bath, loss of lives... no war ends up in a positive note... for not all emperors are born Alexander, a man who treated kings as kings because he was a king...

All the questions that Jodha asked... all the darkness that filled Jalal's heart, clouding the joy of fulfilled ambition, are very relevant... that very same darkness fills so many corners of this world, the child Jalal saw standing aside a heap of corpses, clueless and lost... reside in some bleak patch of this very Earth.

Ages ago, the man in your signature had dreamed of a child too, lonely and confused, sitting on the steps of a shrine, and the steps were bathed in blood!!!

The child had asked frantic, "Ato rokto keno?"("why there's so much blood? "). The dream proves itself true till this day. 😕

You have a flair for writing to the relevant topics, which is something I absolutely adore about you!!

You're a bold author, for you brazenly end your story where it must and end them sad, if need be so... kudos to you for all your dare!!👏⭐️

There was something very natural and yet very strong about this scene you have imagined. A heart to heart discussion between a husband and wife, the Emperor and His Empress... far more logical than screaming-in-the-middle-of-a-battlefield scenes , that our honourable serial makers come up with. 😆

The mention of Chittor, the proud warriors of the soil, the Maharana Eklingeshwar, stirred some beautiful, nostalgic memories out of Rajkahini, one of the timeless classics by Abanindranath Tagore... it's a marvellous creation... tumi porechho , tai naa?

At the end, all I can say is, whatever you have written was splendid, your ideas critical, you reasoned all so very well, wittily crafted words, it made a crispy read... so be proud of yourself!!!!

For, where the mind is without fear, and the head is held high... success shall be all yours (i.e, I loved your signature, and loved you for choosing it😉).

Bhalo theko!!!

Edited by durgeshnandini - 9 years ago