Akdha TS:Proud (Complete) - Page 10

Originally posted by: avika444

Res pls

Will comment after 23rd sherry

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome ts..
loved it

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

second part as usual superb
love Mirza teasing
but jodha support jalal
finally both engage
but poor jalal had to leave on engagement day
jodha not able to control her emotions
jalal give her letter
I just love his letter
you superbly write that part
he want jodha think about them last time
he beautifully describe his feeling
at last jodha understand that
everybody shock after watching TV news about jalal
jodha know he come back to her
finally jalal arrived
everybody so proud of him
jalal see proud in jodha eyes
which he always want
love the song you added
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: eshalli

Awesome ts dear
I really love dis concept
U done a gud job on describe their feeling nd emotions
Thxc 4r pm

Originally posted by: shyana3

Awesome story
jalal is saved
Thnks for pm

Originally posted by: ..Prii1994..

Where is Sush???

Finally herr dream of getting a Patriotic theme on JoJa came true...

Sheru, I truly really loved the concept... ❤️

So cute and genuine!!!!!

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Fantastic Sherry dear

Wonderful concept
Beautiful scripting
Perfect blend of emotions and duty towards nation
Loved this patriotic version of JoJa❤️

Originally posted by: sony23akdha

awesome ts dear.. 👏 ⭐️
i just loved it 😳
thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: avishi467

Awsme chapter Cherry di.d last lome u wrote is true.wbwryone should be proud of civilians.as usual akdha rocked.thanx fr pm

Originally posted by: misty22

Awsm. Awsm. Awsm. Awsm... U know wd dat plane crash my heart too ws sinkin... Bt ur grt... Really.. Its a true patriotic nd lovey ts... Thnku...grt...hats off.. Muah... I m sad dat it ended.. Bt dii. Update all ur stories too.. Plsh... 👏😳