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Hi guys i thought of updating A TS on our independence day
So here it is
Hope u all like it
Part-1
Maina:which one u like jii;asked maina while going through photos of boys for her ladli daughter
Bharmal:All r good but still no one is able to catch my inner sight; while looking at another photo
Maina:same is the case with me
Bharmal:So lets just ask the one for whom for we r doing all this
On this maina nod
Maina:Jodha laddo come down;shouts maina
Jodha:Ji maa
coming;saying this jodha comes down running on the stairs
Maina:Slowly laddo why u came running
Jodha:U called na
i thought there is something important so came hurriedly; said in one go while taking deep breaths
Bharmal:Jodha we called u to show u photos of boys
Jodha:Oh why; asked while giving confusing look
Maina:For ur marriage purpose
Hearing marriage word jodha starting blushing and immediately controls herself realizing her parents presence
Jodha:U remember my condition na maa
Maina:Yes laddo we asked for pics according to it
No boy from civil services
Jodha:yes especially from solider,navy officer,air force officer etc types
Bharmal:Yes beta we strictly instruct that so there is no such one in this pphotos
Hearing this jodha start looking at photos from far
Bharmal:If u dont want to see before us then u can look at ur room;said the understanding father on which jodha shyly nods
With this bharmal left the place
Maina:See from ur heart laddo not from the looks;said while caressing jodhas hair affectionately and with this she too lefts
After their leaving jodha start gathering all pics for taking them in her room but suddenly a pic fall from table leaving all pics jodha picks that one and the moment she turns it her eyes gets fix on the photo
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In jodhas room
Jodha while laying on bed still fixing her eyes on that photo talking to herself
Jodha:He is so handsome and his smile, eyes makes me feel like he is kind from heart too
Her self talks gets disturb with knock on door
Maina:So laddo selected anyone;asked while entering in room along with bharmal
Hiding the pic under pillow
Jodha:Wo..h maa i am st..ill thi..nking
Catching her hiding the pic maina smiles and moves towards jodha
Maina:Oh so i guess u too didn't Liked anyone
On this jodha remains silent and looks on other side
Maina skillfully takes out the pic from pillow and smiles and shows pic to bharmal
we nod to each other
Maina:But we liked one for u
Hearing this
Jodha:whom
On this maina shows the pic to jodha and seeing the pic jodha shys and hugs both bharmal and maina
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Hamida:Jalal wait beta we want to talk with u;said the exciting mother while halting the way of their dear son
Jalal:Not now ammi
my friends r waiting for me u know na i don't get much time
Humayun:In that case u spend dont spend much time with us too beta bcoz of ur new job
Jalal:Not again abbu
U again want to argue on my job
Humayun:U have such a big empire allah knows why u want to do this civilian job
Hamida:In which whole time there is threat to life;said with teary eyes
Jalal:Ammi abbu u guys r over thinking i will be just fine
Its always my passion to do civilian job now
Humayun:But u can apply for IAS types why u choosed air force job beta
Jalal:Bcoz i want to do something for our motherland
I know u guys r worried for me and want me to quit it but i cant do that finally i get this job and one day i am sure u will be get my point
On this both kepts mum
changing the mood
Jalal:By the way why u stopped me ammi
Humayun:an alliance has came for u and
Before humayun could say further hamida starts coughing terribly
Jalal:Where is ur inhaler mom
Humayun:Its in our room, on side table of our bed;said while holding his wife
Jalal:i will just get it
Saying this jalal ahead for his parents room
In Humayun and hamidas room
Jalal enters in room fastly and reach the side table and was about to take pump when he hears his father voice
Humayun:Jalal ur ammi is k its just a coughing;shouts from living room
Hearing this jalal took sign of relief and was about to move but his eye sight fell on the photo that he mistakenly threw on the floor
He don't know why but feels the urge of seeing it and the moment he turns it and his eyes fell on that beautiful face and especially those beautiful innocent and pure eyes jalal just remain still keep on staring the photo its only the voice of his abbu that bring him back from hypnotism
Jalal:I am coming abbu;saying this jalal moves towards his parents while holding the pic
Seeing jalal coming lost in photo of the girl hamida and humayun understands everything
Hamida : so jalal u like the girl
Jalal : ji ammi;said while still lost in pic but realizing he looks towards his parents who r smirking at him
Correcting himself
Jalal : I mean who is she;asked while avoiding eye contact with his parents
Humayun :this is the girl whose alliance is came for u
Hamida :so if is it k with u can we go and meet her
On this jalal was about say yes but something stuck in his mind
Jalal : she is from civilian doing job family right u guys remember my condition right
Hamida:Yes beta i remember don't worry about that
Jalal:I will only marry to that girl who is from a civilian family especially if they r from Navy, soldier or air force type family
On this both hamida and humayun nod with a forced smile but which went unnoticed by jalal who still engross in pic
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mohumad family warmly welcomed by khan family(mohomad r jalals family and khan is jodhas family)the moment jalal enters in living room he feels strange that there r no medals or anything in decors place but then he avoided his this instinct feeling and moves ahead after settling both parents gives each other afraid smile and remembers their phone convo
Flashback
Hamida:jalal likes jodha photo he cant take his eyes off from the pic but now only hurdle is jalals condition
Maina : and jodhas condition on marriage
Hamida : so what to do about that
Maina : lets do one thing we will make them meet and talk and let them decide if they want this or not
Hamida : yes and we wont reveal the truth before
Flashback ends
Their parents eye contact breaks with jodhas entry who came in living room while holding the tea tray
Jalal who was engross in his phone call hearing chum chum sounds turns that's the moment when both eyes meet in real and seeing this effect of jodha jalal on each other both parents thoughts become more positive
Humayun : so jodha beta has u joined ur family busniss after MBA
Jodha : not really but I am still learning;replied while looking steally on jalal who is giving shocking expression
Bharmal : so jalal bets when is ur first air force mission
Hearing this question jalal comes out of his shocking state and composes himself
Jalal : no idea right but it will soon
Hearing her fathers question and jalals answer jodha gets shock too
With this both jodha and jalal gives deadly glares to their respective parents
Reading kids expression both parents start thinking of a way to take it further
Maina : I think we should let kids talk privately;suggests while looking away from jodha
Hearing this
Hamida:ya I too feel so
Reciving requesting expression from parents both jodha and jalal agrees for that and leaves towards jodhas room
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After sitting silently for 10 mins finally jodha breaks the silence
Jodha: so u too got cheated by ur parents;asked while lighting the atmosphere
Jalal:yup
On what u got cheated by them
Jodha:I don't want to marry a civilian
And what about u
Jalal:I don't want to marry the girl who is not from civilian family
Jodha:oh I think u can guess my reason for no to civilian
no hard feelings I don't want to spend my entire life waiting for my husband and with fear of something happen to him each second of my life I just want a normal life
a happy normal life
but whats ur reason for only marrying in a civilian family;asked with curiosty
Jalal:u urself explain it miss its thinking of almost all girls but a girl from civilian family wont feel that way she will understand me
Jodha:what if that type of girl too have my type of feeling u never know
Jalal:same apply for u too life is not anyones friend death threat dance on everyones head whether its civilian or non civilian u never know
Jodha:I want a boy who always walk with me not the one for whom I have to wait
Jalal:and I want a girl who waits for me with a smile always and then we can continue our walking
Jodha:I want someone who can protect me
Jalal:I want to be one who apart from protecting his wife can protect whole country
Hearing his reply
Jodha:I just cant understand one thing why u choose an air force job leaving ur business
Jalal:I want to do something for our country flying is my passion and civilian job is my dream so I make them one and joined air force;replied with a smile
Jodha:when we know each other answer why we r seating here then; said while getting up from her seat with a little tearyand hurtful eyes
Holding her arm
Jalal:I think that too I can guess bcoz we both like each other from the moment we see each others pic that's why we r finding some hope in each other and finding some way to be with each other
Right
Jodha;who said this;replied while turning her face other side
Jalal:its ur eyes who speak a lot like mine
May be this the reason our parents lie to us bcoz they saw hope in us ;answered while making her looking at himself
Jodha:but we cant live together with this
I cant live with fear my whole life jalal
Jalal:I want u to live with proud jodha
Jodha:I want to live my whole life with u jalal not in installments
Cant u quit this job and lead a normal life
Jalal:I want to live with u too jodha and our love will always fill the time which we will miss
I can but I don't want to quit it jodha
Jodha:I will die the moment something happens to u
Jalal: that day wont come we will die together surely but in each others arm
Jodha:how can u say this;asked tears escaping eyes
Jalal:our pure love and faith wont let that happen ever
All u have to do is to trust and have faith on my words;replied while weeping her escaped tear affectionately
Jodha:but
Jalal:I really want to make this happen jodha and so u I can see that
On this jodha lowers her eyes
Seeing her reaction
Jalal:I cant force I don't have any right
from my side its yes not bcoz u r beautiful but its ur honesty and purity that's most beautiful
ur decision will be last;saying this jalal about to leave but halts due to tug on his hand
jodha:what if I say I give u authority to force me on my decision and what if I say its ur honesty and purity which blowed me too and what if I say I made my decision
jalal:what is it
Jodha:whats ur is my;said shyly
Hearing this jalal holds jodhas chin and make her eyes meet his
Jalal;really?
Jodha:really;replied with truth,love and fear look
Reading her eyes expression
Jalal:I hope one day there will be only love and proud for our relation not fear jodha;jalal hopes in mind
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Done guys
first of all happy independence day
With this year we complete 70 years of independence isn't it great guys
And reason behind starting such TS is i myself dont know yesterday the idea stuck in my mind and i started writing it and completed today ya i know only one part but second part too will post soon
i know its fully crap but still can't resist myself posting it
so plz kindly tolerate
Do tell me hows it
love u all
One more imp thing plz suggest some title for this TS😳
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
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