Akdha TS **MASKED MURDERER** updated part 4 (pg 1){ TS completed} - Page 27

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Posted: 9 years ago
Super Awesome Buddy😃
I was shocked by revelation of the murderer
Liked this mysterious style
Jalal asked for a coffee to Jodha, liked Jo's response😆
My God he waited for her for 2 and a half years😲
Loved the way Jalal respects her and her duties also fulfills his duties as a husband. So sweet but the way he asked her to hurry was naughty😳

Fantabulous story and scripting Avika👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb , marvelous up salima negative here umm its nice to see new but u skip date its not nice i want some romantic moment but ts is superb plz continue soul soonn
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved it ..u rocked in entire chappy...i were be more happy if u have given one more chappy on during their date...thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
mind blowing concept di👏
jo was awesome police officer
totally rocked😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 3 ...
Awesome update akka...
u made it more nd more interesting...
i felt bad for jodha she hubby didn't do right by asking her to choose nd also jalal could nt lead happy life...
my juss was shreff akka but it was nt right ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 4 ...
Amazing update akka so it was salima innocent face behind this mistry...
i really felt bad read her motive for murdering her sister as if there is no value for relation at all... nowadays we see it children killing parents or parents killing children husband, wife, brother sister friends killing that is so horrifying...
her to salima was same she wanted to achieve nd get what ruks have but she took wrong way to achieve it...
i didn't expect she will be behind all this...
and d way jodha was revealing everything was superb they way she was looking at jalal where she need to knw about his reaction was lovely nd also jalal was fully into her i loved both their self talk about their personal life ...
ahha... so jalal has got to knw about jodha to nice...
nw is was charmed behind her...
he is a lovely caring hubby...
poor love birds where interrupted in bad time but i love the way jalal supported jodha...
thanks for this lovely story nd pm akka...
waiting for more stories like this
sorry for late reply...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Avika, here is the BIG HUG for you 🤗🤗🤗 You here too choosing altogether different kind of Heroine who is divorced to keep up her duty. Exceptional thinking and a must wanted social revolution. 👏 Hats off to you for this! 😃


Aww ACP Jodha!! I like her so much. ❤️She looks extra smart in banner too. No much drama just straight to the points. So sharp.😳 Now eager to meet the famous business tycoon 😛


Ouch again body??!!🤢

'Her eyes roamed in all directions and fell on "HIM"' Ahem ahem.. 😆 I'm taking deep breath and calming myself 'her eyes still on him' I'm **gulping** down!!😛


With all ur permission ...can i proceed with the case now ,Sir ?? OMG! 🤣 You did it my girl.

Sarriffudin and crying!! 🤣🤣This is something I couldn't take it. 🤣🤣


No matter how much he irked her ...somewhere deep inside her heart she found him innocent . Awe After all he's Jalal! 😎

This Salim... how come he's so cool even after stealing the information?😲😆 MaanSingh is so obedient and co-operative co-officer. I like him. 😳

Its time for showdown Maan singh ,call everyone to station tomorrow , Adjusting her cap she sported a smile and left the room with a lopsided smirk . Oooh this time all sort of smirks from our Mirchi Jodha! 😛😛 But still I couldn't find the culprit.🥺 Okay going to read last chapter without any clue 😭



For a change... All bad people are goody goody here but who's constantly good everywhere turned out be the culprit! 😲😲 OMG! 😲😲 She killed her own sister! Hmm



Coffee??What??😲😲

No problem...we will go after ur shift then ...How arrogant! 😲😲

U didnt say no either Ms JodhaHow smart!!😎

Besides its just a coffee...no dates and all How cunning??!! 😛

What 3 years later only?? 🥺 She's still ACP? No promotion?🥺 It's not fair for a smart lady!😕 But she got the handsome man as her bodyguard cum driver.😉 I totally like it! 😛😃 For a change this combination of Tedha Jodha and flirt Jalal (?? at least for me 😆). Totally adorable combination. 😳

Thank you so much Avika for this different ride. Really enjoyed! 🤗 Now I'm waiting for Avika/Bindu's PM stating that Avika completed another FF/SS/TS/OS


Edited by Kalgi22 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Avika di 🤗
Superb update...
I so much adore this acp jodha...
And the murderer was tryly unpredictable...
Loved it!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Are you in an idea of giving epilogue? In spite of being very short this story is awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
yayay Avika I like to read this suspense story .😊 nicely written every detail with care. 😊 acp jo notice him during case and he blew away ms. jodha in one swift omg and the pappu ka dhaba 😆
why 2and half year leap 😉 finally they found their soulmate lovely.
waiting for season 2 I like jo in acp avtar keep continue
am I right or Am I right😛

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