Akdha TS **MASKED MURDERER** updated part 4 (pg 1){ TS completed}

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paru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

awesome chapter
mujhe ye banner bahut pasand aaya
i loved it soo much yaar
thanks for the pm

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.AkDhian.

@.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Loved the banner so so so much,akka😃

Pari in police uniform

Part 2 and 3..awesome and very interesting.I'm loving this mystery😃

Jodha's character is written so well..a typical officer,she is..brave,harsh and smart.

So Jo was married to Surya and Jalal to Atifa.

Curious to know who the murderer is..pls update soon😳

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

fabulous update
loved it ...
i think salima ya sharif will be murder & in the end u can tell who is murder?
cont soon

thnks for pm

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misty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Awwsmmm chappy my dear dii... U really gt ur brain wokd at dis dat to so hard... D way u presented everything ws soo prfct... I know its nt ja nd salim... Nd at dis moment really i cn thnk of only 2 people atifa sharif... Further don't know... Cz ur d mastermind... Hp joja fall in lv soon... Lvd it... Thnku fr pm nd update asap... 👏😳

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priyanka

@Priyankaakdha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Wow wow wow ...
Majja aa gya diii ...
Superb ...
Atifa surya 🤢
Poor joja .. Both r sailing in same boat ...
Chlo ek boat m ek sath ho jaynge ...
Jo came to know who is the culprit ...
Cant wait anymore ...
I think adhan is involved in all this ...
Dii or yhi mujrim hona chahiye

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

I've jotted down all the case notes Avvu

get me the call details of everyone between 6-8pm ,including their locations

All the call details must have taken you ages to jot down and plan 👏 Good work, darling!

Jalal's Brother in law ...salim Rehmaan is Not only Jalal' s BIL ..but also the owner of his rival company ,the same company which bagged the project deal ...and ...owner of the same private account

Btw, this Salim character seems to be the coolest of the villain lot so far! 😲

Does that mean Rukkaiya is the one who joined hands with rival company and selled the quotes ??

>> 🤔

No matter how much he irked her ...somewhere deep inside her heart she found him innocent .

^^^ Me too.. that too, a face like this cannot be murderer na..

U have to choose between me and ur Job Jodha...i dont want to see my wife running and chasing hard core criminals, neglecting my old parents . I leave it on u to decide ..who is ur priority ??

I don't entirely blame Surya for this... this is the nature of the world!

So there is a painful past for both, eh? 😉

No wonder Jo is already feeling the pinch!

she left the house which she thought was her's ,she left her husband ..whom she lost ,loved and respected her for what she was . But she was wrong.

Oh... so this was the house, she left?

Who is the culprit Madam ?? He asked straight which made her chuckle a bit . Its time for showdown Maan singh ,call everyone to station tomorrow

OMG.. already? 😲 Murder mystery is already solved🥺 pls don't let it be... want some more thrilling chapters...

ETA

I agree with Stuti's comment here

the small put of flashback of Jodha's ex-marital life, her personal agony while choosing between family and duty and the trace of tear in her heart while becoming aware of Jalal's unsuccessful marriage. It was very touchy and you put it at the very right place very intelligently.

PPS Unreserved on page 24😉

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

story getting interested am confused bw/w adham & sharif..continue soon & do pm

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

awesome chapter
you really work hard in this chapter
both jodha and jalal marriage doesn't work
atifa loves other guy
she is force to marry jalal
and surya is like typically husband
I don't blame him because everybody think like that only
this is reality
I really appreciate jodha
she chose her uniform
it was so hard for her to leave her husband
jodha deep down in her heart believe that jalal was innocent
and we all also know that he is innocent
I think sharif did that crime
it was my guessing but I know you reveal some one shocking may be
jodha solve the case after receiving all day call record
this was impressive
and I really looking forward how jodha and jalal fall for each other
waiting eagerly for next chapter which reveal culprit
thanks for pm