AKDHA SS : YOUR LOVE MAKE ME ALIVE... PG. 13(KS + important note)

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#91

nice introduction
waiting for your update

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr
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IMPORTANT NOTE </font>

<font size="5">Hey dearies plz its kindly request plz do comments your opinion so I got to know whether I will continue or not...all positive and negative comments are welcomed... So plz just give your opinion... Because I don't want to waste my time in which story no one interested... Sorry my intention is not hurt to any one it just a causal thought come in mind... So plz co-oprate...❤️❤️.</font>

Hemu 🤗
We really ove this story and waiting for the 1st chappy
and plz continue it
how this sily thought came into ur mind that we aare not interested? 😡 😛
plz continue it

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Dont know about others..but i seriously want u to continie this story Hemu .

Would like to read akdha's Romeo and juliet version.

Loved the character sketch

Update chap soon

Thanks for pm

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Good CS dear. ..

Continue soon...

Nd thanks for pm...

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avishimishra

@avishimishra

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

CS s nice Hemaxi di.jo jl love each oder bt dir parents r against.waitng fr chapter.thanx fr pm.di update ur oder stories also

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cute.ritu

@cute.ritu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Hey I thought u updated the first chapter

Anyways...good CS

Maina wants Jo to marry with Sharif 🤢

Plz don't give this story a sad ending

Thanks for pm

& update first chappy soon

Edited by ritupewal - 9 years ago

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Wow... Its awesome story...
Of course u should continue...
Btw i am lover of akdha n u known that...
Its different concept on forum n i like each n every line of story.. What the he'll why Mania want jo to marry bas***d Sharrif...
Omg both family is enemies.. Hate to each other at core...
So sweet Moti is caretaker oj jo n loyal taoward ja n jo..
Ooo shit baad main dono mar jaya hai...
Gadhi dono ko marna jaruri ha kya...
My ja want violence n u want inviolence..

Ab jaldi se update bhi de n others stort bhi

Edited by ANJIJHA - 9 years ago

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eshalli

@eshalli

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Superb dear
Continue soon
Thanks 4r pm

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ketaki1

@ketaki1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

this story line reminds me of romeo and juliet ... I love shakespeare and have read all his plays and stories literally a lot...I know you have righten it in starting but yet every time I read the plot it's like I know what can happen next...
I loved the concept and ofcourse I would love to read it from jo-ja point of view...I still hope that you change some bits and make it more unpredictable...
I would love to see how you will mold a pre-existing storyline and create something new...
looking forward to it...

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Too wonderful character sketch dear
U description for each character is too depth
Shocking was he loved shivani first but later on
That changed to jodha
Anyway it's too awesome
I mean the disclaimer are jodha jalal going to die ??
Lots of characters in the chappy
Continue soon buddy