NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 5~CHAPTER 10 - Upd 10th JULY - Page 91

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 155pari

@manasi di... i told her the same thing!😛


She knows that re... in fact tera comment dekhne ke baad hi unhe yaad aaya! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-


She knows that re... in fact tera comment dekhne ke baad hi unhe yaad aaya! 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi


absolutely right...😳

I too agree with you.Manu di are you still studying or complete your graduation.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi


absolutely right...😳

yep...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-


Haan re... coaching toh pakka jaungi... 11th se...

good girl😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-


She knows that re... in fact tera comment dekhne ke baad hi unhe yaad aaya! 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .rainy.

I too agree with you.Manu di are you still studying or complete your graduation.


still studying...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

I loved reading your reply. I was sooo happy that day! Now jaldi jaldi update next chap okay?! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepasub


Ah! gals. I'm back. 🤗 🤗
So touched by your thoughts for me. Really feels good that you enjoy my crazy rendezvous with words. It actually comes spontaneously either by reading something wondering like Lashy's or Janhu's plots or something I've read elsewhere.

Was caught up in a web of things. Now untangled myself.


Please forgive me. I will be a regular. But I need to catch up on things on the forum.

Yes, Yes, will update my story too.

But Lashy, what can I say. Your stranger has so intrigued me. I'm lost for words.
My shabdh bandaar needs to be replenished.

Will do so soon.

Until then gals.
Love to you all.
🤗


🤗 Hey Deeps... a pleasant surprise... yes... we'd love to hear from you more often!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

THE EPISTLE:

The full text of the message of Heera to the Rajput Heads, as imagined by me..

Your Highness, Maharaj...

This humble message comes to you,
From
The only heir left to protect Parnagarh, the land of valleys,
The region , rich with iron ore and lots of fields
Of barley, wheat, pulses and oilseeds
And villages that are alive
Gifted to Mansabdar Jagatprasad singh once
By the Shahenshah of Moghul sultanate.

And our ownership of the palace and the lands
Was continued and confirmed by a farman issued,
Since we fulfilled all the conditions
That were therein stipulated..
But...
Durga Bai, my protector, who was really a heera,
Anything she touched blossomed, anyone she treated healed,
Poor she, fought with her sword
To protect the Farman and save the title,
With no one to help her, all alone and in fear,
Alas, had to beg and plead...shedding her tears
The proud heiress relinquished her ego
To plead for her modesty ..
She lost her self
Together with her farman and finally her life
To the infamous and ruthless messenger Khalil.
Now at this desparate hour
I come to you for a favour
As she would say in her words
"Your mind is a weapon stronger than my sword"
Hence,
Please stand by me...
A lonely warrior with only a strong mind..
Please show your support for the great warrior Durga Bai
Who sacrificed her self, for the sake of her subjects
By helping me to bring the criminals to justice
Please speak up for Panagarh in court..

Thankfully Yours

Heera
The lonely fighter.


Karkuzhali.




Beautiful beautiful 👏 how lovely... this couldn't have been easy at all Periyamma... must have taken you a while to pen down...
not inspired from other poetry, but your own!
LOVE IT...

and awww you were in Swapnalok You remember I told you that when you posted that poem, it matched Chapter 10 perfectly... you'll see...

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