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.rainy.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#721

Here are a couple of Mahakavi Bharathiyar's songs for our hero and heroine..

Akbar:

"MangiyadOr nilavinile kanavinilidhu kaNden

Vayadu padinaarirukkum ILavayadu mangai

Pongivarum perunilavu ponRa oLi mugamum

Punnagaiyin pudu nilavum potra varum thotram

Thungamani minpolum vadivaththaal vandhu

Thoongaathe ezhunthennai paarenru sonnaaL

Angathanil kaNvizhithen addadavo adadaa

Azhagennum deivanthan adhuvenre aRinden!"

" In my dream, I saw her in the dim moonlight !

A young girl, of age sixteen, I guessed at first sight

Her face had the full moon's brilliance,

Her smile like a crescent , with a radiant countenance.

Like a lightning, she came before me,

Said "Awake! Look at me"

I woke up suddenly and saw her! Oh God!..how pretty!

I knew she was simply the Goddess of beauty!"

( My 'rough' translation of the Tamil poem)

Heera:

(When she is thinking about sending her messages to the Rajput allies)

"Akkini kunjondru kaNden--athai

Angoru kaattinil pondhidai vaithen

Vendu thaNindhathu kaadu-thazhal veeraththil

Kunjendrum mooppenrum undO?"

"I found a small spark of fire

And placed it in the burrow in a forest

The entire forest was burnt down to ashes

An ember is mighty enough, regardless of its size!"

( Found the translation from some blog)

Karkuzhali.

[/QUOTEthis poem is very beautiful aunty.I have been a regular reader of your poem and baby and babloo adventure.You are a gem aunty.I love all of your poem .Your sense of humor is too good.You and shyamala aunty are like sea of knowledge for me . I want to comment from long but being a silent member I have a habit of reading all post and never comment.

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karkuzhali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#722

Thank you very much dear, for your comments. I was also a silent reader of this forum for a very long time. Suddently, Shyamala Aunty's posts jerked me and dragged me into it. You are welcome to my world of remix poems, fun posts , sometimes serious ones also, Babloo and Baby and my other young friends here.

If you can tell me your name, I will address you by that one.

Yours,

Saraswathi Aunty/Akka/ Periamma/Daadima.

Originally posted by: .rainy.

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#723

Thank you dear ( Your name please?)

Red: I don't know how , may be when I search the google, something clicks which helps me to link it with the given situation..

Any way thank you again.

Yours

Saraswathi aunty.

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi
@ sandhya very well said ⭐️ akbar might be bitter but not pessimistic . Bitterness due to certain circumstances but temporary. While pessimistic is attitude. (I mean that's what I think).

All the poems/rhymes posted here are so AWESOME . Kudos to everyone who posted it. ⭐️ 👏

@lashy di , you know all of your characters so well. 😃
Btw when durga was attacked, as you said she was somehow aware that her end is near. In that chapter , when she was planning to escape, she thought for a second about farmaan and then said "it would be safe". I guess that is the hint of where farmaan could be.

@ aunty how can you find so apt n perfect rhymes ⭐️

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#724

Thank you Kausi.

I came across so many poems that aptly fit Heera and Akbar..Will use it for future.😃 Saraswathi Periamma.

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Wow so apt Periamma!! 👏👏👏 Your translation too so good!🤗

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.rainy.

@.rainy.

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Thank you very much dear, for your comments. I was also a silent reader of this forum for a very long time. Suddently, Shyamala Aunty's posts jerked me and dragged me into it. You are welcome to my world of remix poems, fun posts , sometimes serious ones also, Babloo and Baby and my other young friends here.
If you can tell me your name, I will address you by that one.
Yours,
Saraswathi Aunty/Akka/ Periamma/Daadima.

My name is Jyoti

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: al_pal
Interesting exchange of thoughts. Definitely Mr.Akbar is not pessimist , you need to have positive outlook to fight every fight of life , to see beauty where every one else fails to see. In my eyes he is nither pessimist nor bitter. If you are bitter because of previous experience, you might not help other , you might not feel their pain . If you are bitter , your outlook will be "let them suffer as I did"
For me he is just more guarded.

Oh oh Pallu... I was meant to make the hero a man with negative shades... and here, you've gone and made him sound so delicious😆

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Here are a couple of Mahakavi Bharathiyar's songs for our hero and heroine..

Akbar:

"MangiyadOr nilavinile kanavinilidhu kaNden
Vayadu padinaarirukkum ILavayadu mangai
Pongivarum perunilavu ponRa oLi mugamum
Punnagaiyin pudu nilavum potra varum thotram
Thungamani minpolum vadivaththaal vandhu
Thoongaathe ezhunthennai paarenru sonnaaL
Angathanil kaNvizhithen addadavo adadaa
Azhagennum deivanthan adhuvenre aRinden!"

" In my dream, I saw her in the dim moonlight !
A young girl, of age sixteen, I guessed at first sight
Her face had the full moon's brilliance,
Her smile like a crescent , with a radiant countenance.
Like a lightning, she came before me,
Said "Awake! Look at me"
I woke up suddenly and saw her! Oh God!..how pretty!
I knew she was simply the Goddess of beauty!"

How sweet...

( My 'rough' translation of the Tamil poem)

Heera:
(When she is thinking about sending her messages to the Rajput allies)

"Akkini kunjondru kaNden--athai
Angoru kaattinil pondhidai vaithen
Vendu thaNindhathu kaadu-thazhal veeraththil
Kunjendrum mooppenrum undO?"

"I found a small spark of fire
And placed it in the burrow in a forest
The entire forest was burnt down to ashes
An ember is mighty enough, regardless of its size!"

( Found the translation from some blog)

perfect!

Karkuzhali.

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

What to do Lashy! Don't blame me. Blame the time difference between IST and EST (and GMT?)
All of you start your interesting discussions only after I go to sleep, and when I wake up in the morning, you are in deep slumber! I have to wait till late evening to meet you all!😭 I once told Shyamala that I was thinking of taking up night shift on the computer and sleep during the day!😆
BTW I hope you have saved the payasam for me in the fridge. 😆
Periamma.

I'll have to go check in the fridge...😆 last time, I checked there was only 1 katori left...

but, where do you live, periyamma... if you don't mind me asking... 😊

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Whoever He is... I just love him Chellam!! ❤️😆

Oh i like this fan-gurling chellam.. 😆

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#730

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi
@ sandhya very well said ⭐️ akbar might be bitter but not pessimistic . Bitterness due to certain circumstances but temporary. While pessimistic is attitude. (I mean that's what I think).
Yes...
All the poems/rhymes posted here are so AWESOME . Kudos to everyone who posted it. ⭐️ 👏
>>>> 👏
@lashy di , you know all of your characters so well. 😃
Btw when durga was attacked, as you said she was somehow aware that her end is near. In that chapter , when she was planning to escape, she thought for a second about farmaan and then said "it would be safe". I guess that is the hint of where farmaan could be.
Hmmm... wait and watch... 😉
@ aunty how can you find so apt n perfect rhymes ⭐️