NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 5~CHAPTER 10 - Upd 10th JULY - Page 112

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Lashy.. I always like your banners and I know this one is not that good as I can't edit pictures well but tried, for not commenting on this chapter properly.

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Lashy, I like the chapter dear but don't know why I don't feel like giving a long comment but one thing I want to say is, it was amazing the way you showed bahadur and akbar's bonding. I mean, that horse knew that his master didn't want to go and stayed there. For me, best thing of that chapter.👏👏

That is totally all right 🤗 I understand!!! In fact, you tried to pen what came to your mind and even that's Squeezy hug worthy!

That innocent animal knew what his master wanted, when his master himself didn't know that he wanted to stay there, Near heera.. watching her, and her skillful soft hands.. but he was pretending to himself that he wanted to leave the place. Khan Sahib bhi na..

That part was very well written when he observed her palms and woah.. she was feeling conscious..She was affected by his presence.. by his gaze on her..

Thank you so much, Payal... I am so glad you grasped this point ... and penned it so well too... Bahadur is

For a flick of second, sahiba accepted the gift of Her Sahib. Trust me, me too was surprised when that girl took akbar's name but then it occurred to me that it was azeez.

For flick of second, she accepted gift with 'thrill'

even otherwise she would have accepted the gift - from anyone, actually.. but with Khan Sahib, she couldn't keep her emotions in check.. and that caused her a funny kind of grief!

But, Perfect answer by boys👏👏👏

😆

So, It begins..

She was restless because of Khan Sahib,angry because she's getting affected by his charm and confused, "what's happening??"

He was restless because of Harka Sahiba,angry because he's getting attracted to her divine beauty and confused, " what's with this girl, that has the power to break a wall of aloofness that I have built since years"

I loved this bolded line so much you can't even imagine!

PS: Chacha jaan, ajeez, akbar in haveli.., like that scene. They all started teasing their Sahib with their Sahiba's name.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks so much dear... thanks a lottt 🤗

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Lashy.. I always like your banners and I know this one is not that good as I can't edit pictures well but tried, for not commenting on this chapter properly.

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Lovely to nahi lag raha, but thankyou😆

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

Nahi , its lovely especially akdha...completely justifying title here .

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Actually, I chose this axe because I remembered khalil😆

Love you 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Lashy diii...beautiful update😊.It was all about Heera and Akbar's feelings and how they are trying to fight those feelings.

Yes dear.it was about realisation 😳

In the garden scene I thought atleast they would exchange hello hii if not talk but,both were busy avoiding each other😆.

Openly hello hi... Khan Sahib? 17th c? You sure? They might need a little more familiarity before they can do that.. 😆

Heera's maids...ufff always landing Heera and themselves in awkward and embarssing situations.The tit for tat was good.They needed one.I am liking this Azeez😳.He is funny and daring too.

Yes they needed it 😆 and Azeez lightens up the place... 😊

Akbar - Bahadur relationship is beyond me...god he understands his master so well😲.

Yes... but if you have seen people with close pets they'll tell you loads of stories like this!😳

Heera was angry at herself for liking the fact that the flower was from Khan sahib.But its normal to feel that way ,afterall she is only 16.she thinks its not right,may be...

She is angry for having been unable to keep her emotions in check.. I found a good example of her feelings.. I gave this example to Bindu too...

like for a moment, being voted the most special girl in the class... by the best looking boy! Whether you like the boy yet or not... that 'thrill' that one feels will be

Then suddenly she realises there was no contest at all - how embarrassing!

and you feel angry with yourself for having had such expectations!

I think the time is not right.With all protecting her people,her hometown guess its just a question of priorities.Her crying made me cry too.

Yes dear.. 😭

Were they talking about asthi visarjan??!! then its final goodbye...Durga😭.

Yes dear