NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 5~CHAPTER 10 - Upd 10th JULY

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1131

You are spoiling me, periyamma... just like an aunt would spoil her niece...😳

I tried my hand at this last night 11:30... to make something special for you ... trying to make up a poem for babloo's 'cant omputers cook' and 'whose akka is hukka' 😆😆😆 but failed miserably 😭

I think I shall stick to emoticons 😭

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1132

The 3 poems about her (comforting) hands... and her skills are beautiful ...

But the one that takes the cake is the poem about him walking in open fields beside the lions and how only he knows who he is. It suits him to a T...

beauty and tragedy make the best themes for poetry, they say... and I can find both in the poems you choose😊

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1133

Originally posted by: lashy

Thats a very plausible example for her behaviour...but what about Khan sahib when we will know about his past di? Without it he is soo confusing and very difficult to read.

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1134

Thank you Lashy for your nice words..

Babloo and Baby have a long train of admirers, the lead being Shyamala Peiamma.

Now you have also become one of them!😃😃

" Baby and Babloo

Do a lot of mischief

To keep the Forum alive.

Lashy , the story writer

Wanted to be a poet

But failed and apologised for her plight!"

( Slightly resembling "Jack and Jill")

Periamma.

Originally posted by: lashy
You are spoiling me, periyamma... just like an aunt would spoil her niece...😳

I tried my hand at this last night 11:30... to make something special for you ... trying to make up a poem for babloo's 'cant omputers cook' and 'whose akka is hukka' 😆😆😆 but failed miserably 😭
I think I shall stick to emoticons 😭

Edited by karkuzhali - 9 years ago

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1135

Periamma, you just nailed it again 👏👏👏

I am closed and concealed, hidden from heat

No one but me will see my true face

Specially loved this line ❤️

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1136

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Thank you Lashy for your nice words..
Babloo and Baby have a long train of admirers, the lead being Shyamala Peiamma.
Now you have also become one of them!😃😃

" Baby and Babloo
Do a lot of mischief
To keep the Forum alive.
Lashy , the story writer
Wanted to be a poet
But failed and apologised for her plight!"

( Slightly resembling "Jack and Jill")

Periamma.

🤣

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1137

Originally posted by: lashy
maybe she could still feel Durga around her..

Of course she could! 😳

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1138

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

For Omelets???😲🤣 Here you have the finished product right now...

Khayiye aur Khan Miyan ko aur spicy banayiye...👍🏼

🤣

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1139

And now everyone is laughing at her 😭 btw, periyamma ... my excavation lady who started excavating at London has already reached Rome... in search of you...

Chellam 😡 stop laughing - like Babloo does at Babykka