NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 5~CHAPTER 10 - Upd 10th JULY

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.AkDhian.

@.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1101

Originally posted by: lashy

And my excavating lady? 😭

Your excavating lady was too cute,di😆🤗

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1102

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Isn't this a better way to ruminate Khan Sahib????🤪

Or perhaps this...in a more comfy position in the blue robe with the sherbet goblet...

Sush...where are you???😆

Edited by Sandhya.A - 9 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1103

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

But he can't see the gardens na.. from where the whole chakkar starts 😆
and what is that food that chacha jaan has made? 😆 it doesn't look too bad actually .. or has he just brought fruits and nuts from bazaar...
no wonder Akbar is haler and heartier than all of them put together

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1104

Okay then authoress...let us view from this angle.

Have him seated like

and say that there is a french window right in front of his bed from where he can see the gardens...

But with Akbar Miyan in this pose, will Lashy be able to proceed with the story further.🤣

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1105

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1106

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
Okay then authoress...let us view from this angle.
Have him seated like

and say that there is a french window right in front of his bed from where he can see the gardens...

But with Akbar Miyan in this pose, will Lashy be able to proceed with the story further.🤣

I saw this... of course it's delightful... but, he looks like he's challenging someone 🤣

I know he's meant to be thinking... but such interactive retrospection?? 😆

Sandy your Gurus are definitely going to be "😲" tomorrow morning

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1107

not only lashy di , even i can't write anything as long as such ravishing pic keeps floating here ...😛

Reham Kariye Sandy Di...😆

Edited by cute.manasi - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1108

Lashy, I like the chapter dear but don't know why I don't feel like giving a long comment but one thing I want to say is, it was amazing the way you showed bahadur and akbar's bonding. I mean, that horse knew that his master didn't want to go and stayed there. For me, best thing of that chapter.👏👏

That innocent animal knew what his master wanted, when his master himself didn't know that he wanted to stay there, Near heera.. watching her, and her skillful soft hands.. but he was pretending to himself that he wanted to leave the place. Khan Sahib bhi na..

That part was very well written when he observed her palms and woah.. she was feeling conscious..She was affected by his presence.. by his gaze on her..

For a flick of second, sahiba accepted the gift of Her Sahib. Trust me, me too was surprised when that girl took akbar's name but then it occurred to me that it was azeez.

But, Perfect answer by boys👏👏👏

So, It begins..

She was restless because of Khan Sahib,angry because she's getting affected by his charm and confused, "what's happening??"

He was restless because of Harka Sahiba,angry because he's getting attracted to her divine beauty and confused, " what's with this girl, that has the power to break a wall of aloofness that I have built since years"

PS: Chacha jaan, ajeez, akbar in haveli.., like that scene. They all started teasing their Sahib with their Sahiba's name.⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1109

Lashy.. I always like your banners and I know this one is not that good as I can't edit pictures well but tried, for not commenting on this chapter properly.

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1110

Originally posted by: alffim

It's so sadly...
When a person is very young, the death rites are far from him. At all century people and religions are trying to come to terms with the loss of loved ones. When lose the most dearest, realize that all the rituals are very important.
At us believed that first year after the death of the soul is nearby.. And yet, person should not greatly grieve, we must be able to "let go (release)" the soul of the departed, or his soul will also be bad. But all rational thought is very difficult to perform ...

yes Zhanna... though for 1 year, we generally do not celebrate any festivals after passing away of a loved one...

on the 13th day, a feast is held... even sweets are made... everyone is invited (some keep this low-key, but many invite friends family and relatives too)...

I think it's more like a coming out of the immediate grief... and a sign of relief that their soul has reached heaven???