My First Crush.. Akdha ts.. Part 3 updated on 25/7 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Akdhalover6898

SUPERB TS DI

LOVED IT

JODHA IS A BUSINESS WOMAN😃

OMG HER FATHER HAD HEART ATTACK...AND SHE IS THE THE REASON OF HIS THIS CONDITION😲...SHE FEELING GUILTY BUT DON'T SHOW ANY EMOTIONS

POOR SHE HAVE NO ONE TO SHARE HER DILEMMA

JALAL IS CARDIOLOGIST😳

HE IS ALREADY MARRIED😲 WITH A GIRL HAVING GREEN EYES...I GUESS ITS RUKAIYA?

POOR HIM HE LOST HIS PARENTS

I DON'T UNDERSTAND ONE THING IF HE IS MARRIED WHY HE LIVE ALONE?

IS SHE LEFT HIM?

AS U DESCRIBED HE LOVES HIS WIFE

SURYA IS ALSO DOCTOR

JALAL MESMERIZED BY JODHA😳

WOW THEY SHARE EYELOCK

WOAH JALAL WANT TO COMFORT HER BUT REASON UNKNOWN TO HIM

JODHA IS ALSO MARRIED😲

AND HIS FATHER WANT THAT SHE WILL MARRY ANOTHER GUY

JODHA HUG JALAL WHEN HE TRY TO SOOTH HER😳😳...THAT IS AMAZING MOMENT

LOVED THIS STORY DI...THIS PART IS SWEET AND SIMPLE LIKE YOU

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Wonderful start laksh👏👏👏

Thank u payu...

I could see improvement in your writing. Better narration than Mr and mrs angel and Last mistake..

Also, the storyline is very intriguing.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Wow.. Really.. This is the best compliment...thank u babes...

Ohk so now about the chapter.. very nice chapter dear..

Both jo and jalal are married yet they are single, alone...

Hmmm... Single waiting for partners...

Why do I feel that rubble is jalal only and his wife is jo..😆

As they both get attracted towards each other when they are so in love with their partners, so I felt so..

Also, they felt that they know each other, on their very first meeting..

Y u felt that???? But wait for it...

Don't tell me they both had a plastic surgery 🤣🤣🤣

Oh god??? Plastic surgery.. I am not ektha kapoor baby...

No way...

or it's inspired from movie, 'Na tum jano na hum', bina dekhe pyaar aur jab mile to pehchaan nahi paye ek doosre ko..😉😛😆

No payu... U know I don't know that movie.. But I searched.. Nice movie.. Hritik did good.. But I don't like Esha much...No comparison between my story & that movie.

Anyways, interesting chapter it was.. and very nicely written..⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thank u sooo much...

Will be waiting for part 2!!😊

I will update soon...

enthralling chapter dii!😃

Amazing chappy Akka

First to comment on this chappy Di

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Amazing chappy Akka

Flashback is awesome

Rubble is jalal

He's married to ruks

So jo is not at all married

Great

How can jalal forget just like that

She became business woman because he likes to become business man

He became doctor as she wanna become doctor

Jo feels like she's cheated by him

Update soon Akka

Can't wait for next one

Suprb chapter.is jl is only rubble bt how can he mary ruq? Im too confused.dey maried in childhood.eagerly waitng fr nxt.thanx fr pm lakshmi di

nice

Superb update👏
Jodha and Jalal married in childhood by themselves
Rubble and Jodha story is very interesting
But at the end Jo goes to London
Jo takes Management to find him while I think he became doctor to find her in same profession
Jodha goes to Jalal's home and Ruks opens the door
Jalal is married to Ruks😲

Poor Jo waitied for him and he got married to RUks😭
Still Jalal was reminiscing his Tintin in his cabin😕
Awaiting for next chappy to know what happened to Rubble / Jalal