TS: The Third Person~ completed - Page 29

Originally posted by: pinu20

Amazing update buddy

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Loved the update. I am really feeling sad for jalal.

Originally posted by: piya58

Its good update dr
Is it really truth
I guess tht jalal angerly said her to die but really he did it intentionally ...
Update soon
Thanku

Originally posted by: divyaJA

oh god shocking update...
jalal killed her..i mean he give her tht pills..
update soon nxt part..
thnxx for the pm

Originally posted by: wanita

Gosh,..i really want to know the next chapter..😊

Originally posted by: alffim

Dear Stuti!
I really hope you will be write all more difficult, than simple: Jalal gave her the opportunity to eat pills and die. It seems to me, that not only Jalal but Jodha also have little love, because love is a big trust. Not blind love, not blind trust, but ... my feeling that Jodha is wrong. So far, for me, Jalal isn't confesses in the murder, he only he follows for Jodha with her reproaches.

I feel this type of end was quite predictable to you, and so you hoped something more complex.😉😆No it will not be that simple that jalal gave her pills and ordered he to die and she died... but... however, hope I will do justice to my thoughts. 😔

Jodha has not that much of unconditional love and trust on Jalal, as I feel in real life that does not exist so prominently. 🤣

Jalal has something more to say. Stay tuned.😆

It's have been cases in real life, when patients do not take the pills and hidden their, while not gaining amount to suicide.

But Ruaiya was not in a plan of committing suicide from first.

For me Rukaya is still the director for future of the indictment of Jalal... Thanks for the pm. I understand your employment, but I hope for a quick update.

I hope i will update soon. 😃
Later I will add still.

Originally posted by: eshalli

Superb chapter dear
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

Originally posted by: jasminegrewal98

Thanks for the pm dear, got so happy when I saw the pm for update of this story😃

Coming to the update it has of course left me with a few questions and curious thoughts behind Jalal's actions but other then that it was an awesome "Shot"!

Thank you so much dear. 😃

It's still unclear to me (like it is to Jodha lol) that Jalal wanted this, even Jodha said he was somewhat relieved after knowing about Ruks death, but in fact he is living an even worse life after Ruks death! Is it because of her words that she will always stay in between him and Jodha as Jalal stated he cannot desire Jodha from his heart as Ruks face comes to his mind each time or solely because of the burden knowing he has committed a murder? Of course this will be answered eventually but really you are making me curious to find out everything, this story is amazing👏

Well I will say both of the points you mentioned are responsible for Jalal's mental state. Had Jalal not felt guilty for her death, the last words of Ruqaiya would not have affect his later life that much. Oh thanks for liking this story. 😃

Both Jalal and Jodha have gotten themselves into a big mess, had Jalal not committed this murder perhaps he could have lived in some peace and maybe him and Jodha could have had a happy life as Jalal wouldnt have been burdened with the fact that he killed his wife! As for Jodha I just hope she chooses the best for herself. Her decision to marry Jalal in my view was not wrong as she wanted to help the man whom she truly loved, she wanted to take away his grief and comfort him and of course the tiny bit of her selfish heart wanted to be with her love but now after knowing the truth it will be interesting to see what both Jodha and Jalal do...will have to read the next shot to see if Jalal is truly a helpless case or not, but from your last reply looks like they will go their separate ways😔

In this situation even Jodha have a little scope to mend her life again.

I will like to ask you all what you would do if you ever have fastened in this situation.😆 And I will leave it entirely on your imagination.

Really this story is so complex haha which is what makes it really intriguing to read...really good job dear do update it soon😳

It's so much complex that it even confuses the writer time to time. 🤣 Thanks again for your comment dear. 😃