TS: The Third Person~ completed - Page 30

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

You know you have written such a painful story😭😭😭

You're reading it?😲

Ruq is evil that you showed. Jalal swings both ways, good and bad. Jodha is trying to be white but is slightly grey.

Don't call Ruqs evil please. 😆 She's hell irritating but 'evil' term gives the picture of post-leap opium supplier Ruqaiya of the show. 🤣 🤣 🤣

Jalal is to be blamed because he should not have married Ruq, and when he felt tortured and unhappy should have left her but he didnt. Things never change on their own, they need to be worked on.

You're right; but most of the people live the way jalal and Ruq was used to live together. 😆

Jodha should have given time before jumping into marry Jalal. She had sensed the relationship between Ruq and Jalal. Jodha head needs to be hit by a club so that some sense comes into it.

I know marrying him so fast after first wife's death was not a good decision. But what to do... for the sake of story... else how would she know about the truth. 😆

People do take wrong decisions flowing in emotion...

Jalal might have made Ruq death easier but still he did wrong. He has no right to do that.

Yeah. And that is striking him so much that he is unable to move on.

Jodha can still move on with a lesson learnt.

Let Jodha take her decision; I will stop the story before that. 🤣

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thank you so much Siya di.😳⭐️

Hey you are always welcome Stuti baby😳🤗

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Kemon achho Stuti di!!!😊

Ei cholche. 😆

Ohk, now I have read this TS all in a go...

Firstly, let me laud you for attempting this kind of a genre...human psychology is too complex, the action of humans and its subsequent reaction from life are way too difficult to predict and portray...👏👏

O my God! Thank you so so much.☺️

Since I have not commented on individual updates I'll just jot down all that I liked and all that I thought...

I don't see any well demarcated black or white character in this story...which is definitely a realistic approach...no one in this world is purely black or purely white...they are just varying shades of grey...in some the dash of white is more prominent, while for some others its black...Jodha, Jalal and Ruquaiya are three pawns chosen by fate, caught in the web of complaints, grievances and their more complicated emotions...

You wrote this part very beautifully.🤗 And this exactly synchronizes with my thoughts...😳

I am unable to blame anyone in particular, not even Jalal...that is where the twist lies...I know...it's just the constantly nagging conscience making Jalal revisit his actions, forcing Jodha to live in an ugly middle position.

I tried all along to set the characters in such a way so that none can be blamed... Jodha has been fastened in a nasty position without having any hand in all these. You have understand my perspective so perfectly. 😳

Was Ruquaiya already poisoned when she scribbled her last note? Did she realise she was drugged by Jalal when she wrote it? Or was it her hunch, that she's dying, that compelled her to scribble down a parting note? These are some doubts I have...

There is a part more in the story, where you'll get the whole picture.

This presence of Ruquaiya,in their lives, in their home, even after death, albeit invisibly, reminds me of a Gothic novel, Rebecca ,by Daphne de Maurier, somehow...but this is natural, I guess, for after a person's death we remember their essence more than ever...and in this case it's expected...somewhat...

I am really honoured to get such a review dear!⭐️

This tale provided me a lot of fodder for my thoughts. ..which is something I must thank you for 😳

I really don't know how to thank you for this wonderful review of my trial. ☺️

I'm really enthralled by your plot-selection and waiting to see how you end the tale...

Update soon...won't you?😳

Will try to update ASAP!😃

Khub khub bhalo theko...Adwitiya

Tumio bhalo theko. 😊

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Originally posted by: alffim

Dear Stuti!
I must have written isn't clear. I don't want to interfere with your vision, I on the contrary, tried to say that no matter what end you write, it will be very interesting. 😊
With age, I become weaker, I want happy endings, but for me the main priority - of the right of the author, his main plan. 😃

O man! I never meant to tell that you're interfering in my imagination dear... I know what you're trying to say; and I always try to give importance to the readers view too. So thank you for sharing your views. 😃😳
And yet it seems to me, it's my experience, when people aren't explained with each other, not made it clear, and this is again a question of trust, by this many problems and with time - an alienation. I don't know, Jalal has a blame or not, you are a master of intrigue 👏, but psychologically, it would be wise to immediately change an apartment and change of a maid.

Yeah change of maid is necessary. 😆 🤣

And thank you so much for loving my effort so much Zehana! 😳

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam