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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

If interested?? 😲 What are you saying man? 😆

Waiting for the rest 3/4rth 😉

after reading second part !😆

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Swarna

@Swarna_99

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#382

Stuti dii...🤗 🤗

jaise hi title padha...I knew the third person in JoJa's life will be none other than Rukaiya...But uska involvement aisa hoga...socha na tha.😲

A remarkable and extremely well written story !!👏👏👏

From JoJa's separation...Jalal's forced marriage...Ruq's not trusting him...her allegations...his dissatisfaction, agony and sadness😭...her illness...Jodha ka waapas aana as Ruq's doctor😃...her allegations...his pain, irritation and frustration😔...her death... to JoJa's marriage.

Loved every bit of it.

Fantastic piece of writing, which justifies the caption magnificently.⭐️⭐️

Though the story did not end on a very happy note(and also no chance of epilogue😒),But still falls in with the plot.

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: Swarna_99
Stuti dii...🤗 🤗
😲😲😲 You know what! I didn't expect you to really come up with a review so early!!! You are so so so good dear!! Thank you so much! 🤗🤗

jaise hi title padha...I knew the third person in JoJa's life will be none other than Rukaiya...But uska involvement aisa hoga...socha na tha.😲

😆 😆

A remarkable and extremely well written story !!👏👏👏

Thank you. 😳

From JoJa's separation...Jalal's forced marriage...Ruq's not trusting him...her allegations...his dissatisfaction, agony and sadness😭...her illness...Jodha ka waapas aana as Ruq's doctor😃...her allegations...his pain, irritation and frustration😔...her death... to JoJa's marriage.
Loved every bit of it.

So glad to see you loving this so much. I knew you will like it. 😉
Fantastic piece of writing, which justifies the caption magnificently.⭐️⭐️
Though the story did not end on a very happy note(and also no chance of epilogue😒),But still falls in with the plot.

Yes, there is no scope of happy ending in this plot. Though many of my friends want a happy epilogue... still it ends here only. 😛